
Versatile Mage: Dominate the Holy City with the Power of Space
全职法师:以空间之威,君临圣城
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 186k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Opening, about 400,000 words
The topic was quite novel and good, but the handling was not very good. Let's not talk about the Emperor Sutra. It gave several new skills. The summoned beast has no sense of existence at all. Mo Fan and Abyss have not been dealt with yet. None of them knew whether he existed or not. Every opportunity was taken away. The other one didn't even write about the solution, so a few people jumped in. They didn't even know whether Zhan Kongxi was sacrificed or not.
Personal opinion
1: The content is concise and not obviously disgusting, but it is very much like a running account 2: There are a lot of typos, the sentences in many places are very bad, and the reading is not smooth, it feels like it was written by AI 3: The protagonist's information is not clear, the protagonist's talent and strength are not obvious, the skills are not expressive enough, and the skills given by the system are too high-powered. Not strong enough 4: It can be seen that the author wants to write a plot for the heroine, but the writing is not good. In many places, the heroine starts to like the protagonist for no reason. At present, it is difficult to see the relationship between the heroine and the protagonist. Only Mu Ningxue is better, Mu Nujiao and Ai Tutu feel more inexplicable (personal opinion!!!) 5: The fifth personality is activated.