Saving Tokyo’s Heiress

I can't stand it anymore after reading chapter twenty-seven. The story is okay, but I feel that many authors lived more than ten years ago and couldn't get over it. It was still the kind of system that gave rewards, and then the protagonist relied on rewards to survive the difficulties. I liked it ten years ago, but it doesn't work anymore. Qidian should now have a lot of new users, both young and old. I think there is more market for the author to go to 🍅.

I have read the latest chapter, let me tell you about my impressions. First of all, the writing is not bad, it is enough to read, but the character design is a bit too strong. The female protagonists are not likeable, and they are very unlikable. It is best to have some contrast in daily life, such as squirming for a little help, blushing for a little physical contact, protecting the male protagonist in some small things, etc. I see that now I don't like any of the female protagonists The plot arrangement is also an issue. It's quite big, too jumpy, and the conflict plot is too dense. The most comfortable rhythm of a light novel should be a big plot followed by some daily life, the interaction between the male and female protagonists, and then some small plots before starting a new big plot Goldfinger can actually be more open in this aspect, and the protagonist can be highlighted more to give a driving force to read Generally speaking, it is unattractive, and the male and female protagonists are not outstanding. If you write like this without changing the text, it will basically be difficult to improve.

Looking at this result, I'm really afraid that the author will starve to death and stop updating Eunuch. You must update it more.

The underworld and chaebol are written too deeply, but without the writing power, everyone looks like a clown.

Author, the creativity and ideas of your book are very good, and I like it very much. Unfortunately, the writing is not interesting. Many of the foreshadowings or turning points in the book are too blunt. An experienced author may ask the system to send a task to make these turns. The system of this book can be further explored. The most important thing is that these blunt places affect the overall perception, otherwise the score will be at least ten times better.

After reading Chapter 61, I felt that the author did not plan the progress well and just revealed the trump cards without the ability to protect himself. The whole novel was depressing, and he did not arrange a way to solve the problem by force. Even if it was charged, it would be difficult to gain popularity.

Haven't Honma and Saya already broken up? If this rebellious male protagonist has no ability, Honma will kill him and destroy him. And suddenly Honma's winning rate is ridiculously high?

Being led around from beginning to end and looking "suffocating"?

Recently, I have been chasing "This Isn't Really Love" and this one. Then that book was taken off the shelves and Qidian will not refund it 😭. This one is actually not bad. I have already read light novels, so why do I need to use my brain? I won't talk about the weird operations in the past. It seems that the teacher has finally been included in the big family, and then the whole thing is a bad princess, and the protagonist is a bit mentally retarded. The plot is a bit abstract, and we are not picky eaters. This is a piece of shit. The whole victim's sister can bear to become a princess in order to take revenge on the protagonist. The two harems of the protagonist even drank alcohol and sent the protagonist to become a princess. In fact, without the part of giving away girls, I can still take a look. I have been too lazy to order in the past two days, so I can only say goodbye. There is nothing to see.

Isn't there Chapter 158? Gone 😴