We Are in Hogwarts, What the Hell Is the Prehistoric System?

I just read the first chapter, nothing else to say. This issue of talent has never been said in the original work. Either it can be awakened, or it is a squib. It didn't say when the magic riot talent is good. Even the author's secondary design cannot use Neville as an example. Although Neville awakened late, his talent is not bad.

Adaptation is not random editing, and second setting is not random creation. Many fans write wildly and without considering the logical fit of the original work. They call it innovation, so why not write original works?

The frequency of this golden finger is too high. It has too many abilities and is not urgently needed, resulting in no sense of reality.

Is it necessary? I feel like it's hard to say whether the wizards in Harry Potter can fight a gunship head-on.

A mere Voldemort actually uses the prehistoric system. Is he worthy? To put it mildly, if he is caught off guard, Xiao Li's flying knife can teach him how to behave.

It felt fine in the front, but when the owl flew the sword, it felt really weird. You can fly with a magic wand, or develop a talent that allows an owl to be ridden, or a talent that is linked to wind control to achieve the flying effect. In the end, I didn't choose any of them. I had to make a cool operation of an owl flying a sword. Firstly, the painting style is not good-looking, and secondly, how can the owl fly when the owl is stacked together? Maglev? Thirdly, why can owls stacked together bear the weight of a person? I haven't seen any fusion skills that the owls in Harry Potter can use to make the owls flying together look like the same person? 😓

Did the author write without reading any information? Many of the settings are off the mark.

How should I put it, the setting is pretty good, but I feel like some of the plots are too intellectual. For example, if you step on a bunch of owls to fly, you have to move your wings no matter how you fly. The owls are too close to each other and cannot spread their wings. If they are too far apart, you can only step on one with one foot at most. What is the use of the remaining owls? Can two owls make him take off? Anyway, it feels weird. In other words, for example, meeting Ollivander and buying pets, one from the weapon refining sect and one from the beast mastering sect, the rewards are already among the top ones. So, how should the rewards be given when meeting Nico Flamel and Newt? The author carefully organizes the outline and ideas, and does not think about writing step by step.

The theme is good, but there are too many psychological descriptions, dialogues, and systems. The plot seems incoherent and a bit watery. Although it is a free chapter, a person shopping in Diagon Alley and meeting various people can go on for eight chapters. It is the same as not watching it. Every time you meet someone, the same formula is used, "When you meet someone, the system prompts, Mental activities, talking, mental activities, taking talents, psychological activities, description of talents, mental activities" are all exactly the same, and then the content written by the author is a bit unclear and does not look like a veteran. The writing needs to be practiced. Generally speaking, it is slightly poisonous. It looks like a practitioner. If you mind, don't read it.

Abandoned, the author loves women's clothing so much that he could write two chapters about it.

Has it been rewritten again? Why do I feel like where I have read this book?

There are no big poisonous spots, but there are constant small poisonous spots, which makes it a bit difficult for me to see. (However, it is also possible that the author's writing style does not suit my senses)

Intelligence is severely disturbed. Reminds me of the words "Purple River Cars" all over the mountains and plains. Poison

I don't like the system's turbulence the most! Doesn't it really show that I have a low IQ? Still teasing readers

The idea is quite good, but Honghuang is a bit of a supermodel. If it were a fantasy, it might be just right.

What about the author? So many people are complaining about the settings related to magic riot time and talent. Why don't you consider changing it?

I feel that the chapters after they are released are not as spiritual as the previous ones, and they fall into the routine of upgrading and fighting monsters. Magic is the power of knowledge. The protagonist can use the prehistoric knowledge to research the 2.0 Version of the magic world, further study and explore his own characteristics, and then use this knowledge to promote changes in the magic world. Otherwise, with the current rhythm, sooner or later "the world is invincible and the enemy comes from the sky" and he becomes the savior.

Like many HP fans, their combat power progressed too fast. In the early stage, they reached the ceiling of the HP worldview, but their participation in the plot was extremely low. In the end, they could only introduce other external forces to forcefully improve the worldview, completely ignoring the fact that the extraordinary power of the HP worldview is actually on the decline.

From the words about the prehistoric world of the system, we can see that the author's literary foundation is really quite profound. It's very interesting. From the author's attitude and behavior towards the three little ones, it can be seen that the author has a good character, which is definitely not what Asan can understand. The only shortcoming is that the cheating is too fast. I was invincible in the first year and started to fight against the final BOSS. Quirrell, the easiest player to defeat, has not been offline until now. Although it is fun to watch the masters fight, I feel that many lines that can be written have been abandoned. The protagonist, the master of Muggle literature and the wizarding world, wrote a book with Lockhart. There is no rivalry, there is no Pokémon plan for the protagonist, there is no craze about the evolution of magical animals into mythical creatures, there is no research on potions to save squibs and werewolves, there is no cure for blood-cursed orcs, there is no invincibility in the world, social status is unknown, there is a tendency to mess with a good book.

The writing is quite good, but the volume is too small. But in the current situation, has the author cut it?

The world of Harry Potter doesn't work, only American comics do.

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Um. The idea is good and the writing is okay. The plot design is not very good.