Qin Gong

After reading Chapter 200, I couldn't stand it anymore The opening is very eye-catching, with small characters seizing opportunities to climb up in a changing environment, which makes people addicted at once But it becomes more and more vicious as you go to the end. First, the character descriptions are weak, most of the personalities are the same, and the mouth habits are the same. It's really too much. The whole story is "you kid", not to mention that as a historical novel, it doesn't have enough sense of the atmosphere of the era. It's obviously a story about the late Warring States period, but it feels like the Ming and Qing Dynasties when I read it The story is becoming more and more mediocre as it is written, with routines of pretentiousness and slap in the face. Compared with the beginning, the quality has dropped too much.

Drive high and go low, wasting dozens of dollars on me! What the hell is written on the back! At the beginning, the uncle bullies his family in various ways. Later, the protagonist is still so kind to the uncle. I believe him. I asked the author, have you time traveled to a dog? It's so funny,

It's really hard, I can't bear to update and ask for leave. In the past five chapters, the beauty is long and the beauty is short. The woman with the white left hand is extremely beautiful, but the right hand is so beautiful in the world. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, I love your cow beauty, update water, your plot is tight. If you want to watch these yy plots, just find a city and enjoy it, but I think I wanted to watch Qin in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, and I wanted to watch the feudal princes in the troubled times. As the old man said, I definitely wanted to be a feudal prince, but in the end, I was granted the title of a beautiful woman. It was really difficult.

This monthly vote for you is a waste. This is a subscription. I can't bear to follow the plot for fear that it will end too quickly and make less money, right? It starts with a watery plot and creates a bunch of useless side conflicts to fool us. At best, it's called the word count, but at worst, it's like we don't know how to count, and we go to the grave to burn newspapers to fool the ghosts. Now, with the flood of bad reviews, we continue to go our own way and will fight to the end. Good luck, I hope you finish writing tens of millions of words

I was about to vomit, but I couldn't bear to watch. It was really poisoning me to death! Everyone says "you kid" to the protagonist, every three sentences, oh my god, so awesome

I started subscribing to this book on November 13 last year. The writing style and logic of this book are good in the early stage. But from the perspective of the later chapters, the quality is not at the same level as the previous chapters. The plot is dragging and there are serious problems with the logic. As a friend said before, in ancient times there was a strict hierarchy in society, especially in the Qin State after the reform. How could an uncle like the male protagonist casually enter the military meeting room? If the author himself did this deliberately, then did the male protagonist disregard the safety of his family? It feels a bit like forcibly subduing the male protagonist's intelligence. This is my personal shallow understanding and some personal feelings. It's a bit annoying that the updates have been delayed and the number of chapters that were mentioned before have not been filled in, but this book is really better than other books, so I have been subscribing. The recent plots are really disappointing and it's a pity to abandon them. The content of the articles these days is really difficult for me to understand. So I decided to stop subscribing to this book from now on.

The feeling of waking up from a dream just after taking off clothes. And the plot behind it is not very good. There are too many characters involved.

I just entered the pit, if you have anything to say that is not good, please feel free to comment. In the setting of the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, a young man's soul travels across the Qi Kingdom. He has a golden finger and can see and communicate with his soul to learn from it. Later, he took on the identity of a nobleman who was assassinated and went to the Bai family of Qin as a spy. He used the background of the Bai family to join the Qin army. He started as a soldier and relied on the military merit system of the Qin Dynasty to gradually embark on the path of becoming a prince and becoming a prime minister. The novel is slow to pick up, but there are moments of climax. The Qin Dynasty novels I have read so far are quite outstanding. The characters are all very exciting and vivid, with flesh and blood. They represent what I imagined the characters should be like during the Warring States Period. The Golden Finger is useful but not too powerful. In addition, I deliberately downplayed its existence and focused on describing the difficulty of the battlefield. This resulted in a very tight overall rhythm without being abrupt, and the war scenes were good. I hope it will be another good book similar to "Qin Officials".

To be honest, I quite like your Qin Gong. Some parts can be explained through Little Golden Finger. Although there is some drag in the middle, it can still be rounded. But in the end, even if he is not allowed to live in seclusion, it will be fine. He must be forced to live in seclusion. To be honest, his grandmother has not seen Ying Zheng yet. Sigh, it's understandable that you have something to do at home, but it would be nice to at least make a side story. This is how I put half of this novel here. Then start writing a new book, okay? And it's still the same routine and the same rhythm, so do we think you will be in the same situation at the end? Something happened at home again? And then it sucks and makes excuses? I'm convinced, no wonder your novel is not popular, just ask for your life.

