Perfect World: Ning Chuan
完美世界之宁川
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 340k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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167Chapters
7.9kRecommendations
17.6kFans
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I think writing "Ten-Crown King" would be better. "A dragon's stride and a tiger's gait on the World Tree, I am called the Emperor, remember me." It's both sophisticated and imposing, and the final achievement is also higher.
As expected, the author couldn't continue writing. The main plot of this book is Perfect World, while the author's comfort zone is Shrouding the Heavens. Hopefully, the author understands one thing: although the book's popularity dropped significantly after the return to Shrouding the Heavens, it's not that people disliked Shrouding the Heavens; what they disliked was that the main plot of…
How about the author writes about the descendants of Wu Shang in the next book? Immune to magic, all supernatural powers are worthless—that's so cool!
Do you want to recruit Yuechan, Yunxi, Huoling'er, the Goddess of War, and Liu Shen? Especially Yuechan, you absolutely must recruit her!
Can the author write about a protagonist from another world or the Dark Four Emperors?
I've seen too many stories about protagonists with good male leads; I want to see some stories about villains.
Having read the first twenty chapters, I currently have two minor issues. First, the fight scenes are too weak. Both battle scenes (against the dragon girl and the shadow demon) are rather bland and superficial, like mages announcing spell names. The author could try reducing these scenes later or focusing on improving their descriptions.
Ning Chuan's accumulated power across six lifetimes in the original novel is truly formidable. He is one of the strongest Venerables throughout history, having perfected every realm at the Venerable level. Even number 10 might not be a match for Ning Chuan. The original novel also records that he knows several of the Ten Fierce Treasure Techniques. If it weren't for that True Immortal Hand Bone, breaking through to the Immortal King realm by the end would definitely be no problem for him.
Does Ye Fan's enemy in the original novel have to be the enemy of the protagonist in the fanfiction?!
If they keep doing this boring plot, I'm quitting. This crossover with some random character is so tedious. I'd rather read the original story than watch the actual work.
Stop covering the sky, okay?
It's a case of false advertising; I originally came for Ning Chuan and Perfect World, but they insisted on writing about Shrouding the Heavens.