Mirror in Dust

I can't imagine that the plot hasn't lasted more than a week 🙂🙂🙂

The overall writing is still smooth, but it doesn't feel like the style of a male video. Now that I'm in Xianxia, ​​I feel that I can get better results in the light novel category.

It fell into clichés after it was put on the shelves. It started well, but it's a pity I thought it would be able to rise to the top after it was put on the shelves, but the pace was slow and I fell into routines. I just played the pretense that I had a few years ago and it just made me slap in the face.

Come on

It's cool to read a story with an outline The first few chapters were a little bit toxic, but now it feels like I'm filtering Thank you to the author for the wonderful story😍

It suddenly dawned on me that it would be nice to think of this as a security guard for the house... A stepmother who is not related by blood but is infinitely doting, a little ghost sister, a sister who has the air of an elder sister and wants to protect her family... It is very interesting to read more.

The novel written by an old author wearing a vest and written decades ago is suitable for people in their forties or fifties.

It's about lusting after the original mother and training the original sister into a dog. Just watch it if you can accept this disgusting setting.

Can Ning Caiyong be changed into a female protagonist 🙂

Filter readers. The emperor's active skill can only kill one puppet, and it can only kill within thirty feet. Do you know what it means when the emperor is angry and lays down millions of corpses?

This book talks about being an emperor for a day, which actually means being able to use some of the emperor's powers. The protagonist's language and language may be quite outrageous. He can put people off guard with just one quick word, and he says it in front of his own mother, saying that he doesn't owe his father. Long Aotian thought in his heart It's all done in a moment, just say it out loud, people know that you have traveled through time, and you were not responsible for the bad things before. I really can't hold myself back. My murderous husband still asks how people are doing. It's a bit outrageous. I haven't said anything about novels in Qidian for a long time, so I can't help but say it.

My feeling is that the author wanted to make the protagonist a good person, so he made Father Gu a villain, so bad that he oozes pus. As long as the person the protagonist doesn't deal with is either a villain or a woman, but the prerequisite is that you are really a fake prince. I can understand you doing whatever it takes to survive, but in order to survive, you took over the body of someone else's adopted son, and you also wrote about the deep love between mother and son. Is that your mother?

A causal skill that can only kill puppets without being able to join them together is too lame. No wonder Duan Ping is complaining about it.

After reading this book, the protagonist gave me a feeling of absolute control, perfect control, too ideal, as if it was set up, without a single mistake, and any changes were within the protagonist's expectation, and all developed according to the protagonist's wishes.

It's not too much to say that you are awesome, right? This is the one who carries the country's destiny. Emperor, that's it.

I know whose vest you are, this smell is really getting to him.

The plot is basically a palace fight routine, but the whole world is a harem

Is it necessary to write poems with this kind of ancient myth as the background? Do you have to pretend like this? It really makes me vomit, don't try hard if you can't live.

The writing style is very engaging and fascinating. If you read it without thinking, it is a magical book. If you read it with your mind, it is a bunch of inconsistencies. It can lead to a narrow escape from death. The male protagonist is forced to time travel and becomes a playboy who does all kinds of evil. I understand that if he travels through time, it will be written off. But the title of the article makes the hero escape from death at every turn. The opening is a one-day experience ticket for the emperor. The skill description is so awesome and the result is this! This is why I deleted the novel from my bookshelf and commented on it. I strongly recommend that the author follows the male protagonist's time travel method and travels to become the male protagonist and then follow your plot. After all, if you write a novel like this, I believe you must really like this plot to see how exciting it is.

After reading Chapter 12, there are a lot of little poisonous points First of all, when hugging the princess, this is the original text "Ning Caiyong was suddenly hugged by an adult man, subconsciously startled, and wanted to break away." The author has no plans to take in the harem later, but first of all, this is a child who has been raised for more than 10 years, and a mother would not react like this Secondly, this article evaluates Princess Prajna, and the emperor has to shower with fragrance when he goes to see her, and then it does not clearly state what strength this Princess Prajna has, and how many masters does she have? He deserves to be treated like this by the emperor Thirdly, in Chapter 11, the King of Zhenbei was just pretending to be killed, but in Chapter 12, he was talking about how good the King of Zhenbei was. If he can't be killed, don't add a hook. It's not pleasant at all☹️

The beginning was quite interesting, but after reading about 50 chapters, I felt that the author was almost exhausted. I had four monthly passes that were about to expire, and I couldn't find a suitable book, so I voted for it, but I felt that the book was probably going to collapse. . .

