Doomsday: Building a Nuclear Shelter a Year Ahead of Schedule

Chapter 7: The poison has escaped. Write a doomsday catastrophe novel. Just write about how to store supplies, how to build and develop shelters, and how to lead human civilization to the stars. You inexplicably create a hook where the identity of the protagonist is questionable, a wealthy and beautiful CEO, and a time travel to a year after the disaster. You shouldn't be complacent about what you call "the foreshadowing of a snake and a gray line", right? Technology-oriented novels are best not to involve changes in the timeline. Most people don't have the writing skills to explain themselves clearly, right? There are many other minor flaws. For example, the communication system made the protagonist look like a puppet. His villa was all monitored and demolished after being reminded by the system. The system did not tell the protagonist or ask if the surveillance was blocked. The protagonist did not expect that the person behind the surveillance had seen him building a space for robots in the room. It seemed that he had directly acquiesced that the other party did not know. Maybe the hook system you buried about the main character's life and origin is very exciting, but the ten or so chapters ahead of you are all spoiled. The dozens or hundreds of chapters ahead of you can be either foreshadowing or dull. Qidian readers still have some patience, but you don't want to deal with so many poisonous points. The author's writing style is barely passable, as if he came from 🍅 or scrap 🦌. Scan the rankings to see what systems are popular in Qidian.

What the hell? Is the author still in the second phase? Another identity mystery, another conspiracy! When writing about doomsday construction, just write it well, why add all that mess? Third-rate domestic drama? A little bit of everything? ?

I declare this to be the most outrageous book I have read so far in 2025

Reading the introduction and looking at the author's level is tantamount to asking him to quit, and he can't grasp it.

There are a lot of female characters appearing, so it's difficult to write them successfully.

I haven't watched it yet. Isn't it going to be another plot where the dog-licking protagonist is cheated on by his girlfriend, betrayed, killed, reborn, and returned to the end to take revenge? Or the kind that knows the doomsday in advance, collects a lot of supplies, builds a safe house, battles wits with a group of neighbors, becomes the god of war in the community, and then collects beautiful women everywhere. Many writers who write this kind of apocalyptic disaster novels use the same template, with the same plot, but just change the names of the characters and create a new book.

It's hard to write about a shelter type. Let's observe and read for a few days first.

It feels okay, I hope the author can hold it steady, come on!

Doomsday system streaming novel, the appearance of the girl is a bit unexpected, but it is very enjoyable to read, please support it

The pace is fast and not boring. I am worried that the author will not be able to grasp it in the middle and later stages. So far, I feel good about it.

Damn it, the brain was dug out, put in an eggbeater and turned for 15,000 rpm, then vibrated in a oscillating polisher for 48 hours, added with nitric acid and dehydrated ethanol, reacted at low temperature, then centrifuged and put back. Ignition!

I don't know what you wrote. I don't want to read it before the end comes.

Hurry up and update, otherwise you will lose your book! ! !

Hahaha, if you don't correct me too much, you'll be happy and it'll be over!

The writing is quite smooth, but the plot develops too fast. The author needs to slow down and settle down.

A good post-apocalyptic novel, but it's a pity that it's system-heavy

At the beginning, the title of the book is similar to the book "The End of the World: I Built the Supreme Shelter One Year Ahead of Time"