I Dropped Out of Hogwarts and Gave a Speech in a Tavern

To be honest, I'm looking forward to it. The writing skills are very solid, the rhythm is very good, and the suspense is peeled off layer by layer and flowed down layer by layer Only from the first three chapters, I felt something called writing skills that is difficult to feel in the online literary circle Looking forward to the next one

Let me strangle them, they can all be connected together, and the corners of my mouth can't help but rise crazily when I see it 🙂 Hi, hope

Collecting them together makes them easier to delete. I am a trumpet author. I wrote novels just to be an emperor. I forgot about the middle and the end.

The author seems to want to describe the protagonist as a leader full of great ideals, with strong incitement and speech skills. I don't know whether it is due to some special arrangement or other objective factors, but the author currently only reflects the protagonist's ability through a form of following the crowd. Specifically, we see that the protagonist has followers, some of whom even consider him a god. However, this description feels very hollow, because (1) the image of the followers is not very full, giving me a perfunctory feeling like canned laughter; (2) according to the description, I can understand that the masses regard the protagonist as a requester and a voice, but they can't feel why they regard him as a god, which is very strange; (3) the speech given by the protagonist feels more like his own dream, not only lacks There are few suitable compliments and linkages, and there is also a lack of some context. It is very sudden and dreamy, but lacks a sense of presence. A complaint meeting may be a good form. It is like the protagonist has been saying that everyone has suffered oppression and injustice, but has not written it out in any form. It feels like a crazy dream of a crazy student, and does not seem to understand what misfortunes have happened to the low-level wizards. Summary: The protagonist seems to me to be a visionary who floats in the sky and does not go deep into the grassroots to understand the conditions of the masses and the nature of various classes in society. It feels very strange for such a person to be supported. Finally, since this is an extraordinary world, is there some powerful brainwashing magic? As this description emphasizes, as a magical world, Magic is Power, the protagonist is a person who seems to want to take the route of violent revolution. In a place that seems to have a mass base (?), What should he rely on to realize his ideals? This is also one of the motivations that currently supports me to read it. The above are my current views and doubts. I don't know if the author has any later arrangements for these aspects, but I hope that my views can provide some reference and help to the author.

It is difficult to evaluate this book in a world where the power comes to oneself in an extraordinary world. A powerful wizard has the ability to destroy a city with his magic. Is it really right to pursue the so-called reform? ? Does it make sense? If there are too many ants, they can kill an elephant or even extinguish a flame. But how many ants are needed to extinguish the sun? ?

The painting style was rigorous at the beginning, but it didn't take long for the style to rise to the second level. Perhaps it should be said that it became a literary youth due to excessive exertion? This kind of reading seems as if the author has preset a certain scene, and then in order to connect with that scene, many plot turns are too fast to be harmonious. What struck me as more serious was the episode at Nott Manor, which was originally a stable campus life. Without any warning, the protagonist entered the manor alone and was blocked in the basement of the manor. When he saw the Squib, he became furious and blackened and started killing. Then he became an enemy of the Ministry of Magic and started a fight with Dumbledore. This logical chain is not unreasonable and can be regarded as a climax, but it feels very abrupt and unsmooth. The protagonist's personality switches back and forth from steady to impulsive to steady to impulsive. I have always said that I would use methods other than violence to change time, but in the end I still returned to violence to solve it. It's not that I'm against violence, it's just that this kind of reckless violence without planning is not in line with the character set for the protagonist. Dreams and prophecies also have this feeling. Although there are a lot of extras marked, are the extras inserted in the order of the main text and connected to the timeline of the main text really extras? Another example is the three dreams the protagonist talks to an old man about. Almost everyone in this book can predict dreams, and the writing is very detailed. But it feels like the author was writing for fun, rather than writing to advance the plot. If you put aside the abrupt writing style or the intermittent second-level literacy, it is really enough for me.

​ ​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ She Sheng​​​ she wants to have a bottom-up revolution she needs enough population to support it! If there are only a few people, the oppressor has a gun and can suppress the others. If there are dozens or hundreds of people, a few of them with guns will be enough to suppress them. Bottom-up resistance cannot occur without enough numbers. As described in the original Harry Potter books, the population of the entire wizarding world in the UK may only be tens of thousands. It seems unlikely that such a small amount of oppression and revolution will happen. After all, magic exists, and even planting some pumpkins in the forest like Hagrid is enough to survive. As for oppression, when there is only a small population and everyone has magic, if you oppress me, I will run away, and I can live happily in a forest by myself. The Ministry of Magic feels more like a public organization, without too many powerful agencies.

It felt very fragmented. It was good in the early stage. After Long Chang realized the Tao, he thought that he would slowly develop and unify the wizarding world in a non-forced form. After that, he went on a killing spree. This was very sudden and the feeling of fragmentation was serious.

First of all, Harry Potter is a fairy tale. Rowling didn't even try to build a logical setting. The magic she set on the forehead was too buggy (fire calendar, iron armor spell, disembodiment, compound potion, oblivion spell, Muggle dispelling spell, legilimens, confusion spell, etc.), According to Rowling Given the settings, it is impossible for wizards to lose to ordinary people, but thinking about it conversely, there is no need for wizards to fight against ordinary people. First, the population is sparse. Second, wizards will also appear among ordinary people. Third, based on the first point, there is no problem for wizards to use magic to parasitize ordinary people's society. As long as wizards are not exposed, there is no danger at all, because ordinary people have no idea that there is a group of wizards. If you don't know that there is such a thing, how can you be hostile to him. But you are like Grindelwald, insisting on being exposed, insisting on ruling ordinary people, insisting on exposing your health bar and fighting ordinary people, it is too outrageous. No matter how you think about it, the best situation is for wizards to hide and use magic to draw resources from ordinary people. You can still get support from ordinary people, and there is no risk of hostility.

