There Are Big Problems with the Portable Grandpas Who Are Spawned.

It's good to watch, but I personally don't like the Super Beast chapter. I prefer the Greek mythology part. If I were to rank the current content, I would personally put Greece first, Undead second, Ai Yong third, and finally Super Beast. The latest one has not been decided yet, but I probably won't like it too much. The Greek part gave me a great impression 🤔Although I feel good about Ai Yong's chapter. I feel it is a transitional effect, but I still think it is slightly better than the Super Beast chapter. Of course, the Super Beast chapter also has content that I think I like, and it is not bad. But I agree with the Noble Phantasm "Tian Ting Hao", but the upgrade at the end of the Super Beast chapter makes me feel weird. Does a big hero need to be integrated with a mecha? What is a mecha? Can it also work side by side with the big heroes? Just talking about the content in this novel, combined with the upgrade and evolution of the mecha, I feel that it has ruined the heroic image created by the Greek chapter. This evolution really makes me feel redundant and unsatisfying. Finally, there is the "movie" part. At the beginning, the content of the Greek chapter was turned into a movie and released. I think it is good, but is it necessary to continue this to the next two chapters? I can't quite understand it. It will have such a meaning🤷(It's better to just cut off this setting😐) (Perhaps this is a foreshadowing?) 🤔In general, in my heart, this book is a white jade with slight flaws, but the flaws I think may destroy this white jade in my heart (Don't criticize me because I don't want to quarrel with others. If you have opinions and opinions, I am willing to discuss them in a friendly manner. If you have to criticize me, I can also quarrel😕)

Since the Greek chapter, Zeus' character has gradually changed from a god king to a super small Zeus. At the same time, every skill of Zeus plays a decisive role (Creation in Seven Days) But the most passionate chapter I read in this book is actually the eternal enemy of mecha and insect swarm You can read it in the book wasteland, after all, if you don't care about some details The one-wheeled prison master story can be read for a long time.

It's very imaginative, very touching, and there are so many knives. A feeling of completeness and regret.

Regarding the plot about the improper relationship between the wicked man and others, I think it is very inappropriate to deconstruct the abnormal relationship between men and women into a piece of fun. I hope the author will change it.

I advise the author to change the title of the book to "An Old Man Enters the Body Every Week", JJJJJ...

If you want to go to a different world and burn your life away for someone you just met for a few days, it would be best to set the protagonist as coming from the Qidian Orphanage. Although this adventure in another world seems very exciting and passionate, if you use a realistic metaphor, it is like a neighbor's child who just finished the college entrance examination this year. He secretly ran to the Ewu battlefield for the sake of a netizen he had only chatted with for a few days, and then sacrificed everything he could on the battlefield. How does this look abstract😅

A mage must understand the law. The husband must be male and the wife must be female. The hospital bed must be placed in the ward. Doctors must understand medicine. The game of Go must be better than playing Go. There must be water in the tap. It is recommended that comments about paragraphs be placed in paragraph comments. For comments on chapters, it is recommended to post chapter reviews or paragraph reviews. It is recommended that comments on large chapters or this book be placed in the book review area. There must be lemon in lemonade. Sanitary napkins must be hygienic. Disposable items must only be used once. The water purifier must have a purification function. A brave man must not be a coward.

I feel that the writing is quite good, but there is no foreshadowing. It felt inexplicable at first. I just met someone a little bit, and suddenly I have deep feelings. I want to complete it even if I don't have to take my own life. Is it sick?

Watasi If I don't see the author's new chapters again, I'm going to quit! ! ! !

How to say it. The writing style is a bit childish, but the idea is very good and worth reading.

It's contagious, but it only takes a few days to complete each world. It's so unreasonable that people can't get into it. It's very ethereal. You said it took a year and a half, but it's fine.

The old man is so stupid and only the protagonist is smart 🙂

I discovered something, every time there is a woman who likes the protagonist

It's tied. I can only say that it feels very orthodox. The protagonist is a rare normal person and a good person. The most powerful of all the cheats is the old undead who enlightens the protagonist, and the old sage who is the plug-in maker who appears throughout the book. The other characters are only interesting, the latest Demon Emperor, and the Hero of Love, the Mystic and the Behemoth Lieutenant are pure tools. This book is worth reading.

Essentially, all the plug-ins in this book serve the plot. The protagonist relies on the rituals of Zeus and the system of the great sage to get to this point. Cursed Blood is actually rarely used later.

I don't believe that in reality, you would save people from other countries for a stranger, and you have to sacrifice yourself, unless you know that you will not die.

The writing is very childish The content is very shameful Children still want to read it , But it is just right for college students Ultraman's wave response is really cool , There is also a fairy tale world, everyone comes to save the protagonist.

In the story of salvation from another world, the protagonist's golden finger is a portable Laoden. Each Laoden exists for 7 days. The protagonist travels across the world to help Laoden fulfill his obsession. Setting: 9 Plot: 10 Writing: 7 Evaluation: Xiancao- The writing was a little dry in the early stage, and the plot was a little dry. After the two copies, the writing power gradually became longer and gradually soared. The author must have listened to some opinions and slowed down the pace slightly. The fairy tale world and the world of monsters are obviously better than before. Finally, it has been a long time since I saw the salvation story and it is still burning. Take 12 monthly passes!

The protagonist is too majestic and upright. It feels a bit like a traditional hot-blooded hero.

There was chocolate in the shit, which shocked me so much. This novel made me feel the same as when I read Chronicles of Abnormal Creatures. However, according to my experience of reading so many novels, this novel is expected to collapse soon, because the protagonist has more and more abilities and is getting stronger. It is estimated that when encountering problems in the future, the protagonist will push forward alone, and there will be no scene at the beginning with everyone working together to face difficulties.

After reading it for a hundred chapters, I feel that it is a bit boring now. Personally, I feel that after the fairy tale world ends, the plot related to the Star Column should be directly followed, instead of writing about the parallel world like this now. How to put it, the author continues to open a new world to save the world. The plot of the Star Column is relatively unknown, and exploring the unknown will make people fascinated.

Many people think that the protagonist's sudden sacrifice in the first world is too abrupt and idealistic. In my opinion, it is purely a matter of the integrity of the author's story. If the author had spent a few words at the beginning to describe in detail the protagonist's characteristics of being a good person in real life, being willing to help others, and really considering saving others as an ideal, it would not be so abrupt. For example, if he saves someone but is blackmailed, he still goes back to save it, because the protagonist believes that the world cannot lack good people or something. Yes, the character of the protagonist is not too abrupt after describing it, and if you like to describe the light in Tiga so much, then you should write that the reason why the protagonist is like this is because of the influence of a tokusatsu drama or something. In this way, there will definitely be fewer people who have opinions. I suggest the author revise the previous plot.

Why is there a big flood on the first day? Let's have some high-temperature fire to disinfect it first, let's have fun

It's better to watch a unit drama. I feel so tired after reading 80 chapters.

Fighting for someone you've known for a few days?

The first and middle stages were good, but the later ones were quite repetitive.

Some people always confuse the saints with the Virgin Mary. There are no saints in the true sense.

I misread it, 🙂 thought it was an old Chiang Kai-shek who would be brushed every week.

Author, you forgot to click on the end, and the investment failed ('-'*)

After watching it for a while, I feel that the protagonist is completely like an ENTP. If he lives, he will live, and if he dies, he will die! No matter what the meaning of this bullshit, just do it! The most distasteful thing is Jiji Waiwai, life and death should all go away, there is always one person who is going to die, why can't it be me, just do it! ! !