Cybernetic Mysteries: This Rebirth Doesn’t Feel Right

After reading Chapter 60, I can only say that the writing is okay, the plot design is sparse, and I can feel the style of female videos as I read it.

Missing parents are too old

The writing is pretty good, but generally it's too frustrating. You can't kill this or that, and the dungeon world in the introduction doesn't appear, so it's not exciting enough.

It's not that I can't write about political forms and public knowledge, but I personally feel that it should be done alternately between copies. As a web article, the rhythm seems very slow. This theme is actually a good choice of superpowers and machines. I think it will be brilliant once it is written, but the author only plans to finish the first copy. Anyway, come on, author, whether you continue writing or start a new book. I think everything I can write is awesome.

There are too many elements to write about, all kinds of things have been written, and there are too many sets of shells. It's so confusing to read. I still haven't figured out what I'm trying to do.

What about the author's historical essays? How to write this kind of novel. .

The subject matter and introduction of this book are good, but the progress is too slow, and there are many problems in writing now 1. Political issues: It's too frustrating. Since you want to write, you should write cool articles. The chapters I read now are too licky. Well, if licking it 🇺🇸 is not enough, you have to lick it for a while. To be honest, I am convinced that it took so long to write these things 2. Chapter progress: The introduction of the book I read is about traveling through different worlds. How can this world be so long and there are so many chapters? As for suspense and foreshadowing, I don't mind if you do the Riddler, but there are four or five puzzles in one puzzle, and why not go to another world to suspense, but it's useless 3. Theme: The theme is very good, but you messed up the writing, this cyber narration The internal system of the non-artificial intelligence version is very good. It can be connected to external spiritual equipment. Why don't you focus on this? The good guys have solved the mystery since they first came up. I can only say that they have to fight hard to survive. There are still a few pitfalls that have not been filled in at the beginning My suggestion is Hurry up and end the current international issues and go directly to the next map

The foreshadowing is really far away, and it is only revealed in Chapter 30 or 60. The rest is very good, but it is not suitable for online books. This rhythm is suitable for physical books, and most people probably can't remember that far.

The plot is not that exciting. Good writing skills. Comprehensive evaluation, medium

I've read Chapter 73 and I feel like the protagonist is very passive and aggrieved.