After chasing it for so long, it's getting more and more boring. It's too confusing and confusing, so I gave up.

Less than ten chapters, 4 shocks, four shocks in a row, doubts are a bit watered down, let's just keep it up

Nmd, I know it will take some preparation to reveal your identity in the future, but how did you write the disclosure through your uncle? What was Bai Yan thinking? He was deceived like that, and he rescued his uncle without sending anyone to watch? How many times has the uncle lied to people, stolen money, and harmed others? The plot is not so smooth, it is a lot of thunder 😒😒😒😒

The character setting is too unclear. It is extremely unreasonable for a modern person to travel through the past and know all kinds of technologies, from farming to military equipment. The author should think about what he would do if he traveled to the past. A small character who has just traveled to the past wants to change history and change the basic necessities of life for farmers at the bottom. This is simply impossible, and the character setting cannot stand. There is no setting for character growth, it just takes off. Even Goldfinger has explanations.

Although the updates have not been very stable in the past few weeks, but this is the best Qin Yuanwen article I have seen. Go on and write it down~

Author, have you recently bought a sea view house? Is your brain soaked by the sea, or are your coding hands soaked? From the sophisticated taste at first to the seafood flavor now

The truth is water, I don't know what to write now. I used to be able to read it, but now I can't. It's a pity this book! I've given up and see you again!

Here, you could have written in detail how Mi Zhu died, how he planned it, and how he killed Chang Pingjun's son. You could have written it very excitingly, or you could have written a lot of words, but you just skipped it? Author, you wrote so many details about Zilu selling his wife. What's the point of this? This is a male channel, big brother, not a female channel. It doesn't require so much empathy 😰

This book is a thrilling historical novel. When I read the first ten chapters of this book, I could deeply feel the era and world view written by the author. After reading the first thirty chapters, I could clearly understand the story the author wanted to describe. After reading the first seventy chapters, I can only say that the storyline and emotional rendering of this book are addictive. The protagonist of this book is a time traveler. As a time traveler, he does have an ability, that is, he can see the souls of injustice. As a protagonist who travels from the future to ancient times, he does not have the omniscience of history in other books, nor does he have the noble status that he was born with in other books. He is just a civilian, a time traveler with flesh and blood and emotions. Through the author, I saw a vast story. Here I seemed to have witnessed the battles and changes of the Qin and Han Dynasties with my own eyes, as if I was dreaming back to that era. Having said so much, next is the protagonist Shui Yan, or Bai Yan. Bai Yan is kind, but also strong, and even more serious! Through his golden finger ability, he learned many abilities from his masters, and these abilities contributed to his brilliant deeds. At the same time, we can also feel his true feelings. After that, he gradually changed, becoming both kind and ruthless, and he became a "person". The protagonist Bai Yan went to Qin just to seek merit! As for the plot and writing, I originally wanted to say some clichés, such as logical research, exciting plot, fascinating and exciting. But I think I should say that I saw a grand era in the author's writing, I felt the atmosphere of this era, and I accepted the setting of this era. Not only did I not seem to be as boring as ordinary historical novels, but I was looking forward to the next plot. At the same time, I think the characters' IQs are all online, which makes the novel even more interesting! Especially the protagonist's journey to seek "go" makes me excited and yearning for it! It is recommended to read this book while listening to music. Although it is easy to get distracted, the experience will be better!

Although the rhetoric and vocabulary used in this book are still a little immature, it may be considered a rare masterpiece in the genre of writing about the early Qin Dynasty. I am even more looking forward to the author's growth in the next book.

Am I the only one who thinks the author has a problem with sentence fragmentation? The way this sentence is divided into two sentences reminds me of Jia Qianqian😓 Is it true that no one told the author that there is something wrong with his sentence fragmentation?

It's too watery and I can't afford to chase it.

Hehe, I was shocked again! I didn't expect it✌️(◕‿-)✌️

The world is under one roof, it's quite shocking, I hope the story lasts for a long time

Can you tell me when it will be updated? I will pay to chase you. This novel suddenly disappeared?

1 77

Has the author changed? Do you know how it feels when something I read so well suddenly poisons me? I suggest you skip Chapter 155.

White Talented Girl

Shui Yan (shui yan), Shui is not a surname, but a place name. Yan is the name of the protagonist. Because the village is called Shuicun, but others call it Yan, it is called Shuiyan. If the village is unknown, or if it goes to other vassal states, when many people talk about the protagonist, it should be called Qi Yan.

Add more updates to connect the climax...

Can't you write a book now that you don't have a weird name?