Starting Out as a Manga Editor

In fact, we can directly write that the protagonist has always been a woman, and there is no need to be so awkward. The characters we choose in MMORPG, QQ avatars, etc. Are always female characters. We understand the mentality of raising a daughter. The protagonists of several works have always emphasized that they are awkward, and it is really unnecessary. I think it would be good to set a character who, although he was a man in his previous life, actively integrates into women in this life. Or it would be good to simply set the character as a female character in both past and present lives. There is really no need to be so awkward all the time. After all, we all understand that as long as the sides and content of the book are from a male perspective, it is a male video work.

The biggest problem is that the protagonist is very poorly set up, and I don't see any personality charm. I understand that I wanted to use the first few chapters to pave the way for a suitable reason for the protagonist to draw comics, but the direction was wrong. Breaking down the three problems faced by the protagonist, one refused to revise the draft, two delayed the draft, and what is the protagonist's attitude? Spread the flames and go... Go. From a reader's perspective, you raised three questions and then didn't solve them. From the author's point of view, you have established a first impression of the protagonist's character as incompetent and evasive. Is it really impossible to deal with it? The first person who refuses to revise the manuscript can, for example, not publish it in the magazine. Of course, you can find many excuses, such as big names, pillars, and management, but this is a novel, and what readers want to see is a happy and vengeful resolution of problems. There are more ways to cope with delayed drafts - these can all be used to establish the protagonist's personality. No matter what kind of person you are, be it resolute, strong woman, or dark-bellied beauty, in short, the core is "the one who can solve the problem."

To be honest, I feel it's a bit too watery. I originally wanted to look at the career line, but the daily line feels like it takes up too much space, and it's a little watery in itself.

Brothers, the author needs to identify the one he likes and don't be too harsh. Anyone who has a monthly vote should vote for it. It's not easy to find one that suits your appetite. I'm really afraid of losing it 😢😢😢

Personal opinion... I feel like the author's balance between daily life and the plot is not very good. Every time when his career is booming, I really want to see the progress of the plot, but the author is always writing posts... I originally liked watching the whitening, but I wanted to skip it. I hope the author can advance the plot more.

Female video? You don't even have the transformation template anymore, right? 🙂

The way I wrote it a few years ago has changed again. I'm very curious that the author wrote another shrine and super power after Gu Xue's book. I didn't read it because I didn't feel comfortable with the subject matter. However, I feel that the writing power has not improved much, and even regressed a bit. The interaction between women and girls is more deliberate than before, and it is boring. It's not that boring, but it's just boring.

Ever since Tang Yao and Li Xue had a kiss, they started to post for the sake of water. If you push the plot, you will focus on the plot. You can post a large part of the plot to promote the development of the relationship. Now I am posting for the word count of water. Now when I open the update, I will talk about the plot in a formulaic way, and there will be meaningless posts in the middle. As for the plot, I was anxious to see how it would develop, but suddenly I wrote about who and what they were wearing when they entered the office. After that, I started posting. Many people have said this in the chapters. Too many plot posts affect the viewing experience. Does the post in the middle of each subsequent chapter contribute to the plot or promote the relationship between the two? You haven't changed it yet

No kidding, I really like your writing. I have read the game book three times and the animation book more than five times. Gu Xue and Miss Mihara are still my favorite CPs. Although I am sorry that I read pirated copies, I will slowly make up for them when I have money. I discovered this book recently when I wanted to review the anime one. When it was released, I saw that the author said that this was the last version of the novel. After taking a look at the results, I realized that it should indeed be the last one. But I am still very sorry, because I really have never found another article that is more appetizing to me than you. But it's understandable, after all, the results are indeed not good. If the author changes his mind in the future, I will support the author!

I hope that I will continue to write about this subject in the future and don't forget our old fans.