In the previous Fengshen, some of the recent plots are a bit too fragmented The protagonist group is too rubbish, Ding, a second-level martial saint, is so awesome and pretends to be so awesome on the stage, even a third-level fight is difficult The national master is even more stretched, and the opponent who ambushed the opponent is beaten to fw There is also the Sword Master, who is about to be killed by a third-level character The villain, King Zhenbei, is awesome. I thought he was a second-level character at the beginning, but later I found out that he was a third-level character. The third-level character is so awesome, and he made three children out of a first-level character. He is also a durable king, which makes me feel that he is the real protagonist. Also, no matter how strong all the villains are in front of other decent characters, when they meet the protagonist, they will be forcibly killed and tricked around. Finally, when I saw it, I felt that their combat power also collapsed. The first level is not as good as a dog. After the first level, there is another realm, and the first level dies like a dog. There is a street on the road that has no style of that realm at all. Of course, it is very enjoyable to read, the writing is not polished, the plot moves very quickly, and a lot of new plots appear in every chapter.

I almost got poisoned after reading ten chapters. Don't be fooled by the comment section. If you have never eaten shit, you can read it.

Stinky Tomato has already copied it, and I have to say it is an endorsement of the book (hard to pump). Except for the substitution of some nouns and the renaming of Goldfinger's name and its usage, they are basically the same. They also used Bilibili to make a short AI sticker animation video (using pirated text, hard to pump*2). I said in the comment area that it was a copy of the mirror in the dust, and someone came to wash it out and said that Goldfinger is different (hard to pump*3)

Looking at the mountains and rivers in the palm of my hand, my heart has long been red. The mortal world will not hinder the ambition to capture the dragon, I wish to tie the blue dragon into a jade cage. I would rather tear down the fairy palace and steal the bright moon, collect the stars to wear as a gift to your beauty. Is Yongzhi worthy of gold house storage? Everything is empty when you enter my arms! I am a dividing line———— I would rather break the three feet of snow in Kunlun, pick up the luminous color of Yaotai. How can mediocrity lock Jinghong? You must break the rules and win the color! Burn the old oaths in the palace in the palm of your hand, Why should we regret that the mountains will be torn apart? Hou Tu witnessed the Golden House Alliance, The palace walls were burned down and I was left alone!

In other aspects, it's okay. You nailed the subtle performance of being a saint in front of others, but your writing of emotional scenes is really bad. Every time you write an emotional scene where the two parties interact, you rely on it. And I don't know if you do it deliberately or just at this level. You handle every emotional scene vaguely, including the actual first heroine Xu Negation's handling...😅 As for emotions, you can learn the Sword of Thoughts.

