Racehorse Trainer, Come on In!

Please! Never imitate Ke and raise horses! Enter the palace after getting married! If there is no horse girl, Wattasi!

To put it bluntly, some of the authors are too realistic. . . In a world with three goddesses, what kind of social evils can you write about? . . I can only say that Ma Niang and the central trainer's treatment are too low. It is impossible to have such a position that is close to the gods without privileges, especially in a place like Xiaoli.

It's a scam to inherit the name of the previous horse girl. How about future generations of horse girls having to bear the name of the previous horse girl to achieve good results? This idea is very abnormal

The setting is too confusing. Which athlete would want to have a so-and-so title on his head?

The book is quite good, but I have a few worries and doubts (only subjective, I'm sorry if it offends me, but please don't attack me personally, thank you) 1. Coolness: If the gap between the central and local governments is overemphasized, will it be too depressing in Shengxue's part (I just hope that I can at least win next, facing the decisive generation) 2. Emotional line? To be honest, the gap between the protagonist and the horse he trains is almost 10 years? The protagonist started at age 25 (undergrad year 22, practiced for one year, disappeared for two years, and may have been certified for almost a year), Loom age 18, Luna 24, and Ellie age 26 (retired at age 22, and the protagonist disappeared for two years) 3. If it is said to be win win win, the fans of the original Ma Niang may be angry? (I am a fan of emperors. If the emperor loses too much, then I will definitely be angry). There is a fanfic of The Eunuch's Horse Girl that is also very interesting. It also writes original horse girls. The author can read it and learn more. (Of course, don't study the eunuch part, thank you)

Come on, the author, this is the first time I see a realistic horse racing girl. It feels like a complete world

The starting point for the novel "Mai Ma Niang" is very small. I hope the author can complete it and make it more than a million words. Give you a recommendation vote

Go in a sack

In fact, the writing is okay, but the name inheritance system is very confusing. Sometimes I can't figure out whether it is the original horse or the successor.

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I came across this book in the Daily Guide. I am a reader who has only watched animations on the subject of horse racing girls. I have not had much contact with real horse racing and horse racing girls games, so my perspective is only from the daily life of racing girls, competitions, and emotional lines of racing girls. I read the comments in book circles and all said it was well written, but to me, in this kind of surreal world view with three goddesses, the author deliberately pursues reality too much, such as emphasizing the central and local settings, the trainer being fired because the horse racing girl was injured, and various small details that are specially emphasized, which makes me feel a bit bad. I would like to know what other readers think of it. This is the first point. Then there is the matter of the name inheritance of the horse racing girl. I think the author's point of view seems to be that he wrote this setting because he had to consider the real timeline of the horse racing and the horse racing girl, and the real horse racing experience. Because I have very little contact with real-life horse racing, I can only look at the problem from the perspective of animation and athletes. Many racehorse girls in the animation are related by blood in reality, but they are also called by different names, because there are human descendants and they may be racehorse girls. This is based on the fantasy setting. The author made such a realistic and outrageous name inheritance in this setting. It is really scary. There is such a race Ma Niang's children will always feel like clones of themselves. From now on, the descendants of Special Zhou will only be special Zhou with some changes. The descendants of the East China Sea Emperor will always be clones of the East China Sea Emperor. The last time I saw this setting was the Joy family and the Junsha family in the Pokémon world. From an athlete's perspective, if the offspring of a racing girl are not copies, but different racing girls, then when this racing girl wins the championship, the name of the first generation will be cheered by the whole audience? It feels like it's really hard on athletes. They are obviously different individuals. They have to carry the names of their ancestors to fight since birth. They have created a new dynasty and still use other people's names. It's really hard to understand. So I really want to know what the fans of horse racing girls who are familiar with real-life horse racing and horse racing girls games think about these settings. Can it answer my doubts and let me know more about horse racing girls? Maybe I can not miss a good book. After talking about the conflict between reality and the two-dimensional world, and the inheritance of Saima Niang's name, which I don't quite understand, I would like to talk about the author's narrative structure. As a two-dimensional girly literature, my perspective is based on two-dimensional works such as Ship Girl, Monster Girl, and Heroic Spirit Girl. However, in this book, I don't talk about the three golden chapters. I count it as ten chapters, which is just a horse girl competition, plus the protagonist giving lessons and massage to the horse girl. In terms of writing style, it's not bad. From the perspective of a Jockey Girl fan, maybe it's not bad either? I'm not sure, and I can't speak for others either. From my point of view, a reader who looks at the two-dimensional, daily, horse racing girl tag and clicks in to read it, I quit and checked the tag three times within ten chapters to confirm that I read it correctly, which gives people a sense of two-dimensional: it means that the setting is two-dimensional. Everyday life: refers to the protagonist's sophisticated and realistic daily life. The horse racing girl refers to the feeling of the middle-aged uncle's boss. I'm not criticizing, I'm just curious. Except for the author's old readers or the kind of horse racing girl enthusiasts, the retention rate of ordinary readers of this passerby is a bit too low. Have you considered adding more horse racing girls competitions or posts in the follow-up plot? After all, this shortcoming can be ignored when the chapter is free. After it is released, it will be a bit too low to spend money to watch the human relationships between the protagonist and various middle-aged uncles. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. There are indeed very few people who write about niche subjects like horse racing girls. I hope the author will stick to it. (By the way, let a horse racing girl lover answer my doubts, I really can't understand it)

There are a lot of complaints about inheriting names in the comment area. I think it is a very simple setting that the game did not explain clearly. The author rationalized it into a rule. The core is actually the inheritance factor. Those who inherit the three-star factor from their parents can keep the original name Other places are basically similar to the game structure. The training and competition of Ma Niang's improvement are also very well written. I hope I won't be criticized.

The idea is actually quite innovative, but it just needs a certain period of adaptation The character of Orihime is starting to take shape, and I think the work still has a future.