Hyperdimensional Player

The author, you are not a young man but a rookie. Your last book was not as bad as this if you copied the outline from the previous Lord of the Abyss. You have been like this since the Traveler and the previous book. In the first book, let me tell you a joke, all kinds of powerful people appeared in the early stage.

First of all, let me say that I am almost up to speed on the updates. I found it very enjoyable in the early stages, but the further I read, the more bland it became. The first world view feels too narrow, and the concept of God feels too weak. Later, because of the various worlds, I always feel an unpleasant feeling. Then there is the concept of this dimension. It feels very high-level at first, but later it feels a bit stretched, and it cannot reflect this strong style. There is also this plug-in. Now that you have it, you have to experience the fun of this plug-in, but the later plug-in seems to be soy sauce.

The author's writing of this war is really ugly. First of all, let's look directly at the historical battle situation. There is no protagonist of the British Legion. The Romans won this battle by themselves. With the protagonist of the Legion joining in, they still achieved historical results, and even won very difficultly. Later, the rebel armies clashed with each other and turned into a bad war In the specific description of the battle situation, all those famous generals have become mere NPCs. Attila, the whip of God, can't even put together two sentences. If the Roman Protector didn't know better, he would have thought he was the captain of the front-line shield formation. Moreover, there is no description of the battlefield environment in the whole process. From where on the battlefield did the protagonist rush in? There is no specific terrain for the group battle. The generals just have a few fonts on their bodies. The more they look at it, the more they look like online game NPCs Third point, as a fantasy novel, a battle is completely written as a real battle. This is a battle of national destiny. Both sides do not even have a priest or a mage accompanying the army. You want to say that reality is suppressed. How did the church and the protagonist put mages into the battle earlier? Moreover, as the existence of conquering and destroying various countries, and Rome, which has a profound heritage, both sides did not have a single mythical artifact. I originally thought that this war was the last battle of the afterglow of mythology, various magical objects, artifacts, and the final explosion of the glory of the gods. , The result is a boring hacking and hacking mode

I also tried poison. The game text of Western Fantasy is cool and easy to read. I think the logic is self-consistent, but I feel uncomfortable when I read it. There is no strategy, only killing monsters and upgrading by changing the graphics. It is refreshing for the sake of fun. There are many poison points and the plug-ins are also outrageous. The big world view of low magic and low martial arts is overthrown in a few dozen chapters. I must be rushing to become a god in the future, because the protagonist becomes stronger too fast, and the current combat power setting is a bit overwhelming.

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Although the author's writing style is very stable and the plot is quite interesting, it cannot support digressions and the proportion of expository text is too heavy, which even affects the advancement speed of the plot. Moreover, there is also the problem of repetitive word count (as mentioned above, I will repeat it in another way below). As a result, this book is not that smooth in terms of look and feel. I can only say that it is almost at the level of grass jelly, which is considered to be top-notch food.

In the recent world at the end of the Tang Dynasty, Futu is moving again. The beggar takes three oaths, and the world is peaceful. Wow, the protagonist is so great. Yue, don't instill self-movation there. Just push it horizontally. It's so messy to move, let alone not moved at all. It's so embarrassing that people's scalps are numb. The first world is right. And after you've pushed the first world, you still want to fight for hegemony in the East. Just be honest and engage in high martial arts.

The skin is not white enough

Later, even the Monotheistic Religion and the Pantheon Religion were not surpassed. It didn't feel very good. Later, when it developed into the third human body, it began to overwhelm the protagonist. It was so weak that the so-called feedback to the readers was just a comment.

It turned out to be a dream, 128 words 💀💀