I Have a Novice Village

GYD I am not greedy, I only have a small wish, to grow old together forever

Chapter 72 would be much better if you change it. Change it to a woman begging for the protagonist or making a deal with the protagonist. The plot remains the same and the method is changed. It will definitely be much better if it is more tactful. The original plot is really too poisonous and very intellectually depressing.

The author please do not type ( ) in the text and explain it at will. This will extremely affect the reader's reading experience! If you have any questions that need explanation, please post them in this chapter! Thanks

In fact, for those who quit after reading more than seventy chapters, it makes sense that the woman doesn't have many roles.

The story about that woman should be changed, it's quite uncomfortable. But it's okay if you don't change it, just write at your own pace!

He retreated with his sword, but hundreds of soldiers used their swords to show off! Use a knife! Several soldiers with swords

To put it bluntly, you are on an ancient battlefield, not a modern soldier. The pay is too high. If you start with a hundred households, you will only earn 70 taels of silver a year. You can win people's hearts if you are paid half as much as the normal treatment from the court. You just casually spend dozens or hundreds of dollars like this, making it seem worthless. It's prone to inflation. In particular, the ratio of the number of deaths between yourself and the enemy must be properly determined. You can't let the enemy die in the tens and hundreds of millions while your people die in the tens and hundreds.

It looked okay at first, but when I saw the plot where the woman took poison and the protagonist had to save her, I admit that I was disgusted. You have only met once and have no feelings for each other. Besides, they are seeking death themselves, so you still have to let them die! Slip away!

Before I see it on the shelves, let me briefly say that it is okay in the early stage, but it suddenly becomes poisonous after seventy. First, his father died at the hands of Wu Meng, and he cooperated with Wu Meng inexplicably, which made people instantly feel that the three views were not correct. Of course, this is a trivial matter. The second thing is unbearable. It is that woman. It is inexplicable. Oh my god. On the surface, the court system accepted a rebel. I was afraid that the court had no evidence to get you. I reluctantly explained that I thought he was a hostage, but suddenly he fell in love, and then he became an ice spirit? ? No? Your unfolding is like eating a meal and suddenly falling into a puddle of bird shit, thinking you would throw it away, but in the end you are eating more happily, accept your incompetence, and say goodbye!

😅 It felt good at first, until Qian Shanxue appeared, crazy and violent... Well, it was very abrupt, and then I read a few more chapters, and the more I read, the more strange it became! After I quit and thought about it, it felt like a glass of ice water in the summer. I was enjoying it when I suddenly took a bite of Sichuan peppercorns...😵 In short, the feeling of refreshment was gone and I felt a little disconnected

I don't understand what the protagonist wants to do at all. He doesn't work hard to improve his strength in the world of high-level martial arts. He develops some power in a high-profile way. His strength is not enough. Is it because he thinks he doesn't die quickly enough? And the exaggerated treatment, don't you know that wealth is not revealed? Don't you feel awesome when you are independent and special? People are stupid and have a lot of money.

Even if the time traveler is not his biological father, the time traveler has no feelings, but everyone in the world knows that he is your father. What is ancient times? Are you afraid that you will not die fast enough when benevolence and filial piety rule the world? You and the enemy who killed your father are so good at drinking and talking, haha, funny

The protagonist is really a novice. As a time traveler, he doesn't know anything. He feels like he is not a modern person. He has never read novels, anime or the like. I asked Lin Jiu at every turn, but the protagonist, Grandpa Goldfinger, always said, "You'd better not know this too early. It's not good for you." Such rubbish. I just can't figure it out. You're not writing about a mysterious world. If you know too much, you'll endanger yourself. You just say this all the time. That's not how you pretend to be bi. It makes people look angry.

The sun and moon in the pot, the universe in the sleeves, is it a support?

The author portrays the characters deeply. The protagonist is selfish and thinks with his lower body. The image of a villain emerges.

Let me tell you my thoughts. After reading about 50 chapters, the author Wen Ai is still okay. The main problem is that the novel does not explain the main plot. Your novel would be good if you explained the main plot clearly. What I mean by main plot is the ultimate goal that the protagonist wants to achieve! Whether to develop power and finally become an emperor, pursue the highest realm of martial arts, develop a certain power in order to protect yourself, or hope that the people of this era can live a better life, and have the freedom and ease in some novels, etc. But at the very least, you have to let readers know what your goal is, instead of like now, I have a big plan, but no one except the author knows what the plan is, so how do you make readers feel involved?

Chapter 72: Awesome, I can't stand it anymore, bye everyone

I think you must be very busy So this sentence Just read the first three words : I didn't expect that I would meet you again GLL

Zhu Jia Da Da's book is very good! I am a very picky person when it comes to reading books, so I am not recommending your book at Qidian. I have ordered all of it, which is a pity. Come on, we will always support you.

: Smiling does not always mean that you are happy. Sometimes, it only means that you are very strong, love yourself well, and miss you. Gyd

If you pretend to be a grandson for a long time, you will become a real grandson. The protagonist is a grandson among grandsons.

Loving you forever is my source of happiness.

Take care of yourself. After all, there is only one and only you in the world. Please think more about yourself in this life.

All ordered, please add some details

I saw a few more white hairs on her hair today... I used to make her angry because I was ignorant, but now I regret it.

After more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist has also gone to Qingfeng Mountain, and the martial alliance has also been exposed to how the original owner's father died. It doesn't matter who killed him or not, whether he wants revenge or not.

Qian Shanxue died on the spot. I never really liked the heroine in the early stages of the Battle for Hegemony series. In the later stage, the country cannot live without a heroine, and in the early stage, it has not yet risen. It feels useless,

The author's name seems interesting. . .

The writing is very nice, the characters are well presented and natural, the plot is well organized, and it looks very comfortable. I can't read many books now, come on! 😍

U·M·R, 2021314!