Cybernetic Mysteries: This Rebirth Doesn’t Feel Right

Having read up to chapter 60, I can only say the writing is passable, but the plot is fragmented and disjointed. As I read on, I started to sense the style of a female-oriented online novel.

Missing parents are too ancient.

The writing style is quite good, but overall it feels too frustrating. There are so many things you can't kill, and the dungeon worlds mentioned in the synopsis don't appear, so it lacks satisfying depth.

Political ideology and public intellectuals are not things that cannot be written about, but I personally feel that they should be interspersed between different parts of the story, as they seem too slow for online novels. The theme of superpowers and machines was actually a very good choice.

There are too many elements included; all sorts of things have been covered; there are too many layers; it's very confusing to read; I still don't understand what it's trying to achieve.

Is the author a historical writer? How can they write this kind of novel?

The book itself has a good subject matter and synopsis, but the progress is too slow, and there are still many problems with what's being written so far. 1. Political Issues: This is so frustrating! If you're going to write, write a lighthearted, enjoyable story. The chapters I'm reading now are so sycophantic.

The foreshadowing is really far off; it's only revealed in chapters thirty or sixty. Everything else is great, but it's not suitable for online novels. This pacing is better suited for physical books, as most people probably won't remember it that far in the future.

The plot lacks exciting moments. The writing is decent. Overall rating: Medium.

I've read up to chapter 73, and the protagonist seems very passive and frustrated.