Tang Gong

The water was so messy and muddy, it was like the water falling from the Tianhe River for nine days! ! ! If you are not in the trap, run away! I've caught up with the latest chapter. An incident shocked everyone for 3 chapters, and I haven't written about shocking Yang Guang yet. I guess I should write it today, but it has no progress in terms of the plot! ! ! Fuck it, give it up, give it up, give it up early and feel happy

Is there too much drama for the female supporting character named Cui? The heroine is less than one-third of the female supporting character. She is here to read about the Sui and Tang Dynasties, not to see you write about the love between children. There is also poison in Chapter 89, where a female family member of an enemy general is captured by the enemy. No matter whether this female family member was forced before, but this one woman can walk to the protagonist's bedroom alone? Author, come and see what he wrote

After reading Chapter 17, I was already poisoned and died. It was too poisonous.

First of all, the author's writing style made me feel comfortable to read, and the pace was not too fast, which I recognized very much. Secondly, I have always felt that the whole text is a bit awkward (it can't be called a problem yet). If you were to ask me about my impression of this article, it would probably be - a mixed, oriental travel-oriented writing style + a house-fighting plot that creates flat characters. After seeing this, some readers may accuse me of labeling, but unfortunately, this is my first impression, and I have to say it is too sad. Then, some readers may argue that this is not just a travel style. What I want to state here is that this is just my personal understanding. My initial understanding of travel was that of Western adventure novels, where the protagonist fights monsters and upgrades in an infinite loop (when, where, what encounters, how to deal with them, and then the cycle repeats. The writing is so straightforward that there is no foreshadowing). Next, some readers may point out that this is not just a house fight. I admit that it is one-sided to summarize the protagonist's actions in family relations by using the house fight. It's just a pity that in the current chapter, I see that this part is not only a large problem, but also particularly vivid or prominent in this article, so that after reading a chapter, the only impression I have of the protagonist is that he met a certain parent and was protected/scorned/praised. Finally, this is my understanding of the author's writing method so far. Please forgive me if it offends me. I am not writing a bunch of book reviews here to ask people who read them to say "Oh, look, there is a bookworm with this fallen book bag" and other sarcastic remarks. I am just talking about some discussion here from the perspective of a reader, not a blind criticism. Of course, if this statement is fortunate enough to be read by the author, then I will be very happy.

If you pretend to be someone else's little brother and leave your life and death in the control of others, what's the use of being awesome? In this novel, Li Er wants to kill the protagonist's whole family. The protagonist wants to make the whole family stretch their necks and wait for the knife to chop them off. The early development is very good.

It's so ugly. You can't keep people like this. It's too watery, and the purpose of time travel is to be a licking dog for others. 😰😰😰😰

The latest provincial flow, 100,000 people outside the city, and hostages are in front, and the army is behind to attack the city. The 200 defenders of the protagonist open the city gate and place a suspension bridge in front of them, kill the opposing generals, rescue some hostages and capture the opposing cavalry.

This author is from the UC department. No matter what the protagonist does, he will be shocked for several chapters.

I'm afraid there's something wrong with my brain when it comes to hybrid rice at the beginning. If nothing else, can the water and fertilizer conditions support it? Even if you figure it out, I'm afraid it won't be possible to destroy it in just two years. And in troubled times, do you have the decades to develop stable and heritable traits? Clicking on the technology tree is not just a matter of words. It is better to develop hybrid rice than to develop some manure and compost technology that suits the situation at that time. Not to mention more, the yield per acre can be increased by one-fifth, and you can be treated as a god at that time.

The first part was okay, but the second part was a big collapse on the battlefield. The first part kept boasting about the protagonist's military skills, and then he went to the battlefield to get a sword, which really amused me. A sword could block the attack of the Sui Dynasty cavalry's 30-pound sword, and only broke a hole. The protagonist only took a few steps back and was slightly injured, and the armor was broken. Fortunately, I don't want to talk about this anymore, and I chased after him. Kill the enemy, saying that you don't have the advantage in numbers, so slow down. Brother, you are a cavalry. You are playing with point arrancar. The other side is also a cavalry. If you slow down, you will die. The cavalry hedge is to see who is faster and whose horse is weak first. You have fewer people. If you are the first to slow down, others will be more excited. Once you rush into the formation, you will have no one.

