Building a World: from Low Martial Arts to Super Fantasy

emmm... It's still different if we change the soup but not the medicine

Author, I guess you want to lay out slowly and then scale it up in the later stage. It is impossible to become popular like this. Many of them are eunuchs in the middle. You make a big one first, and the heat and comfort will come up first. If you lay out slowly and then plan to make a big one, you will die easily.

It feels like the system can give you whatever you want, so it feels like the protagonist is just a system pendant.

I just looked at the source of the book that the author asked me to write. The work from five years ago was created to be super fantasy, right? It didn't take long to watch it anymore. It's not cool and dull, and the protagonist is not charming and girly. No wonder you are so inspired by him.

The subject matter is okay but the writing style is too awkward

The male protagonist is like the manpower pillar of the system. The role of the system is best to be useless. The system is just an introduction and the male protagonist is the main force. But you make the system too important. This is not good. The most annoying thing is that the male protagonist takes in the fortune teller and the beggar requires a system task. Has the male protagonist been taken away by the system? Why do you move only when the system asks you to move? The system is just an external force, a plug-in, and the main force is the male protagonist, who is himself. The most satisfying thing is to succeed on your own. Also, there should be less description of the protagonist flirting with the maid. After all, it is a behind-the-scenes story. It is very dramatic and should be more supporting. The best way to introduce a character is to use the least description to establish the image of the supporting character. Through the description of the supporting character by the protagonist and the guessing of the supporting character by the supporting character, the supporting character can highlight the greatness of the protagonist. Let the supporting character brag about the protagonist's brilliance. This is the essence of behind-the-scenes writing.

A few years ago, there was a book similar to this one. You start in a wheelchair and radically change the world.