Daluo Jinxian Who Walked Out of Dazhu Peak

The soul of a middle-aged person is written like a kindergartener

Shen Nong is dead, so he has to burn paper.

I don't know what's so good about that broken stick. Why do I want to travel through time?

The protagonist likes to work for free to give away things, and the author likes to change the settings of the original work, and then add new settings to suppress the speed of cultivation. The ability setting of the Nine Heavens Divine Weapon is useless 😅

The protagonist is sometimes good and sometimes evil, inexplicably evil, and the golden finger is also a panacea, you can use it however you want 😥

Set up a Taoist college professor for the protagonist? It's not that I look down on the author, can ordinary people write with this level of knowledge? Don't let the whole emperor's golden pole come out...

The author is really not particular about the words he uses. What about the cruelty of society? Society is a word used in urban writing, while fantasy should be about the cruelty of the spiritual world or the world. There are also casual cultivators who are on the seventh or eighth level of Yuqing Realm. Qingyun Sect has made all the techniques public, right?

I saw it was written by a child again! Does Goldfinger just make you feel at ease? There is nothing to say about the creation technique at the beginning, you just made it public! It's so heartless! The bet is that there are no bad guys in Zhu Xian, right? You don't kill people to seize treasures, do you? A child over ten years old can create exercises! Who would believe that there is no treasure? But the protagonist believes it! Otherwise, can it be made public? ! !

The main character is like a licking dog, so disgusting.

. . . Lu Xueqi's character design was turned into a romantic drama, it was withdrawn

Why don't you try to purify the protagonist's brain?

For the sake of water, Lin Jingyu was forced to reach a higher level. In the original novel, Lin Jingyu was just a little Kalami with an extreme mentality. If Cangsong hadn't betrayed him, he would have gone to the ancestor's ancestral hall for so long that Wan Jianyi wouldn't be a bird like him. If you were to write about Cangsong's rebellion and no one could climb Longshou Peak, no matter what, it would be a story about Qi Hao and not a person with a biased mentality. Excited, high-minded but low-handed. In the early stage, Lin Jingyu had no qualifications, was arrogant, had no brains, and was not outstanding at all. On the contrary, Zhang Xiaofan couldn't stand the blow when he saw Tian Linger's private meeting with Qi Hao. He wanted to die and get lucky, so he used Lu Xueqi's big move. At this stage, Zhang Xiaofan can't force Lu Xueqi's big move.

I wrote a lot about giving away all my hard-earned treasures, but I can't read any of them.

We have a fool named Chen Feng 🙂 who is very entertaining

Once you enter Zhu Xian, it's like Dazhu Peak. It's not interesting at all. The plot is not new at all. The author's writing is okay, but there is no imagination or creativity 😒

The person who writes this kind of novel can easily become the wet nurse and thug who originally wrote the protagonist.

In Chapter 14, a time traveler directly asked Xiaofan where the blood-devouring beads came from, and also slandered Monk Puzhi. To be honest, Puzhi is much more noble than the protagonist. Is it wrong for people to pursue dual cultivation of Buddhism and Taoism?

Dear readers, if you have any suggestions or criticisms, please speak here. The author will review them one by one. Some suggestions that will not shake the foundation of this book will be adopted if they make sense.                                                      Of course, I suggest you speak in a civilized manner and avoid personal attacks. Otherwise, the author will look embarrassed and not speak, but it will appear that the quality of the person making personal attacks needs to be improved! In fact, the author is a newcomer, which he has never concealed. It is inevitable for newcomers to write new books to have some inaccuracies. In addition, fan fiction always has some innovations, and this book integrates the world of Classic of Mountains and Seas, so some places are indeed different from the original work, and may even be quite different. Please forgive me for this!

It's so funny, the main character's name is the same as my good friend 😄😄

As a bookworm of more than 20 years, as soon as I saw the second original world and the illogical logic, I quickly collected it and refused to order it. As expected, I couldn't grasp it and it collapsed 😅. Three of the 5 copies of the Qidian Zhuxian fanfic have collapsed today 🔨

No matter good or evil, just look at the standpoint, it makes sense that modern people are more feudal than ancient people.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Lu Xueqi is cute😊

The author writes very well. I like this kind of enlightenment novel.

Zhu Xian's power level is not high and he can ascend to other worlds. If the original story is not written yet, it will definitely collapse. Also, Douluo Continent is a mess. It's not a good choice for you to start a Douluo fandom in your next book. It will definitely not be as good as the results at the beginning of this book. You should first search the results of Douluo fandom on this site. It is not recommended to start with Douluo.