Rebirth of Tokyo, Starting from Making Action Movies

This action movie is not island country at all

This action movie was a huge disappointment

The action movie as the title basically has no sense of existence. All aspects of filming, such as funding, script, actor selection, filming process, etc. That can be expanded upon are all covered by the author in an understatement, or simply described in a few sentences. The male protagonist is like a tool man, with basically nothing except transportation, and the filming is still a beggar's version. The biggest problem encountered is that the company is not famous enough to recruit good actors. I feel that because I was too hung up on the filming, the author added a character of a singing master to him, otherwise the male protagonist would have no plot. Then I added a character who knows cooking skills to facilitate the subsequent plot development. It feels like I can't write the plot of the male protagonist anymore, so I just add a feature, is it blunt? The plot is a bit fluid. Secondly, among the characters who have appeared so far, except for the female idols, others have basically no roles and cannot leave much of an impression, including the male protagonist himself. In the end, there is no astringency. Obviously the title and introduction make me feel that the author can play tricks 😁. What I wrote is also quite confusing, so just read it.

What's the difference between this and selling gourd dolls😭

Baga! Is this what Minnasan wants to see?

After thinking about it, I decided not to publish a single chapter, so I said it in the comments so that new readers can see it at once. This book is actually a meme that I came up with a year ago. At that time, the bad game was very popular. After reading it, I also wanted to write a book with two protagonists. But it's definitely not possible to imitate directly, so I came up with the idea that this action movie is not that action movie. But I have never written. On the one hand, my studies are heavy, and on the other hand, I feel that I cannot write well. Then last year, editors started giving live lectures online, and I learned a lot. But in fact, judging from the current results of this book, I did not study very well. I'm so sorry. My plan for this book is to have fun, make fun of it, shoot special photos, and fall in love. In the end, the writing of the music was not very good. I really don't understand how to make a TV series and I couldn't write it at all. Even my most confident characterizations, the stories of the heroines, don't seem to be liked very much. I followed the neon girl group intensely for a while, so the heroines were basically idols. I put a lot of effort into designing and shaping Kavashima Ai and Saito Fifteen. The song for Kajima Ai is also a song that I carefully searched for to suit the mood of her play. What I want to say is that I did try hard to write well, but... Maybe my ability is indeed limited. I don't have so much ink in my stomach, which makes the story look pale and tasteless. But I will still insist on finishing it. I want the story to have an end. Let all the heroines have a good ending. I will work hard to improve myself and strive to write better! Thank you all for your support! Really thank you 🙏

At present, the protagonist has no strength and the system capabilities are not enough. Once the protagonist makes more money, the protagonist's company will no longer belong to the protagonist! This book doesn't have much life left! Author, have you ever thought about remedying it?

You want to learn about daily Japanese names, brother? ?

First of all, the writing style is not good, the pace is too fast, and you can give away the first two parts and then charge for them if they get a good reputation, otherwise it would be too weird. Also, doesn't the protagonist want to be the protagonist himself? It's not impossible to direct and act at the same time, and before the special shooting of the four chapters, I didn't just prepare two or three photos of props and special effects.

It's interesting to read a few chapters, but there are some problems. First of all, the protagonist's name is a bit awkward to be reborn in Japan, and then the system does not explain it clearly. Secondly, the introduction clearly states that he is reborn as a boss, which gives a complete background, but in fact it is a takeover. Then there are big problems. Why is the protagonist in Japan? Basically, it's a bit awkward to be related to Japanese action movies.

The plot is not delicate enough. This kind of article relies entirely on the plot and slips away.

I've read about the subject of going ashore in a certain book. It's very well written, but it's a pity that it's a dead eunuch. I hope you can stick to it.

There are just a lot of typos, so I still need to review them after I finish writing.