Descendants of Grindelwald in Hogwarts

A very good HP fic, with a novel perspective and good writing style. The author must work hard!

The son of Grindelwald, he also has the phoenix inherited from Dumbledore's family of talents. And Grindelwald and Dumbledore are "best friends", so who is the child's mother? 🙂🙂🙂

I haven't read it yet, but I'll give it a try and change it to "loyalty! Cheng" at the end of the introduction.

The setting is good, but can you tell me what the difference is between the presence and absence of this protagonist? Just change a few details and you can copy the original outline with peace of mind. For example, Malfoy's late-night date changed the details and turned it into reality, but what about the subsequent plot changes? We lived together and died together, and we looked in the mirror together, but there was no description of the changes in the relationship. A simple description was enough to get to the troll plot. Hermione still went the route of squatting in the toilet with red eyes and crying. Then why should I pay to read your book? It's better to read the original work

Stop writing spell names as if they are spells.

If it were placed two or three years ago, it would have been a good high-quality fanfic.

Some of the plots are well controlled, but there are some insertions such as "Avada chewing a big melon" and the unicorn's name "Rainbow, Rare", which are a bit confusing, and the heroine is a little unclear.

The Cruciatus Curse is written incorrectly. Aren't you going to change it? It means "Crushing the Bones and Cutting Out the Bones", not "Crushing the Bones and Cutting out the Heart".

So who is the protagonist's mother?

So far I have read the latest chapter (Chapter 28) and I don't think it is toxic at all. You can continue reading. There is an original female character. I am not sure who the heroine is.

Is the heroine Hermione? 😁

Is the protagonist an original Aboriginal person? Or a time traveler?

So far it looks pretty good, but not enough.

Don't you want to follow? Haven't posted in four days

Are there any other stories in which ggad's son is the protagonist? It's interesting.

Update, don't cut it. There are not many HP books to read recently

Go to Shiyuan, there are good articles, boring

When are you going to start a group? This book is quite interesting.

I can only say that there are a lot of private installations and they don't look good.