Beginning to Become a God from Sky Island MC

When you see Chapter 6, you have to pay close attention to the details. Are you from ancient times? Don't be misled by the TV series, what the hell? How could they throw rotten eggs, rotten vegetable leaves, etc. On prisoners? How could their living standards be so good?

It's basically okay, but some details look disgusting. For example, in order to test whether others can use a wooden ax, they directly let the so-called junior brother use it. Whoever can't try it will try it on someone who he may not be able to beat and dare not kill. The protagonist suddenly feels stupid. I'm afraid that many people will recognize me, so I have to go to a mountain gate where a lot of people miss me and become a cheap junior disciple.

This protagonist has never stopped playing since his debut, and does the image of the protagonist have to be that of an unkempt savage? The whole mask won't do. The protagonist's identity is most likely the leader of the rebel army, and he was ignored after he became a little bigger.

I saw the latest chapter, Minecraft. After playing it every day for several years, there is still a shortage of supplies. Author, have you ever played Minecraft?

To be honest, it is still difficult to surpass the original version alone, and those mods must be added to achieve better development.

Throwing things does not recover this bug. To ignore is to ignore. You have an MC world that you can't develop. It was just developed a little bit, and then the whole world was destroyed, and then the map was changed. Finished changing the map. Become a little guy again. You give me the feeling that you have never played Minecraft.

You are a martial arts or fantasy person, you have dragons, and you use the common sense of non-demon, does this seem a little bit IQ-problematic? A dragon lives in a high-pressure seabed, and your scales explode when they encounter hot and cold water, or 100-degree water. How do you live in the sea, or do you live on an island? Is this a western dragon or an eastern dragon? Extremely speechless

The women who died next to the protagonist were all beauties. I suspect the author had some special quirks.

The failure of this novel is that it is not exciting enough and too frustrating.

That's too bad. Who can show off such a miserable start? Is there only one grid in your world?

The beginning is too deliberate. The monsters that can be spawned with a high probability have to wait until the end. However, the items that are likely to be dropped will be 100% dropped in one chance.

Then the bunker's plug-in also turned into a savage. .

To be honest, it was so boring to write. . . But not ugly. So dry!

I started writing randomly when the protagonist moved into the Endless Icefield. The writing was messy, and the map changes were awkward. Why did I write so much about the protagonist's original identity? The map was changed without any explanation.

Why is it that more than half of the protagonist's words are filled with exclamation points? Is he hyperthyroid?

It's too dry, and the map changes are too abrupt. It feels like the map is changed without explaining anything. It's too late

Dear author, here are some suggestions for you. For a young man living in the 21st century, some things are too impactful. I suggest you grasp them. The part about demons enslaving humans made me feel the deep malice of this world. Pokémon, why do I think of Pokémon? The world isn't supposed to be like this. Whether it's a demon enslaving people, or a human being enslaving demons. Please forgive my crystal stupidity. I don't know what you want to do. But as a middle school boy, I would never allow this to happen. Well! The world isn't supposed to be like this. But what can I do. I'm just a middle school boy. I can't even fix my own faults. I suggest you improve your writing style. Enhance reading experience. We should strive to do something to make ourselves have more. I won't talk anymore, I'm going to correct my shortcomings. Although I am only a middle school boy, I am a middle school boy with dreams.

Starting dog. Not sure. Ah, tell me why. Start playing the game. Later, change the map invincibility element. . Princess. Senior sister. Junior sister. Junior brother Shota. Fish demon. Change the map later. Mc. Having gems = invincible. You can't add mcmood to the main world of one of the two worlds.

Yes, there is finally a book about killing girls to prove the truth. The protagonist kills all beauties.

When I thought the protagonist would be in the mountains, and finally revive the sect and become an immortal. The protagonist suddenly went down the mountain to explore the world. . . When I thought the protagonist was going to save the female character, I was dead. Just when I thought the protagonist would turn the tide and save the world, the protagonist suddenly ran away. When I thought the protagonist was going to become an immortal, fantasy suddenly appeared. It's a mess, up and down. It is completely impossible to predict what the author will do next. I am also a third-rate writer, but I can make a deal with this author. I'm worse than a new recruit 😭

It's rare to have this mc support me, but I feel like there is no main line. Is there no outline? 🤫 Can the author write it and put it on the shelves?

What do book friends think? What do authors think?

It's a pity. After reaching the Demon Festival, I can't stand it any more. I just want to see how you use MC.