The Peerless Tang Sect: Starting from the Kidnapping of Wang Dong

How should I put it? I tried too hard. Although I knew it was a single female protagonist, the protagonist acted too studly and it felt like there was no need to make it so purposeful.

Why don't you read the original work with a single heroine?

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Wang Donger

You are the one who indulges others and curses them, my friend, you are the real one.

I read the beginning again. The main problem was that the relationship progressed too fast and was inexplicable. Wang Dong started to get jealous just after they started running. There was no plot to enhance their relationship. Why did Wang Dong start to like the protagonist? Compared with Haodong in the original work, this is more like a spiritual suggestion. I suggest the author change the beginning, otherwise he will really persuade him to quit and he will not be able to persevere.

I'm not bad at looking like this in my divine clothes

Good news, but the rest of Qiankun Wenqinggu is a complete mess. The main character is very strong and very well presented, and I feel like the author has gone too far. The main plot feels untouched, and the quality of the extras cannot be said to be good.

30% to level 15, where does the energy go?

I think it's pretty good... Although it's a little ugly from the front, but it looks better from the back.

Moreover, the ability of the male protagonist in the early stage and how he awakened his martial spirit were not mentioned.

It's okay for Wang Dong to be jealous, but it's unreasonable for your protagonist to kneel on the washboard. Now there are two men. And isn't it a bit too obvious and too fast? It feels like the emotional line is jumping a bit.

He is a sugar pill, and he rebels against three people and abuses three people. I wrote it just for the sake of writing it.

The peerless Tang Sect Angel has arrived. You can check it out. There is also a previous work, Douluo Dalu: My Backstage Is Really Hard

Do you want author recommendation votes?

Although I don't have a monthly vote for the author, I have a recommendation vote. I will vote for you every day. I hope you don't dislike it. I also hope that the author can write a good ending for Wang Dong's story. There are too few peerless fics about Wang Dong. They are either unfinished or discontinued. The earliest Wang Dong fic I read is called Changing Dormitories with Huo Yuhao in the beginning. The early and middle stages are very good and sweet. But in the later period, I don't know what evil the author had. He had to write a second system traveler, which made me feel disgusted. I felt that I had stolen the male protagonist's limelight. Now the author is always cutting off updates. The second peerless fan I read is called Peerless Light. Although Wang Dong is not the heroine, it is also quite good. The male protagonist nicknamed Wang Dong Big Goose. The third peerless fan made me laugh the most. It's the one written by Riyue Yuhao. That author loves to make jokes too much. For example, the invincible Zuo Fei fell down again. It made me laugh to death. Haha. Unfortunately, the author also stopped updating. I think the author can learn from that author's way of making jokes. However, I still respect the author's own ideas. Personal opinions. If you don't like it, don't criticize

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Will you tell Wang Donger everything later?

Who can recommend me a few Dou Er books? The main ones are Ling Luochen. I also recommend Ling Luochen alone. If there is any good hope, he will recommend it to me. Nowadays, the new books are worse than the last. The sky is full of exposure. When I see this kind of book, my eyes darken [tears][tears][tears]

Is there any extra book about this? Can you recommend something?