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By the way, for the sake of the monthly ticket for Chapter 28, I would like to add a masterpiece The names of martial arts and Shinto realms have finally appeared, I will sort them out: The ninth grade of martial arts: Nourishing Qi Realm (reply from the author of Chapter 136) The eighth grade of martial arts: Full Body Realm (Chapter 41) The seventh grade of martial arts: Blood Running Realm (Chapter 37) Martial Arts Sixth level of martial arts: Martial courage realm (Chapter 10) Fifth level of martial arts: Danxin realm (Chapter 41) Fourth level of martial arts: Refining calamity realm (Chapter 134) Third level of martial arts: Guangsha realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 34) Second level of martial arts: Qitian realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 34) First level of martial arts: Eternal realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 44) The ninth level of Shinto: Entering the realm of concentration (Chapter 15) The eighth level of Shinto: The realm of emerging from the shell (Chapter 28) The seventh level of Shinto: The realm of wandering gods (Chapter 28) Shinto Sixth level: Delightful Realm (Chapter 153) Fifth level of Shinto: Free Realm (Chapter 35) Fourth level of Shinto: Dianxue Realm (Chapter 19, Chapter 4) Third level of Shinto: Guangsha Realm (3rd level) Chapter 5, Chapter 34) Second Grade of Shinto: Qitian Realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 34) First Grade of Shinto: Eternal Realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 44) EX: False Third Grade : Incense Realm (Chapter 114) Ninth Grade of Martial Arts: Nourishing Qi Realm (reply from the author of Chapter 136) Source: Chapter 136 I just hope that from now on, my mother will only cry in front of me Qingjian himself is currently only missing the "Heavenly Tribulation" to be promoted to the third rank. (The author's reply in this paragraph): The ninth level of martial arts is called the Qi-nourishing realm, and the details about overcoming the tribulation will be explained in detail when the protagonist reaches the fourth level•v• The eighth level of martial arts: Full Body Realm (Chapter 41) Source: Chapter 41 They say I'm a genius, but you still don't believe it Xiao Yi's eighth-level martial arts cultivation has already made his skin, flesh, muscles and bones work together internally and externally, and he can freely control every part of his flesh and blood. Seventh Grade of Martial Arts: Blood Rush Realm (Chapter 37) Source: Chapter 37 Shocking Wisdom Gu Fangchen made a simple cleaning trick and cleaned up the mess in the room. At this moment, his physical body has taken on a new look, and the upper, middle and lower Dantian have been completely replaced by the formation formed by the Demon Suppressing Nails. These formations were like spreading blood-red hyphae, covering every inch of his flesh and blood. Just looking at the physical strength, it has directly reached the seventh level of martial arts, the blood-running realm! The sixth level of martial arts: the martial courage realm (Chapter 10) Source: Tenth A child of the Zhang family But Gu Lianxian is a natural martial artist! At only sixteen years old, he has already reached the sixth level of martial arts. Such talent is only slightly inferior to that of the famous martial saint back then. Fifth level of martial arts: Dan state of mind (Chapter 41) Source: Chapter 41 They say I am a genius, but you still don't believe it Xiao Yi practices martial arts and has good talent. Although not as good as Gu Lianxian, he now has an eighth level of cultivation. With his cultivation speed, the upper limit should be at the fifth level of Dan state of mind. Fourth Grade of Martial Arts: Refining Tribulation Realm (Chapter 134) Source: Chapter 134: The Day the Lotus Blooms, Reshaping the Bones Under Gu Fangchen's gaze, Hu Wenxin had no choice but to swear an oath of humiliation never to betray her inner demons. The most important point of the fourth-level refining tribulation realm is that you will be harassed by internal and external demons at this time and begin to transcend tribulation. Third Stage of Martial Arts: Guangsha Realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 34) Source: Chapter 35 Shinto and Martial Arts In addition, there are basically only two cultivation routes in this world, martial arts and Shinto, which train the physical body and the soul respectively. The names of the first six realms of the two routes are different, but when they reach the third level, they reach the same destination by different routes. Chapter 34: As high as the sky Third grade, named Guangsha Realm. The body is like a vast building, and the people are looked down upon like ants. Second level of martial arts: Qitian Realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 34) Source: Chapter 35 Shinto and Martial Arts In addition, there are basically only two cultivation routes in this world, martial arts and Shinto, which train the physical body and the soul respectively. The names of the first six realms of the two routes are different, but when they reach the third level, they reach the same destination by different routes. Chapter 34: As high as the sky Second grade, named Qitian realm. It is as high as the sky, and looks down upon the building like an ant. Martial Arts First Grade: Eternal Realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 44) Source: Chapter 35 Shinto and Martial Arts In addition, there are basically only two cultivation routes in this world, martial arts and Shinto, which train the physical body and the soul respectively. The names of the first six realms of the two routes are different, but when they reach the third level, they reach the same destination by different routes. Chapter 44: Stealing Heaven and Swapping Sun "Master Hengchang" is the third first-level Shinto practitioner known to players in the game. The other two, one is the Confucian sage of Mount Yao who established half of the world, and the other is the sword sage of the previous generation who sat in the physical body of Tianmen Mountain. These three characters, plus the player himself who reaches the full level after the ending, are the only four first-grade Eternal Realm players in the game who can be considered alive. Eternal Realm, as the name suggests, means eternal, just like heaven and earth. Ninth Grade of Shinto: Entering the Dharma (Chapter 15) Source: Chapter 15: Huang Liang Yi Meng became a god Gu Fangchen sat down on the spot, assuming a thinking posture, holding her chin and thinking. "First of all, the first condition to break this fifth-grade psychedelic formation is not high. It only requires the most basic ninth-grade Shinto cultivation level..." Oh, the