There's Something Wrong with This Tang San

After reading it, tell me your feelings First of all, the second volume is too fast and the outline is embarrassing. The story has been advancing at an ever-increasing pace since the lead actor An Tian left. Even in the finale, Qian Renxue suddenly sailed out on a boat to engage in a decisive battle, which seemed to be an unknown plot. The characters mentioned above all turned into numbers in the later period, and the transformation of the characters also seemed to have no sympathy due to the lack of description. The author of the second volume felt that the previous writing was a bit shit and wanted to finish it quickly, which resulted in the current fast pace at the outline level. Second, there is not much explosive point. In fact, when I read this book, I just wanted to watch Tang San as a dog and donkey, and the sea tiger story that happened on the Douluo Continent (forgive me for being really clumsy in writing and it is easy to seem incomprehensible). But the whole book is so smooth that even the big and small frictions in the middle seem to be lost in the sea, and it does not give people a particularly strong sense of memory. As a book, it fails to arouse the readers' emotions very well, and the result is that the feeling given by the final chapter is not even as strong as the feeling given by the previous fighting spirit competition, which is very regrettable. There are still a lot of foreshadowings that have not been recycled. The psychological journeys of many characters are not obvious enough, so I won't go into details. Next, let me talk about something good: First of all, in this book, Tang San can finally bear the title of Third Brother. I'm not a bully, I'm good to everyone, I even calmly said that he has no problem without the soul bone when I can use my mother's soul bone, I can also take into account the good things done by the Wuhun Palace when facing the Wuhun Palace, etc., Great success! The characters of other characters are basically similar to those in comics. Xiaogang finally has knowledge that he has researched but no one else knows. Dai Mubai and others also have more benign adaptations. On this aspect alone, I personally like it very much. Also, the character design in the early stage of the book is basically logically self-consistent. For example, because there are no martial arts, the innate soul power is not full, and then there are fragments of the Dark Sky Yuan Shen that cause the three martial arts warriors to be left with pure knowledge, etc., Which can all be explained (of course, only the early character design).

The real book is equivalent to an adaptation of The Magic Soldier Xuanqi. Except for the characters and the main plot, it has been changed to the point where even his mother does not recognize it. Everyone seems to be normal after being discharged from Qingshan Mental Hospital.

Why are you still spraying so much? Isn't that mentioned in the introduction here? This is the comic version❗What does it have to do with the novel version of "Douluo Dalu" and the comic version of "Douluo Dalu"?

The name of this book is wrong, it should be called "If Tang San had not been time traveled" "The Perfect Life of Native Tang San" "Mother-in-law Martial God Tang San" "Expensive Foster Father Yu Xiaogang" "Mother-in-law Continent"

Friends, this is Mu Fengchun's Douluo fanfic. Please do not substitute it into the novel, please substitute it into the comics. When I was 16 years old, I read the comics and felt that the world of Wuhun was magical and wonderful. I was envious of the relationship between the seven people. The Three Ghosts of the Huang Family were too pornographic and violent, while the comic version of Mad God was kind-hearted. The portrayal of the God of Death or the kind-hearted Dumb is not bad. After reading the novel version, Sanguan's spirit felt a little bit like a strong sword, especially the mad god's strong sword is everywhere, the Emperor of the Piano is too heaven-defying, and the heroine of Dionysus in the later stage, the queen's eldest sister, was so depraved that I thought the heroine was dead

Everyone looks normal and it doesn't feel like they are watching a Douluo fanfic

This dragon is not a dragon or a butterfly is not a butterfly? ! ! ! ! ! !

Save the trouble: 🍭Sanyu Xiaoan's writing is whitewashed. Yu Xiaoan's writing is seriously OOC, and his IQ is seriously inconsistent with the original work. The first soul ring recommended to Tang San was not haunted by his own mother. It is seriously suspected that he was penetrated by a time traveler. Yu Xiaoan's soul skills are also different from those in the original work. And 🍭San finally became a disciple of Yu Xiaoan.

Even if it is just a fragment of Cha Antian, it is not comparable to Tang San. Presumably the protagonist influenced by Cha Antian will not fall in love with an ignorant woman like Xiao Wu, right?

Gua! That's when he fell in love with Tang San! ! !

Douluo fan fiction is a clean one, and it's pretty good among a bunch of books about monsters and monsters Nowadays, fan fiction is all about stepping on Tang San and recruiting girls all day long, pretending to be cool and slapping people in the face 13

It is recommended that the author add a comic version of Douluo Dalu in the introduction, so that people will not think of the novel version The comic version has better views of the characters than the novel version, and is suitable for all ages.

There are spider legs behind him, and there is a soul in the weapon. Shura, I understand, he is the god of heaven.

By the way, I have a picture

I have read the first twenty chapters so far, and my initial feeling is that it is okay. Since it is a fan of the comic version of Douluo, there is nothing outrageous about the characters. You can take a look.

When will Dai Mubai come to the rebirth pond and realize the truth? The male body and female mind are peaceful and graceful The unlucky Oscar, who is dedicated to licking the dog Ma Hongjun (the relationship between his master and the master is very reasonable) and the cat with three eyes

Let me explain in advance that what the author writes is a comic version of the world view, which is neither black nor embarrassing.

This Tang San meeting will be difficult and the journey will be very difficult. At present, it is just because under the master's planning and guidance, we have not faced the general trend. When he comes to the eyes of the world, with this Tang San's thoughts and consciousness, he will definitely turn the whole world as his enemy.

Kouya is a master of comic book version. We love you

Suddenly I remembered that I had read the Douluo Yi comic and liked it very much. I still remember many of the personal settings in it. Wuhun can turn into armor. The side effect of Ma Hongjun's Wuhun is eating, and he likes to cheat little girls... About food. The fat man has quite a personality and charm. The wind chime he pretends to be with Bai Chenxiang is CP. This topic is very exciting. It's a pity that Teacher Mu has no follow-up.

It really kills other Douluo fanfics.

I originally took a look at Yangshu's favorites, but found that they were still being updated, so I quit it. I came back to look at the catalog and then updated the extras. There are more than a hundred extras, which are really awesome! I would like to ask here, is the main text considered complete? I don't care if the extras have any impact.

Those who are not crazy enough, and those who came here just for the title of the book, can leave.

I feel that the writing is much better than the previous one, and the various jokes are well blended 😄 It feels pretty good among the Magnetic Field Man's articles.

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I can't understand it at all. The head of the donkey is wrong and the tail of the horse is wrong. Now I write this, and now I write that. What is it? Where is the time traveler? And did Tang San and Qian Renxue die in the end?

I only watched the first half of the magnetic field, the black-eyed boy Tang San, and I would like to ask what the character of Huo Yuhao in the back is? Is it true white or evil white?

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I don't understand, who is the time traveler? The protagonist hasn't appeared yet?