I Asked You to Be a Star Beast Master, but Who Asked You to Cut Planets?

I would like to give you some advice on the heroine issue. Nowadays, heroines are very sensitive and difficult to write well. Not only are they easy to hold back, but they also tend to take up the plot and make the audience's impression worse.

The author hopes that there will be no heroine. This is not recommended. It seems that it is not a brainless one. The heroine is too difficult to write. If you add a heroine, you must be involved in a lot of plots. The key point of writing this is not to lower the intelligence and the emotions of men and women. It is hard to say whether the author can write it well. I suggest you not write it or write something like a little fan girl to see how you feel. The charm should be written first. It is true that it is a bit scary. Many good books fail here. But everything depends on the author, so it's a good choice to give it a try. After all, many people like to watch it. Personally, I just don't have any brains about the harem. By the way, there are a lot of supporting female characters in the back, so it's hard to choose them one by one.

I have always felt that the star beast settings in novels also exist in reality. I heard someone mention tardigrades today. Isn't it a coincidence? They are basically consistent.

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Yeah 🙂, the flowers are finished. Quite pretty. The setting is not bad, it's quite eye-catching. It just doesn't feel good when it feels good. When it's awkward, it's not awkward. It's quite confusing.

Is Shennong there?

An uncontrolled star beast is useless even if it is powerful.

As the title says, it can be funny but it must be able to justify itself.

When I first talked about rebirth, I thought it meant that the protagonist traveled to a new world and was reborn. Remarks are also very distracting. If you are immersed in reading, and then you suddenly make a note, you will be out of this state. Notes can appear in the text in an appropriate way.

When will the author publish a book with over a million words?

You can colonize the interstellar world but are you worried about not having enough energy?

It's so weird, the narrative feels fragmented and a bit disconnected, the character design is too deliberate, and the plot connection is too stiff, just like a movie that keeps dazzling the storyboards, and I can't put it together. Let Shen Nong come to the rescue.

The dialogue is very childish, the plot is also very childish, and the filming is very slow. Alas, the author must be working hard.