Pirates: Archangel's Plan of Action

It is not recommended for those who are soft-hearted. The protagonist is very murderous. From my personal point of view, the conflict between the protagonist's family and the world government is similar to the conflict between Palestine and Israel. Both sides want to kill each other. Even if I am mentally prepared, I still don't feel comfortable watching it (I don't want the protagonist to kill Luffy, but I feel that the author is very likely to write this. If he does, I will decisively quit) But some people should not use China and Japan as an example. This is different from the current conflict between China and Japan. There is no conflict between the Chinese people and the Japanese people that requires the death of each other.

Don't be pretty with your pig's feet. We need a 3-meter-tall macho man😡We need Sanguinius😡😡Reshape the Ninth Corps😡😡

When you see the navy at the beginning, kill them, saying they are targeting the World Government. Navy equals world government? The natives can't tell the enemy apart, but the time-travelers can't tell the difference either? It makes a lot of enemies, right? If you are targeting CP agencies, there is no problem. However, although there are some scum in the navy and a small number of lackeys of the World Government, most of the navy is indeed righteous. The function of the navy is to eliminate evil pirates and maintain peace on the sea. This is exactly what most navies do. They don't know the dirty things of the World Government, and the World Government doesn't dare to let them know. If the protagonist is really the kind of character who is dedicated to eradicating evil, punishing nine tribes, and killing everyone on sight, then there is nothing wrong with killing the navy at will. But you said here that he doesn't just kill people on sight, and that he is kind and friendly. Haha, what is this if it's not both important and effective? I can only say that the protagonists in the first two chapters are either stupid or bad.

When to kill the red hair? He is also a Tianlong. He has an irresolvable hatred with the protagonist. This is much deeper than the hatred of the navy. Now he can live in peace with the red hair. The protagonist's acting skills are good and his IQ is online. He knows that he can't beat him. It is worthy of praise 👍

It's not that you can't watch the beastly protagonist who only knows how to kill, kill, and kill everyone equally. The virgin protagonist who can only save a bandit on the roadside also wants to save is still bearable. The literary youth protagonist who complains about copycats for no reason can still be watched. The protagonist who looks good on the outside and is sleazy and cunning on the inside is very popular with me. The protagonist who looks good on the outside but is loyal and good on the inside also suits me. But you are the main character who pretends to be a bitch and builds a memorial arch. Who are you to disgust me? How can anyone tolerate this?

It has the same problem as the previous book. The description of the battle scenes needs to be strengthened. The text is very rigorous, but the first scene is not strong. After all, this is a light novel, and everyone basically reads it at a glance. The description of the battle should be concise, direct, and dynamic.

I want to see Kaido use Luffy as a trap

After only reading a few chapters, I felt that there was too much nonsense. I felt that the main characters were all mentioned in one stroke, and there was no sense of involvement, and there was no desire to continue reading.

I thought you were going to get a Sanguinius

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The plot is not advanced at all. The plot of "Knights of God" is self-created, the content is Ju Shui's, the villain is pure clown, the characters have no arc at all, and then it is put on the shelf to make money. If you don't pounce on this thing, I will eat it 😥

It's a painful group of people watching. Good or kill. Kill even the bad ones. Kill them regardless of whether they are good or bad.

Just this kind

What is female crotch literature? What does Liu Beiwen mean?

Although I don't have any objections to Shanks in the original work, and actually like him more, the Shanks described here is a bit annoying. It is said that he is afraid that the protagonist will be affected by the cruel side of the sea, and wants the protagonist to develop his own world view by his side. But does being affected by Shanks not count as an influence? If you really want to be nice to others, why do you need to use rhetoric to lure them? Characters such as "Dumbledore" and "Sarutobi Hiruzen" in other books also have this situation, and they are somewhat bored and resistant.

In fact, the subject matter is not bad, but I always feel that it lacks a feeling of being as quiet as a virgin and moving as fast as thunder. This book pretends to be as calm as clear water, but even after the pretense it feels dull and tasteless. I don't know how to write a book, I just want to talk about my feelings after reading this book.

I was excited for a while when I saw the introduction saying that there is no literature about women's crotches: I finally found a pirate fanfic that has no love but passion for partners, and it turns out that there are two female protagonists before the 30th chapter 😥

The only good thing about this book is that the author does not delete comments

The writing is not good. The plot is cliche (justice?) And I don't see anything interesting about it.

As a member of the Lunaria clan, it is certainly okay for the protagonist to have a grudge against the World Government, but he cannot kill them pointlessly. After all, the protagonist's real enemies are the Celestial Dragons.

Why does it feel a bit like the values ​​​​of the Japanese government 😅? It is purely a personal opinion and welcomes criticism. It doesn't matter if I delete it.

I would like to recommend a French movie to you, "Silent as the Sea". It tells the story between German officers and French civilians during World War II. I don't want to argue with others based on pure nationality or hatred.

Personally, I think that if the paper fruit is developed well, it will be awesome! It feels like the paper fruit is the superior fruit of the book! After all, books are made of paper! The ability of the Book Fruit can be completely possessed by the Paper Fruit! A bold idea, you can completely use the space created by the paper fruit ability to pull in those with abilities, kill them, and seize their fruit abilities! In addition, there are many directions for paper fruit development. First, you can refer to Xiaonan's paper escape, a billion detonating talismans, and the technique of the God's Style; second, you can refer to our country's talisman technique, the five-element talisman, the sky-reaching talisman, and the like. If this is developed well, it will feel awesome; thirdly, you can refer to our country's paper-tying technique, paper people, paper horses, paper birds, etc. In many suspense novels, there is a scene where a warrior in golden armor is punched out using paper techniques to kill everyone. If this is developed well, it will be a powerful tool for clearing out miscellaneous soldiers! There is a book called "Paper Fruit in One Piece" at the starting point, which is pretty good, but I'm tired of following the boat flow, and I hope someone can write a book about forming my own group. Using the above abilities to seize the fruits and form your own power is no more fun than following the boat! Is there any master who can write a book? ?

16 double monthly passes, the author will update soon🧐, add some details by the way

The heroine has the appearance of mudstone, the race of her eldest father, and the name of Frost Star.

If Amit eats the Phantom Beast Vampire Fruit, the Lunaria clan will have gathered three series of top-level combat power users including the protagonist!

I watch it every day, I'm really anxious

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