Perfect World: Ning Chuan

I think it's better to write about the King of Ten Crowns, the dragon walks and the tiger steps on the world tree, I call the emperor, please remember. He is both powerful and domineering, and his final achievements are also high.

Sure enough, the author still couldn't write anymore. The main line of this book is perfection, and the author's comfort zone is to cover the sky. I hope the author understands one thing. Although the book lost a lot of popularity after returning to Zhetian, people don't hate Zhetian. What everyone hates is that the perfect main plot is well written. When it is about to reach the climax, it runs to Zhetian without knowing what it means! Under normal circumstances, the map development process is from low to high, how can it be from high to low? ! After becoming the emperor of Zhetian, it is a normal transition to become invincible in the world and dream of returning to ancient times. Immortals become immortals and become kings, they go to cover the sky and fry fish just because they have nothing to do!

Why don't the author write about Wushang Descendants in the next book? It's so cool that he's immune to mana and has magical powers that are nothing but excrement.

Yue Chan, Yun Xi, Huo Ling'er, the female war goddess, will Liu Shen accept them? Especially Yuechan must be accepted.

I've watched too much of the main stream, I want to watch the villain stream

After reading the first twenty chapters, I have two small problems. Firstly, the fighting scenes are too weak. The two battle scenes (fighting the Dragon Girl and fighting the Shadow Demon) are very verbal, such as the mage reporting the name of his skills. I feel that the author can try to reduce or focus on learning how to describe them in the following articles. Among the fan fiction, the one that gave me a better impression of the fight was "The Perfect World Through the Eyes of Double Eyes" (not an advertisement) Secondly, the plot was too rushed. After she was born, she met the pre-determined heroine (Dragon Girl) immediately, and then the original Gaitianfen inheritance. The psychological description of seeing the dragon girl destroys the protagonist's previous aloof character setting of ignoring the Celestial Race woman and pursuing the truth when he swore an oath. The inheritance of the sky grave destroys the background of the protagonist possessing a treasure and traveling through the profound background of the Six-Crown King. For example, I don't remember any powerful methods in Ning Chuan's original work, and I don't understand the use of the reincarnation of the plug-in tape at all. Since the author has set a new character design for the protagonist in Shenhuo, he can actually spend more time exploring it in the front, which can also lay the groundwork for the fight. You can see that the author has his own understanding of the original work, even if it is not a mindless article. As a fan, you can take a look at the fanfic.

The accumulation of Ning Chuan's six lives in the original work is still very impressive. He is one of the strongest sages in ancient and modern times. He has perfected every realm in the venerable state. No. 10 Is not necessarily Ning Chuan's opponent. The original work records that he also has several ten evil treasures. If it were not for the real immortal hand bone, there would be no problem in breaking through the Immortal King in the finale.

Does the enemy of Ye Fan in the original novel have to be the enemy of the protagonist? !

If we continue to do these boring plots, we will cancel them. Linking up with an inexplicable character is boring to death. I might as well watch the original plot if it is purely based on the original plot.

Selling dog meat over sheep's heads, I originally came to Ningchuan and Perfect World, but I had to write it to cover up the sky.