Back to 1983

It's interesting to watch, but there are two problems. The first is the mouth. When I first met my brother-in-law from my previous life, I shouted out on the spot. My wife from my previous life also called him my wife from afar when they met. It felt puzzling. I could understand the mouth once, but how could I understand it twice? The second thing is the opening chapter. After the male protagonist went bankrupt and owed debts, his wife ran away. The two sons also resented the male protagonist because of his bankruptcy, and then they also ran away regardless of the male protagonist. From my perspective, I can't quite understand how someone would go to find his wife in his previous life after being reborn. Unless the author changed his character later, it would not be a good match, even if they did get together. So will the children born in the future still be white-eyed wolves? This is another problem. In the previous life, I could already see that my wife was not capable, and neither was I. My two sons were taught to be white-eyed wolves. Are they going to make the same mistake again? So what's the point of being reborn? Do you want your son to remove the oxygen tube so that you don't go bankrupt when you are old? The best way to deal with it is actually to relive your life. The past of the previous life is over, otherwise it will be really difficult to deal with this problem. I didn't write about my wife in my previous life in detail, but I can also tell that this is a man who split up when disaster strikes. He is still running around in his seventies and eighties, and he is not well-raised. Of course, there is nothing the author can do if he likes this one. So far, apart from these two issues, my writing is pretty good.

The first new book, it is worth everyone's investment and is updated steadily.

After reading more than 30 chapters, it is already a rare good book. I haven't been able to read Chapter 5 in recent years. Two advantages: The plot logic is reasonable. The era and local characteristics are well described. Two areas need to be optimized: 1. The protagonist's words and deeds do not fully reflect the posture of a time traveler. Instead, they are like a kind of memoir, a memoir after repairing regrets. For example, when I go back now, the solidified IQ, intelligence, observation brought by experience, thinking mode and the thoroughness of instant solutions to problems, as well as the smooth implementation are already conditioned reflexes and natural. What needs to be paid attention to is to pretend to be young, and the protagonist behaves really childishly and awkwardly. Although you are superior to others when you were given the environment and age you were in back then, isn't that what you should be doing? There is nothing to show off. In those days, you could only score 2 or 30 points on a 100-point test paper. Now you can know all the answers at a glance, and then it is normal to score 8 or 90 points carefully and quietly, instead of racking your brains and getting 6 or 70 points and feeling proud. When the postman left, he said that he wanted to give him money to buy Gastrodia elata. He was polite and refused, and the protagonist was still thoughtful. Anyway, it didn't matter that he was the eldest brother-in-law. Isn't it difficult for people at the lowest level of society to develop this kind of ability? 2. The description closely follows the plot. There is no need to write down irrelevant things, or abbreviate them. Instead of keeping a running account, write down everything, which is confusing. The third-rate song makes people disgusted with "The Whole Mountain is My Hunting Ground", the second-rate song makes people smile knowingly, "Rebirth of the Wild Age", and the first-rate song makes people unable to feel "Know or Not". From the perspective of my amateur readers: the writing style and plot concept are roughly at the level of a student composition and have not yet reached the level of a writer.

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Please ask the author to cut down on the dog-licking scenes. A friend of mine felt uncomfortable watching it.

Not bad, good writing, concise language, smooth writing, good writing

It's really good, very tasty, it can be said to be food.

In the 1980s, having money meant paradise and pure land, while having no money meant poverty. Especially in rural areas, not only are materials scarce, but transportation is also very inconvenient. Even if there is something, it may not be sold at a high price. So, it was really difficult to make money in those days.

At present, it has been ranked among the new books. Please read it every day and click on the latest chapter. The number of investors is still a little short of 100, and now the return on investment is huge!

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Well written. Come on! I know that the author must have considered the dialect issue in the text, but I still want to say that there should not be too many dialects, because I used to read books about Shanghai dialect and I was very unhappy with them. I gave up before I even finished the new issue. In addition to being well written, this book is also understandable in dialect. I'm from Hunan

This sentence is a bit uncomfortable. It turns out, the result is like this, because, I feel. I wish I had two words and one comma.

When will the author release another chapter? Reading two chapters a day is not enough, so I'll give you all my votes.

Anyway, carefully write down each character's clothing, clothing, image tools, main terrain and scenery. The characters in this book are vivid and have a sense of immersion. When you read this book, you can feel the breath of life. When you read the book, you have a sense of immersion. A book that brings characters to life makes more money than writing on a whiteboard. It can stand the test of the market. Reading without a sense of immersion is meaningless. If you don't write it on a whiteboard, it's not easy to get good grades. Unless you don't care about your grades, writing a book is just for fun.

Those who didn't know this sentence in the first chapter might have thought that Gu Long wrote it to defraud manuscript fees. .

It's been over a hundred chapters, and your father is still working hard in the coal mine? Your own business requires so many people

I want to turn around and want to get a sterilization myself

It's too easy to make money. It's a bit unreasonable to think of it as it comes.

Didn't you tell your father that your eldest sister was getting married? They even opened a tile factory and bought a tractor, and they asked your father to dig coal in the well.

Does the author know anything about rural areas in the 1980s? I'm still traveling without even having enough food, and I want to know more about when the application for World Heritage will start. A rice beating machine cost 3,000 yuan. At that time, 3,000 yuan was equivalent to 10 years' salary of ordinary people in the city. I don't understand the prices. Please check more information.