American TV Series: Beginning with Spartacus

Currently, I have read Chapter 106. The comment is that it is better to watch the original drama. At least the original drama has benefits. In the early stage, forget it and keep it the same as the original drama. I have commented on it before. But after you put it on the shelves, it's still the same. It's just adding a protagonist to experience the original plot together, which is unacceptable. I originally thought that the author would be different in terms of war after it was released. Now you are not outstanding in the three aspects of fighting, strategy, and war. What do you think? Author, half of your book is ruined. Please revise it quickly. And why are you afraid of failure in your first book? You can practice writing skills.

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If you have a system, why should you be a Spartan? You can take down a certain noble lady and you can return to being an ordinary person, or even higher.

In Rome, as long as the mixed marching guard is the commander-in-chief, he can justly kill the king.

Use depseek to evaluate your novel. There are problems everywhere. With this quality, historical accumulation, social cognition, and human insight, I dare to write a novel with this kind of subject matter and perspective.

Such useless strength is rare. He has a golden finger, can fight with a little Karami, and can use weapons to defeat himself. He is also the younger brother among the losers.

What a prank! A twenty-two-year-old has to start training before he understands that fighting is not just about physical attributes? And a twenty-two-year-old is still saying that it is the time to grow... A brain that cannot understand

What the hell are you writing? No wonder no one reads it. The comments are not very interesting.

The writing is pretty good, but it's just not that cool. It's the same if it's turned on or off. It's a slave's running account.

Did the author write it from memory? Or what should I say? The logic doesn't match up when he writes it. After forcibly cheating on the protagonist, he is still in the same situation. On one side, he is supported by a group of nobles, but on the other side, he is still as poor as before. He doesn't even have water before praying for rain.

Why are the skills in the previous world restricted and the rewards given to the protagonist not to be used whenever he wants? If there are restrictions, then the protagonist is just like a puppet. The rewards on his body are locked at any time and he cannot play freely. What's the point of fun? There is no Dragon King bloodline, and the fun of riding a dragon is gone. If it's not fun to read the fan fiction, then it's better to read the original work.

I once had an idea that the protagonist had the power of Zeus and only had a few powers and skills at first, such as changing the size of the place, and power. Then, the women who appeared every day got them all pregnant and gave birth to your own twelve main Greek gods. After turning the world upside down, you would naturally have the power and power to rule the world and all the gods. Then change the map and continue to obtain other powers.

. . . It's a bit too plot-oriented and not interesting.

Pig's feet are too rubbish and not strong enough

Can read, write and do math. Were they still used as gladiators in ancient times? 🤫

I don't understand why I chose Spartacus's route. Either I can't write it myself or I really don't have a sense of the overall situation. First of all, many of the gladiators in Rome were barbarians such as Gauls and Thracians. If you go south, you will make it impossible for them to go back. You don't think they still have fighting ability. Secondly, Rome was still in the period of the Republic. Crassus successfully obtained military power from the Senate, and Pompey escaped before blocking the road. He could survive with the gladiators in a short time. If he had to go to Sicily to seek death, I don't know what to say. At that time, Sicily was an important grain-producing area for Rome, which would only make the Senate agree more quickly to Crassus's suppression of bandits. Finally, before he became the leader of the rebellion, Spartacus was just a barbarian who only fought wars without reasonable planning. Are you a barbarian if you choose his route? Can't you look at the problem from the perspective of a modern person?

Gladiators versus Roman regulars, unarmored versus armored, disorganized versus disciplined troops, the World of Warcraft system is cheated, otherwise the chance is too small

This guy must be sick. He's pretty awesome. Nothing has changed. You hate Catelyn, but there's no need to let his brainlessness get to the next level. The Holy Light needs to be spread, but you chose the most laborious way to spread it. Save Eddard and show yourself to everyone in the capital. Your Holy Light will be invincible. Snow returned to the North to deliver the body, and you can also make the Blood Wedding happen. How much do you hate Catelyn and Robb?

You finally updated 😭

What I mean is that the novels that are updated now, and the novels explained by the author don't know how long they will end.

I started having diarrhea after it was put on the shelf.

In the future, can you open a novel about the world of Naruto that cuts out the girl's Uzumaki Kushina and the girl's Uchiha Mikoto?