Douluo Dragon King: Zhulong Starts from Kidnapping Naer

As far as fans are concerned, it's better than those toilet papers

As title. New author, new book, my writing skills are insufficient, please forgive me. If you have any opinions, you can give them. If they are not particularly offensive, I will read them 🤓

Isn't your practice system a little too much? It seems confusing. I've never seen anyone write so much about it. If it doesn't work, you can use it even if you write it down in a great skill.

OK, Shen Nong is here. I don't know if the author has revised the article. I think there is not much water and the rhythm is okay. In more than thirty chapters, Xu Xiaoyan and Na'er have been confirmed, and they have left an impression on Gu Yue and Sister Leng. The rhythm is also good. I personally think the poisonous point is using the blood of the blue dragon to abduct Na'er. It's a bit hasty (after all, the setting of your book is that Di Tian and the others followed Na'er at this time, and most fans here assume that Na'er is similar to sneaking out). If you set Na'er to sneak away or Gu Yuena teleports her to find the Golden Dragon King, then it will be more reasonable for you to use the blood of the blue dragon, Another thing is that there is no need to be too licky with Gu Yue's attitude. The protagonist knows that Gu Yuena has not solved the dilemma of the soul beast in the original plot, so she directly speaks to the Silver Dragon King Fangyuan, the wall-facer, and swears directly with the martial spirit: "If you have bad thoughts about me again, I will self-destruct. If I die, your soul beast will never die." "I can't get out", anyway, you are telling the truth, and you didn't say that I can stand up for the spirit beast if I am alive, but if I die, the spirit beast will definitely be hopeless, and they will have to beg you not to die. The original work doesn't say what fire is like, but there is Ultimate Ice in the original work. After Huo Yuhao became a god, he never used his ice attribute. Instead, he relied on his strong spiritual power and the evil emperor's conceptual soul bone skills to hurt Tang San, so the temperature of developing the ultimate fire can only depend on your outline In addition, my personal opinion is that it would be nice if I could help you. You can actually find a way to get the bloodline of the Golden Dragon King, because the original work of Tang San's Divine Thought said that you can only take three shots. Then Tang Wulin made it clear that when he connected with A Yin, he was awarded the Son of Nature, and when he connected with Tang Hao, the original work did not Ming said, but Tang Hao himself said that he had to wait for the Holy Lord of the Abyss to take action before he could take action, and Tang Wulin himself also had tram metaphysics, so if the protagonist could find a way to get Tang Wulin to get on more trams and encounter porcelain evil soul masters before contacting A Yin, it would still be possible to force out all three chances of taking action, and the golden bloodline would still be available. It is quite useful. After all, the legend of the God Realm is that the Golden Dragon King chases three God Kings alone, and he can still confidently cross and swallow a bunch of time and space turbulence in the God Realm. His record is the Gossamer Silver Dragon King There is not much else to say. The author should pay attention to handling the situation of Gu Yue, Gu Yuena and Na'er.

I want to see the protagonist pretending to be awesome. He is three years older than Tang Wulin, so I have to prevent him from breathing exhaust fumes.

After investing, don't be a eunuch. Even if you are a eunuch, remember to finish it.

I hope the author can make adjustments and at least have a consistent statement. You can just ignore some unreasonable things and you can make up your own mind. I want to see how you deal with the timeline issue. One moment is 20,000 years, the next is 10,000 years. There are conflicts with Devil's Island, the invasion of the abyss, the arrival of Tang Wulin, etc.

Author, are you going to stop updating or not? Let's forget it. From the time you stopped updating until now, especially since you said you would follow but then refused to follow, every time I see you not updating, I feel so damn uncomfortable.

Put it on the bookshelf first, then read 200,000 words 🤓

How is Tang Wulin going to deal with it?

You don't have to be so detailed when practicing. You should mainly write about characters and plot.

Start tasting and see what happens😏😏

Let's start again. It's impossible to sign a contract even if it's more than 100,000 words.

The watery part is too watery and has no useful information at all.

The introduction looks okay, I want to taste it for everyone.

What are you doing? Why don't you update?

Is the author going to run away with the bucket?