The Heart of Ipartment Has Ling Xi

Xinling, a girl with such traditional advantages, you actually play a single heroine.

Don't let Zhang Wei be the bridesmaid in such a frustrating and disgusting situation. This b Xiaoli must be tortured to death. In the TV series, it is forcibly funny. In reality, Zhang Wei is not regarded as one of her own. Hu Yifei is okay in other aspects, but what she did this time is too disgusting 🙂

Xin Ling

So what is the author's mentality when writing about a serious person in a comedy fanfic? Do you even have to be nosy to correct all kinds of coincidences and accidents, completely erasing the comedy effect?

Author, your name and avatar are also quite abstract. You should make your name more funny 🙂

Xin Ling

Xin Ling appears in the last chapter of the first volume, Xin Ling moves into the apartment in the 36th chapter of the second volume, and then they get together directly in the 52nd chapter. From moving in to being together is less than twenty chapters. I really don't know if you are fast or slow. Since we are all together, let's give out more sweets. The chapter I posted yesterday was very good. Please write more. I love watching Xin Ling fall in love. The heartfelt words you wrote are so sweet. I feel like I will dream about such a girlfriend at night. Write more and let me have a good dream!

Oh ho, heroine Xin Ling, let me take a look

Suddenly, I feel like it's no longer interesting recently. It's completely based on the TV series, and it's not as interesting as before.

The writing in the iPartment genre is okay, but there are too many outstanding issues. The first point is that the name of this novel has nothing to do with the content. The heroine is still a minor when she comes out, which means that it will take more than 200 chapters to reach adulthood? Then why write about a minor? If you write it, you can't adjust it? Secondly, in the previous chapter, the male protagonist, Hu Yifei and Chen Meijia have many story lines, which makes people feel that both of them are more suitable for the male protagonist, but The male protagonist has the idea of not tearing up the cp, and wants to create opportunities for zxx and nzq. Um Thirdly, in the back, a large article is all about career and game companies. I understand that he wants to write a new plot without copying the original drama, but the article about love apartment is more about daily and funny chats. Many of the chats are not funny at all, tending to be reasonable and boring, and then the main plot is a bit slow. Fourth, the structure of the company was first brought in by a group of friends, which is a realistic behavior, and the male protagonist in the company has no authority at all, and has no sense of management. If he already has wealth and freedom, he is looking for trouble when he opens a company? He has to focus on his career, but he also says that he doesn't need to care about these details. Isn't this contradictory? Finally, the male protagonist can be said to be a nanny, of course it can also be said to be selfless dedication to his friends. (Personal opinion above, don't comment if you don't like it. I think since I spent money to watch it, I am qualified to comment)

Just treat it as a mirror of your real life, process and polish all the happiness and troubles you have experienced in life, and add the original plot of the TV series into it. You can write longer and you will naturally like it if you like it, it will be peaceful and happy. Occasionally, it is mixed with a little bit of confusion. As you said yourself, you are not in the mood to write today, so you can polish it a bit. Write it down. Today is over. What will happen tomorrow? In the evening, I wrote, processed and polished another article, which is most suitable for a long one

I've been holding on for a year, awesome🌹🌹🌹

The heroine didn't come out until the end of Love 1. The heroine didn't come out before it was released. You should change the introduction and title of the book.

How?

After it was put on the shelves, it became obvious that your skills have improved. Keep working hard. Don't listen to some idiots who say that there are many female protagonists in the harem under the banner of love apartment. Then your entire love apartment worldview will completely collapse, and all subsequent events will be cannot be written

It can be seen that the score of this book is not very good, but it is really to my taste. I will vote for it if I have a monthly vote. I just hope that it will not be a bad eunuch.

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Don't write about having two female protagonists, it's disgusting 😡

Love Apartment is well written by the fan, come on, change some small details, not completely follow the plot, there is an original plot, it looks very good, no hostility, very good, keep up the good work, hope to do more every day, don't enter the palace!

Opening a company is just a waste of time, and you have the strength to be the boss. Besides, even if you opened the company for the plot, the plot is so boring. I'm really addicted to it. People who watch it are very impatient. Just tell me how many chapters the plot of the company is over and I'll jump directly to that chapter to subscribe.

Author, do you think there are many people who came in because they wanted to see the heroine Xin Ling. If she never appears, it is easy for people to lose the idea of ​​​​watching.

A good iPartment fanfic, the heroine only appears after she is released 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨

Come on, come on, come on!

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All recommended monthly passes are given, don't be a eunuch

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I found that I can't post pictures, but I'm sending you three monthly passes. Keep up the hard work. You wrote well.

Chapter 152 can't reach the second part. At this rate, the fourth part will have to be written in 2028. Speed ​​up! When will Zhang Wei come out? 😥