In a real fight, a wizard would not let an invisibility spell or a Muggle expulsion spell act like an evil spirit in the smoke. A considerable number of Muggle-born wizards will directly turn to Muggles. In addition, the Muggle base is large and new wizards are constantly awakening. In the end, a joint force of half wizards and half Muggles will be formed. The wizard camp will rely on the Imperius Curse to create puppets, so it's hard to say which side will win.

I'd give it an 8 out of 10 points. It's a good fan work in itself, and you can start your own magical world from a new angle. The next thing is unacceptable. The protagonist sets an upper limit for magic, and uses Voldemort as an example to show that one's magical ability cannot rule the world. This is quite unreasonable. An isolated example does not prove it. Just because he can't do it doesn't mean that others can't do it. If you say that Voldemort lost the war because everyone opposed it, Voldemort's original failure was due to Lily's fault. The magic rebounded the death curse, which proved that personal power is the only power in the magical world, and what the protagonist thought was unreasonable Also, the protagonist chose to contact the prophecy professor in an attempt to find a true prophecy through more false prophecies. Should this be complained? A character who chooses to put everything on the prophecy is really the protagonist shown by the author before? The essence of this is still based on magic. I prefer to understand it differently. As long as the prophecy is observed by others, it will develop towards the content of the prophecy. It is better not to know the prophecy or understand the prophecy, but to believe in yourself.

To be honest, I have no feelings about the wizarding world. Think about it, you were taken to school after being detected with magic power. After studying for seven years, you found out that most of the people who can work in the wizarding world have family backgrounds. You were given two options: to work as a thug at the Ministry of Magic or to start your own business, or to go out into the real world. But when you went out, you found that you only had a primary school diploma and magic was banned. Even if you have knowledge that is no worse than that of college students, it is useless and you can only do very basic things. It can be said that Hogwarts is basically like a factory that supplies thugs to the wizarding world. It recruits capable people from the outside world. It is said to be prevention. The result is just that it is afraid that magical abilities will spread and attract troops. Of course, the country should more or less know about the wizarding world and just ignore it. Of course, if you don't want to be a thug, you will have other options. Either become a dark wizard, become a dark lord if you are more powerful, or be wanted by the wizarding world.

Speaking of which, the Muggle wizard debate has been talking about the top wizards killing the Muggle government, but how many people can do it? And the Ministry of Magic alone can't use Dumbledore. Do old men like Dumbledore really have the talent to clearly plan a strategy?

It was so well written that my hand unconsciously raised 45°

There are too many original texts lately. I am reading fan fiction, not just to read Rowling.

The current chase is over, and the protagonist is hired by Old Den to be a professor at Hogwarts. The reason has not been written yet, but there must be a logical reason. The failed art student was rescued from prison by the principal of the university and became a professor to teach children🤔. Did the protagonist secretly resist Lao Fu? Mimi provided resources to the Order of the Phoenix? You have to give me a logical reason, otherwise I will be disgusted by it.

So if this book can be written, it should lead others to revolution in the end.

Are there any novels in which ordinary people compete with the magic world? The magic world may easily kill the president, but when all the ordinary people just want to kill the magic world, I don't think the magic world can defeat ordinary people, but it may lead to a situation where nuclear bombs are dropped randomly.

Many people can find problems and symptoms, but they cannot find the answers or the medicine.

A very good book that makes me lift my hands on my own

Ah, you've been dead for three months and you're alive again?

I just went to check out the official setting. Voldemort founded the Death Eaters in 1945, died in 1980, and wreaked havoc for 35 years. Voldemort's high-pressure rule was unpopular. Dumbledore had been hiding in Hogwarts. He had no way to defeat Voldemort. In the end, he sacrificed his own students with prophecies to kill Voldemort. Old Voldemort's influence spread all over Europe, and only America was not involved, because he was simply powerful.

One, the two merge peacefully, with wizards ruling Muggles. Because wizards are much more competitive than ordinary Muggles under equal conditions.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         . You mean to let the three of them discuss Taoism on behalf of different schools of thought at the same time? Or free competition? ? At the end of the discussion, wizards still have only one attitude towards Muggles, which will bring nothing but war and pain. Muggles have technology, there are Muggle wizards, and there are also a large number of pure-blood wizards in the wizarding world. This will only bring about a war more terrifying than Voldemort. It was also the war that Grindelwald had always feared.

Haokan

Come on

It's about to be put on the shelves, here's another one

That's just three pictures?

This novel is great. Among the novels in the Harry Potter series, this one is at least in the top ten. The others are all old works. This one is worth reading.

This Harry Potter fanfic made me excited to read it. It is written in a very stylish way. It is a rare and good book. If you haven't read it, you might as well read it.

I have read a lot of articles like this, but this one seems to be the most touching, unique and fascinating. I can read the latest in one go👍