Hogwarts Wizard Immortality

It looks good, but plug-ins are just external objects after all. Without a strong will, you cannot control power, you will only be controlled by power. The protagonist has the ability to become a pioneer, and has the awareness to become a pioneer! No matter how fancy the cheats are in most novels, the protagonists also have a loser mentality, and their strength and will do not match. It feels like a monkey cheating and turning into a human just for the sake of a few female orangutans 🤭

Well written. But I always feel that this book was either written not long ago, or it became a state where the protagonist lit a fire but couldn't control it.

Where did this extraterrestrial demon come from? Or is it that the local old man has been reincarnated?

The world view of Harry Potter is too small. There are only a few protagonists and villains. The author tortures the author back and forth, and the audience is bored to watch🥱 Especially the protagonist's strength value in the early stage of this book is too high. What's the point of writing it later? Either change the map and travel to the next world, or finish it as soon as possible. Don't be like an old lady's foot wrap.

Everything else is fine, as long as you look like a human being in the end, wizards also need aesthetics, and I won't resist transformation. After all, you can change back after you change the past. This is also my experience after watching so many cyberpunks. Technology has reached the point where you can survive even if you put your head in a machine. It doesn't hurt to clone your body and change you back. Don't be like the crazy wizard next door who tore the back of his head open and stretched out a hand with an eye. Forget it if it's your first time. Later, it looks like a hand floating in the air like Onmyoji's Onmyoji, and then summoned from another space, slowly emerging. Isn't that cool, but the author just wants to tear it open every time. I really can't imagine tearing the back of the head before and after casting a spell, and a hand comes out. The san value is really decreasing by one every time.

If you like this book and think it is a fairy grass, there is a high probability that you will like the following book "Journey to Dimension Ascension". But for those who only watch the story of love, hate and hatred, there is a high probability that they will not be able to watch it and think, "Damn, I came to see the story, not to see you write the settings"...

You don't want to learn this, you don't want to learn that, that's all, just drop out. After you drop out of school, if you cause trouble, just don't say that you are a teacher 😃

At least for now, the thinking angle is much higher than that of many HP fans. It is fundamentally different from most magic launchers. I hope to continue to be unconventional.

I have a sense of déjà vu like Dr. Chen's. The pig's feet feel too strong. It's like Einstein plus Tesla plus Stark. I've only been exposed to magic for a few days, and all kinds of achievements have exploded. The wizards who have been co-authored for thousands of years are all scum. You are the best, right?

The essence of this book is all in the first three chapters of the book. As for the following content, it cannot be said to be overwhelming, but it can also be said to be nutritious. It can be said that it is very different from the original story-telling method. The author is not writing an interesting novel or story. There are no thrills, no ups and downs, or even ups and downs. The entire page is filled with boring settings, clichés, and self-conceptions. What I said above is not criticism or insult, it just represents my personal disappointment and superficial evaluation.

Forget it, everything else is good, but Sorting Peace is really disgusting to me. It uses a lot of things to foreshadow the character and intentions of the protagonist, and then the Sorting is given to a Gryffindor who is the least suitable but best fits the plot.

It felt so rushed to read, and I don't know why it was written so urgently. It was like a movie, turned on at double speed, and cut out the foreshadowing and transitional plot. The biggest problem is that the protagonist is very divided as a whole. I saw a comment that put it very appropriately, "Awesome and sb". He does this and that at the same time. The whole book seems to have been chopped up and mixed together, which looks particularly uncomfortable.

I see a lot of disagreement in the comment section, but overall this is a good fanfic. What's so good about it? That is the unswerving character of the protagonist. He has made clear the path he wants to take and is not swayed by external things. This is a very attractive point. Some aspects of the plot are indeed not good enough, but the research that combines science and magic makes up for it. I think it is still worth watching. The protagonist's personality is quite charming.

The fairy tales covered in Harry's IP have the flavor of immortality, and the essence of Harry Potter's life is not that interesting. It's still the same as the underworld cultivating immortals. Cultivation does not cultivate the mind, and it is difficult for ghosts to become saints. Such a person can transcend all things in the end, all because the author says you can do it, and you don't have the kind of composure and feeling that readers think he is really qualified.

