North America: an Extraordinary Life Beginning with Exorcism

The writing is pretty good, but the plot is a bit stitched. If you watch the movie a lot, you can basically know the follow-up after seeing some of the key information.

The subject matter is good, and the summons in it are also very innovative. However, the supporting actress is a bit bulldozed for free, and there are various recommendations. My personal suggestion is that the supporting actress can be slowed down, deepened, and fleshed out.

The start was strong, but now it's a bit small.

The main character is named Green, so the American TV series Green is not allowed to be included.

I just want to know when the protagonist can master all the Black Shadow Corps. The Black Shadow Corps is also a world-destroying power 😏

In addition to the power of magic circles, the exorcism method is to summon pets. Can you come up with some interesting exorcism methods? World of Warcraft, what are the Paladin skills like? Aren't the skills in movies, comics, and games good? You don't have to be ridiculously strong when you go out. Growth skills can also be used, and there are some reasonable combinations.

The characters in American Horror Story are all very good-looking. If I don't write this, I would write it like crazy.

Can you please reduce your mana a bit? It would affect the perception too much. Occasionally one or two would be fine, but you can have several in a chapter.