If the male protagonist follows history, Li Er is still some time away from reaching that position. Li Er became the King of Qin only because of his outstanding military exploits. If he follows Li Er and stands with his merits, will Li Yuan have checks and balances on the protagonist and Li Er? From now on, he is constantly scheming against the male protagonist. The male protagonist also guessed that, seeing now, the front is decisive in killing, but the back feels a little weak in the knees. How come the male protagonist is still in charge of Jinyang's military. What to say next depends on the author, how well you handle it.

I feel it is more appropriate to call me Tang Gong.

The author's military skills are poor. Rescue Qinghe was selected from a thousand prisoners. At that time, the prison held more than a thousand people, and 600 were selected to go to the battlefield without any training. They were familiar with drums and flags. What's the difference between this and sending someone to death? I made a few comments objectively, but actually deleted the post. Your ranking in the top of the forced recommendation was based on everyone's vote, not how good your book is. Please give me your monthly vote.

After reading Chapter 139, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The verbosity I wrote earlier was bearable, but in the end, because it was Li Yuan who wanted to cause trouble, he gave up his guard and went to see Li Yuan alone regardless of the fact that someone was trying to kill him. Is this still a mentally mature general? It would be impossible for anyone else to put their lives in the hands of others. If you want to say that he is immature, what happened to his previous actions? Things turned so abruptly that I subscribed to the following chapters for nothing.

The writing was good at the beginning, but as soon as Li Shimin got to the point, he started to add more elements. It was a bit disgusting and I couldn't stand it anymore.

I haven't read it for a while. Why is it written like this? The protagonist has always been so awesome, choosing front lines and ambushes, just to lick Li Er. It's better to find Li Mi from the beginning and defeat Li Yuan. I'm going to take this route. I won't read it.

The setting is good, but giving the protagonist a time traveler almost makes him look like a fool. For the sake of fun, he forcibly creates a poisonous spot. Your teacher asks you to stay a few more days to prepare for teaching you good things. If you have to leave immediately, the body will not be found for a while. If you deliberately bury it under the bed with new soil and report it to the official, it is too poisonous. He is attracted to women at every turn. Has the protagonist never seen a woman? Also, in troubled times, your father went to great lengths to give you a well-groomed sword and buy a bullshit hairpin to please women. Is the author writing a historical novel or a romance novel for women? I really can't stand it anymore, it's so poisonous

The update is so slow, it's a waste of time... The plot and everything else are acceptable, but I can't stand your update and the out-of-context points. If you keep doing this, I will have no choice but to give up 😥

The noble attributes are all blinded by the halo of the protagonist, and the outrageous mother opens the door to outrageousness.

If you want to write interesting historical articles, you should write interesting historical articles. Does it have to be literary and youthful? It's okay if there's not enough emotional foreshadowing. Do you write so much to force readers to empathize with you?

A modern man, with the fearless spirit of a communist warrior, blossomed in the Sui and Tang Dynasties. . . . Really funny

Alas, the author has created a new genre of novels called: shocking style. (It shocked me away...)

The sword is a ceremonial weapon, and marshals do not fight when holding swords. If you are a vanguard and hold a sword, you are too slow to be afraid of death. As for those fat and muscular men, unless you stab the vital part just right, it will be a skin injury. The key point is that these big men are all wearing armor. Brother, I can't understand how you can defeat the armored vanguard on the opposite side. Who can break the helmet with an arrow! ! ! !

That grandmother of yours suddenly wrote a lot of sensational things without any foreshadowing. I slapped you in the face. You wrote like this.

The New Year has been cast, sit back and cheer. As a suggestion, don't make some of the people around the protagonist too imbecile and uncomfortable just for the sake of some plots and conflicts. Of course, it is more important to follow your own rhythm and ideas. Come on, I love watching. I came all the way from Qin Gong. Come on, happy new year!

Well written, but it's a pity that I discovered it too early

I just said why this book title is so familiar🙂It turns out to be the same author🤭

The book is really good and I love reading it. I want to keep reading it and update it faster. This will be a masterpiece.

Update soon, come on, cum! ! !

The plot is advancing too fast. With the protagonist's speed of progress and fighting ability, it is possible to defeat Dou Jiande and then compete with Li Shimin using Hebei as his base. Do you still need to assist Li Tang? In the subsequent attacks on Longxi, Central Plains, and Hebei, I, Taizong, will not be needed.