The Last Knight of the Steam Age

The writing is good, but I think the plot is not well thought out. Until I took him to see a doctor after seeing the face of the devil, the protagonist has been being coerced to eat, being coerced by the knight, being coerced by the housekeeper to learn magic, and being coerced by the female police officer to join the organization. It's not as good as the daughter who pretended to be her father's friend at the beginning. When she went to see a doctor, she had to be probed by the doctor for secrets. She was also crazy and frustrated when performing tasks. This book might have been good ten years ago, but now it is a bit out of date. Everyone likes a more relaxed book.

Is it really necessary to write this protagonist as mentally retarded? ? If you tell him that there are benefits to eating soil, he will believe it.

So what does it have to do with the knight, and when will this woman be killed?

I think this book is good, and the pace is right. Judging from the current level, it is at least a grain-level one. If I can persist in writing it and not finish it, I think it should be a masterpiece. In terms of author classification, this level should be the level of veteran authors of lv4 and above. Of course, I'm just talking about the writing style and structure. As for the results, we have to wait and see. I hope I can stick to it and finish it, unlike some of the things I was optimistic about before, which are obviously good, and then just go straight to the eunuch.

Even before you die, you are unwilling to tell me the heroine Shan Duowu😭😭😭

Why did it get cut off without any warning?