All I can say is that pig's feet are wishful thinking. The author uses eternal life as the theme to write this story, and studies eternal life with the knowledge he has just started in the first grade. . . If you don't possess any of the four elements of cultivating immortality and immortality, including Dharma, Wealth, Couple, and Earth, how can you study it? I wasted a whole night thinking I had found food.

The opening chapter is really amazing, the character is invincible, I thought it was a boss trumpet, but then it became too impatient, Harry Potter is not a martial artist, the charm lies in life, it is all about cultivation, which is boring. It is okay to aim for immortality, but it should be pursued gradually, rather than starting research in the first grade. What is the difference between this and those eight-year-old reincarnation eyes at the beginning of Naruto?

Originally, some people said it was a trap, but it didn't feel like it. It didn't have that autistic smell Now it's here, too fast upgrade of combat power, long and specious theoretical pretense, all it takes is one enemy to upgrade like crazy, both sides to cheat like crazy, the system collapses, I can't write anymore.

At first I thought it was the devil, but I didn't expect it to be the Virgin.

The logic of the protagonist's behavior is quite contradictory. It is difficult to live forever, and the protagonist also finds it difficult. The protagonist's learning ability is outstanding, but not to the point of shocking the past and the present. However, the protagonist does not want to learn alchemy because he feels it is a waste of time. Hmm... That's weird. The reason is that I spent my experience working with Hagrid on magical creatures and was unwilling to learn alchemy. Just like modern medicine, it is only willing to conduct biological experiments and is unwilling to engage in medical equipment

After reading all the compliments in the comment section, the result was that Gryffindor was forcibly sorted. Wasn't it just to make fun of the plot? The protagonist inexplicably establishes the ambition to live forever, and starts studying witchcraft in the first grade, and then various authors provide supplementary settings for the protagonist. . 🙂

It's really depressing. The author of Qidian is now a eunuch.

When I saw 26, all the ideas in the article were good, but the protagonist gave the impression that he was too ambitious and had castles in the air. Not long after the protagonist entered the school, he set his own goals and found a way to learn, and then he started the experiment directly, within a few days. For example, a gifted primary school student knows the results of a nuclear reactor, then reads a few books and the professor's notes, and then directly starts the professor's experiments, regardless of mathematics, chemistry, and physics. The amount of knowledge and foundation itself has not been absorbed. Is this a clone with incredible understanding? Everything involves a ridiculous understanding. The problem is that the protagonist of the article is very mature and knows this and that, and then ignores it. It is said that no one in the world understands the nature of magic, and the protagonist does not understand it, but he started to make a golden finger for himself to study. Well, you haven't been exposed to magic knowledge for a long time. Potions, transfiguration, and spells are just basic subjects like basic physics and chemistry. He didn't care about it. The idea was that I would be a plug-in and directly study nuclear reactors. I jumped right in and started to study the nature of magic through plug-ins... The previous article described the protagonist as a very mature and responsible person, and he seemed to have changed within two days of school. Then there is the writing style that defies heaven's understanding, which is directly achieved. Not to mention that Harry Potter is a world where I just rely on my imagination. If there are so-called potions and transfigurations like this, there is no need to be rigorous. It can be said that the world itself is quite contradictory. This requires me to think hard, while the other requires me to be very rigorous and follow rules. But regardless of strictly following the rules or meditating, isn't it all done step by step? If it is just the power of me thinking, then many magic spells can be learned at any age. Isn't this the result of a certain period of study? Then the protagonist in the article goes directly to reach the sky in one step, skipping the process directly. It's like his talent is astronomical.

It's been three months since I stopped reading, and this book is too late.

The tone is too high at the beginning, and I can't continue writing anymore.

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Refining

The protagonist talks too much. Starting from Chapter 5, especially the protagonist and Mag began to discuss the path of magic, the definition of life, and a lot of high definition issues. Let's not talk about the shallow exchanges and deep conversations, just to offend the readers. The protagonist keeps talking and outputting, which is a bit annoying. What a waste of such an amazing start