Douluo: Starting as a Soul Beast, He Only Wants to Become a God

Three chapters, life and death five or six times, plus a chattering system elf, and the clear protagonist slipped away.

It's good to remember your profile. Don't write too many heroines, otherwise your profile will fail.

The pacing problem is too big, the crisis is overwhelming, and I can clearly feel that the author is setting up conflicts (for example, the plant soul beast was struck by lightning for thousands of years, a setting purely for the plot, which is a bit too ugly). What does your growth model have to do with plants? Apart from making the protagonist more difficult, I don't see the need to choose a plant origin. I suggest you devote yourself to the main story of abuse. I am optimistic about your talent. The logic of the introduction is also purely funny. If there is no heroine, there will be no heroine, and I have to take it home as an excuse. I can't bring anyone back with me, right?

Write the grass as if it were a human being 🤭

That makes no sense. One moment he said that A Rou had cultivated for ten years, and then he said ten thousand years.