
Eternal Beginnings in Swallowed Star
从吞噬星空开始永恒
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- Myriad Worlds
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- 11mo ago
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My big account has been banned from the whole book for seven or eight years because of the key certificate. You are the first to tease me into opening a small account to review the book. See if the original work is so difficult? You are here to write a fanfic. The Law of the Lower Level of Eclipse Fire recognizes 30% of the enlightenment. According to the calculation of the ten-story Tongtian Bridge to achieve immortality, let's decide on a three-story Tongtian Bridge, but Ten Thousand Lines of Flow, buddy, the teleportation of one of the three branches of the Space Law, the route of enlightenment is the basic The law of source recognizes it, and then there is the Ten Thousand Lines Flow. Teleportation corresponds to the 19th floor of the Tongtian Bridge, the superior law recognizes the 15th floor, and the universe-level original Tongtian Mountain 13th floor. Let's give the Ten Thousand Lines Flow a level, and then demonstrate the gold content of the seventh floor of the Seven Towers of Genius Battle. Forget it, the original work did not write about the small branches of the higher law. You decide a time jump under time acceleration. This is no problem. However, the original work has a clear setting for the upper law. Understanding a small branch is the approval of the original law. Astral level, less than 50 years old, born in a remote area, only received training from the highest feudal lord level immortal of the giant ax fighting field branch of the superior universe country, and his law understanding has reached the point where the 15th level of time law is recognized. What kind of genius is this? You are a genius who has never been seen in this reincarnation of the original universe. You also let a lot of immortals watch the live broadcast and let them guess that time is accelerating? Believe it or not, the next moment is when the Kingdom of God teleports the Lord of the Alien Universe to personally take soul control and kill the protagonist. You are such a god
Speechless, I was very optimistic about it. Many Devouring fandoms have been ruined in this way. Too much writing has been written on people who don't want to do it. Not many of the opponents in these genius battles are useful, so don't write too much unless they will appear frequently in the future.
You're so tough-talking. Is it difficult to read the original work while writing?
I didn't even understand the original work, so I wrote a fanfic
Le, the domain lord's expatriate, one of the top assassins among foreigners, two disciples of King Assassin who killed Giant Ax. The King Assassin actually had time to launch several waves of killing moves. The people on Giant Ax didn't even send a disciple to protect them. It was the first time I saw such a stupid Devouring fan.
Author, I really doubt how you read the original work.
There have always been a lot of bugs from the beginning, and then on the extraterrestrial battlefield, Hong Meng was able to find out the identity of the protagonist. What did you think of the original work? City Lord Luo needs to protect his identity. If you just kill the king as the leader of the human world, and then Hongmeng can directly know the identity of the protagonist, wouldn't that force the other three tribes to directly go to the battlefield outside the territory, dispatch at least the Venerable to kill the protagonist directly!
There are too many ideas, and I can't write them well. There are a lot of poisonous points, and the routines have been written to death. I want to write some new ideas, but they are terribly poisonous. The two geniuses written in the book are worse than Cody. In the end, Immortal Commentary has seen many such geniuses, and that's it. You must know that most of the 1008 Universe Nation leaders are immortals. The protagonist and Eclipse written by the author are already the top geniuses of the human race. They have a high probability of becoming a venerable. However, the result is just like that in the mouths of these immortals. I really can't stand it. Either you don't write with such great talents, or you surprise these immortals and feed them to your mouth, and you can't even write it.
Why are there still Jing Clan and Jing Yu in Hongmeng?
Was it written by AI after it was put on the shelves? Where did these two ethnic groups in Hongmeng come from?
There is a big problem with the introduction. I remember that the Great Ax Arena held battles between the strongest, not geniuses.
Stop writing
I haven't read the original work at first glance. I might as well find a job in a factory if I have the time.