Secret Treasure Hunting on Puro Life Island

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I hope that the author will continue to work hard and focus entirely on describing the development of things. Unexpectedly, the rhythm and writing style were not good in some aspects.

Generally speaking, the paragraphing of the first few chapters is a flaw. If a paragraph is too long, the reader will look tired. The plot is generally okay, but it lacks detailed descriptions. As time goes by and you get older, you will naturally know how to change it. A good work requires time, polish and accumulation, and the story in your heart will naturally be expressed. There is still a long way to go, don't be impatient for success, let's work together＾0＾~ I wish you progress in your studies and a happy life, please work hard＾0＾~

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Personally, I think it's okay, a little lacking.

Love is the most important thing, sincerity is the magic weapon, there are still many logical problems in the text, keep working hard

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