Conquering the Seas, Starting with a Torpedo Boat

The writing is a bit abstract, and the background is confusing The introduction is about an imaginary battle. At the beginning, the protagonist actually drove a ship to a British port to lay mines, and the opposite was actually an iron-clad wooden ship? ? The subordinates were still stunned. The protagonist also said that "the current mainstream is wooden-hulled ships" and "the era of sailing battleships has passed." They thought the setting was the early 19th century. I went, and then said 1914 How long has the British 1914 Dreadnought been installed? The dreadnoughts were built, and even the super-dreadnoughts were launched. There were also ironclads, and the ironclad wooden ships were considered old in the age of ironclads, okay? And then they supported the French Army in the battle with the British Army (Ansa is a British guy, right?)? ? My history is not very good, but I remember that Britain and France had already formed an alliance with Tsarist Russia several years before World War I. There was no direct military conflict, right? The author's arrogance almost spans a century And the protagonist has offended the navy boss and has been the captain of the cannon fodder ship. What if there is a wow plug-in? Without ships and guns, is a naval battle still a death? It's either a wooden minelayer or a suicide torpedo. The better thing is the supply ship Not to mention letting aristocratic officers paint the deck. This is a direct insult to the aristocratic system. If the Duke wants to get the protagonist, there is no need to bring the entire French aristocracy with him. Really, letting the protagonist be a cannon fodder captain and attack with the main force is enough to kill him. , It would be difficult to let him attack with a single ship like this. After all, the sea is so big And it was 1914 on the eve of World War I. France actually didn't even have a dreadnought in service. It had just launched its first ship. The French navy was greatly weakened. There were still 4 ships in the official history. Moreover, the French navy was weak, so this golden finger was considered a bit of a waste.

I didn't understand the plot of killing prisoners in Chapter 69. There is no way to kill people in a war. Because four of my own soldiers died, I killed all the surrendered soldiers of the other side and piled their heads into a landscape. You must know that at the beginning of the First World War, everyone had not figured out the rules that should be taught, but they still had to be taught. And if you do this, the enemy will not let go of any crew member from the protagonist's country.

When writing a book, you still need to check more historical documents At about one stop, that is, around 1914, the British Navy had a total of 69 capital ships, including 10 super-dreadnoughts, 10 dreadnoughts, 9 battlecruisers and 40 pre-dreadnoughts. These ships were world-leading at the time in terms of performance and tonnage. The total tonnage of the British Navy is 2.714 Million tons, ranking first in the world, far surpassing the second-ranked Germany (1.3 Million tons) and the third-ranked United States (985,000 tons). France... Hehe

As the title shows, a new female character has been introduced in the last two chapters: Shijia Gur, it really made me laugh to death, this woman wants to die In China, the emperor asked the eldest princess to marry the eldest son of the Marquis family. This eldest son is still a partial general relying on his solid military achievements, and will definitely become a cavalry general or even a general in more than ten years. At the same time, the second-in-command of the empire, such as the prime minister or the minister of military aircraft, basically acquiesced that the eldest son was his son-in-law (as for who is older than the eldest princess or the prime minister's daughter, it is another matter). Then, without the eldest princess making it very, very, very clear that she disliked her eldest son, the eldest princess's maid or female bodyguard imprisoned, humiliated and even tried to kill her eldest son on unfounded charges and really took practical actions. This maid offended the royal family, the prime minister, the nobles, the military and the military nobles all at once. She threw these people's faces to the ground, stepped on them and even spat on them. How many tens of thousands of people do these nine SB tribes dare to play like this? ? ?

I thought they were old friends, but it turned out not to be the case. In war novels, you spend most of your time breeding. It's not that you don't like it, but that you shouldn't sell it like a sheep. Hope to work hard

I have a model of a minelayer, hehe

Although the writing is abstract, the author is Wo Pi. I have to take a look.

The Emperor of the Sea, well, as long as there is no technical generational difference in battleships, (in the current drama, the French navy is barely considered a second-rate fleet, and the shipbuilding plan is biased towards small ships of the offshore fleet) the protagonist is surrounded in the later stage, and the tonnage, firepower, and number of ships are There seems to be a big gap. Just based on the current equipment (full map field of view, there is a range limit, it is not clear how big it is; increased firepower, increased rate of fire, increased pipe damage), without changing the strength of the French navy and maritime communications, there is no possibility that the siege can bring the flagship back. Not big, it is very likely that the whole ship will be destroyed (a sinking in a naval battle means a ship and a man), and the First World War has not yet started, and if the basic situation is not changed in the twenty years before World War II, it will become more and more difficult to fight in the future. After all, the fleet cannot reach the shore, and there is no way to fight with the coastal defense artillery; and the copywriting It is within five years. To put it simply, the progress of the plot is a bit slow. It takes time to collect funds and build ships (a serious ship is not a temporary sampan). There are too many negative buffs in the navy that have not yet begun to fade, and I feel that there is no hope (Emperor of the Sea). The plot is well written and I like it quite a bit; but the time is too short and the goal feels unachievable. It feels like one person is fighting against a country. I look forward to the follow-up development. PS: How many chapters do you plan to write in this book? (I hope it's not too short, it will look better if it's a longer version)

The writing is quite good, why no one reads it 🙂

This book is incomprehensible, the plot is incoherent, the logic is confusing, and the dialogue is completely wrong. Chapter 7