Collapse of Iron: Journey to All Realms

How should I put it? I can't see the problem for the time being, it's just a little bit lacking.

The following is my personal opinion. Seeing this book reminds me of the author who ran away before. I hope it has nothing to do with that guy. Although there are only 5 pictures published, I haven't seen too many problems yet. I still have some suggestions. I hope the author can learn from them and it's best to reply. After all, only by having questions and answers can we make better suggestions. I suggest that the author's worldview should not be too grand. If the worldview is too large, the author may not have the strength to come back, so the world he opens up It is best not to have a world like the fairy tale, because many of these settings are outdated and meaningless, It is best to choose comprehensive comics that mostly test technology, such as "The Wandering Earth", "Conan", "Super God" and "Shape Moon". These are worlds where technology is not high or are biased towards daily life, and the combat power does not exceed the Star God In the world view, the level of human knowledge should not be too far behind, it is almost the same as after World War II. After all, primitives and space operas really don't go together. And the combat power is also easier to describe. After all, the highest combat power is those that erase various concepts, break through space, etc. If it is too high, it is difficult to write The author of the novel Star Iron Opens Up the World actually has a great advantage, that is, there are very few such novels, and there is no need to spend too much time on the settings. As long as the author can change the original plot and not eat too much settings. After all, this kind of novel is considered close encounters of the fifth kind and happy reunion Although the protagonist encounters the Star Dome Train, I still suggest that the author lets the protagonist form a train crew later on, and explore the world by himself to form his own team, and occasionally meet with the train master team later. After all, there are already enough novels with protagonists in the Starry Railway genre, and each world can actually be written in a skip. For example, one day I teased Conan in Conan World to let him know how powerful the Star Team is, and the next day I went to Xingyue World to save the world. Just like playing a game, you can play the main story after a few days. And I hope the author will not open a harem. After all, those who have been made to vomit by toilet paper from another world, it is better to have some brothers and father-daughter love. If you want to open it, Alicia will do it. The above are personal suggestions.