ninth-grade Shinto cultivation level is to enter the state of concentration. Eighth Level of Shinto: Out of the Shell Realm (Chapter 28) Source: Chapter 28: Inner Demon Refining and Experience Book His body was too completely destroyed, and it would be too slow to save it using normal methods. You have to use the most extreme method to live towards death. "However, in order to refine oneself into a puppet, the soul must first be cultivated to at least the eighth level of Shinto's 'coming out of the shell' state. In this way, the separation of spirit and flesh can be achieved during the refining process, and it can be transformed into controlling oneself." The seventh level of Shinto: Wandering God Realm (Chapter 28) Source: Chapter 28 Inner Demon Refining and Experience Book "My current ninth-level cultivation is not enough. Once the soul leaves the body, I will definitely die." Gu Fangchen touched his chin: "In fact, it is best to be at the seventh-level 'Wandering God' realm to be the safest. Not only can the soul leave the body, but also can interfere with moving objects with thoughts. There is a guarantee." Sixth level of Shinto: Deyijing (Chapter 153) Source of data: Chapter 153: Female Ghost (×) Patriarch's Milk (√) At this moment, he had a whim and decided to follow his heart and directly try to break through! The sixth level above the seventh level of Shinto is called Deyijing. Get carried away with pride. Fifth level of Shinto: Free Realm (Chapter 35) Source: Chapter 35 Shinto and Martial Arts As mentioned before, only at the seventh level of the Divine Realm can spiritual consciousness affect real objects. But this only allows him to have a backup plan when refining the puppet, giving him an extra level of safety. If you want to completely solve the problem and no longer be affected by the physical body, you must at least reach the fifth level of freedom. Fourth level of Shinto: Dianxue Realm (Chapter 4, Chapter 19) Source: Chapter 19: Your sister said you are a despicable and shameless person To talk about the attitude of everyone in the palace towards Gu Fangchen, Gu Lianxian hates him the most, then Gu Youren is the one who looks down on him the most. Grand Princess Gu Youren is only twenty-one years old now, and is already a fourth-level master of Shinto. The Wei Dynasty has been in existence for more than 1,300 years, and there are probably not many people who can compare with her. Chapter 4 Leaving the Palace A woman in plain clothes who was seventy-nine similar to Ning Caiyong, but even more charming, was moving lightly, her eyes slowly sweeping over all the furnishings in the room. Her eyes were clear and her expression was cold and disgusting. It seemed that even being in Gu Fangchen's bedroom was a great humiliation. It was Gu Fangchen's original sister, the princess of the royal palace - Gu Youren. She is a teacher from Yaoshan Academy. At a young age, she is already a Shinto master in Dianxue Realm and is famous all over the world. Third level of Shinto: Guangsha Realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 34) Source: Chapter 35 Shinto and Martial Arts In addition, there are basically only two cultivation routes in this world: martial arts and Shinto, which train the physical body and the soul respectively. The names of the first six realms of the two routes are different, but when they reach the third level, they reach the same destination by different routes. Chapter 34: As high as the sky Third grade, named Guangsha Realm. The body is like a vast building, and the people are looked down upon like ants. Second level of Shinto: Qitian Realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 34) Source: Chapter 35 Shinto and Martial Arts In addition, there are basically only two cultivation routes in this world: martial arts and Shinto, which train the physical body and the soul respectively. The names of the first six realms of the two routes are different, but when they reach the third level, they reach the same destination by different routes. Chapter 34: As high as the sky Second grade, named Qitian realm. It is as high as the sky, and looks down upon the building like an ant. First level of Shinto: Eternal Realm (Chapter 35, Chapter 44) Source: Chapter 35 Shinto and Martial Arts In addition, there are basically only two cultivation routes in this world: martial arts and Shinto, which train the physical body and the soul respectively. The names of the first six realms of the two routes are different, but when they reach the third level, they reach the same destination by different routes. Chapter 44: Stealing Heaven and Swapping Sun "Master Hengchang" is the third first-level Shinto practitioner known to players in the game. The other two, one is the Confucian sage of Mount Yao who established half of the world, and the other is the sword sage of the previous generation who sat in the physical body of Tianmen Mountain. These three characters, plus the player himself who reaches the full level after the ending, are the only four first-grade Eternal Realm players in the game who can be considered alive. Eternal Realm, as the name suggests, means eternal, just like heaven and earth. EX: False Third Grade: Incense Realm (Chapter 114) Source: Chapter 114: All Idiots The officials appointed by the imperial court in these important counties start at the fourth rank, but as long as they make political achievements, they will have the opportunity to be promoted to the false third rank in three to five years. The so-called Guangsha realm was also called the "incense realm" in the ancient Zhou Dynasty. What it means is that when you reach this state, you are basically equivalent to a standing god. You can mold your golden body, build temples, gather incense and vows, and be believed by people. Those who believe in this person, once they recite his name, they will immediately feel something, no matter where they are, they will come as soon as they think of it. But at the same time, this cause and effect is also mutual. If a person can gather enough will power of all living beings, then even if he has no cultivation at all, he can immediately achieve the "incense realm". This is the fake third grade. Because of the cultivation gained in this way, once it loses the blessing of faith in the will of all living beings, it will immediately fall back and become an ordinary person. And this so-called will of all living beings is now also called—— "National Destiny". This is why an emperor with the blessing of national luck should be regarded as a practitioner of at least the third grade even if he has no cultivation level.

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How to say, there are currently no shortcomings except for a large number of settings to promote the plot, if the few updates are included 🙂