Hogwarts: The Wizard's Immortality

Where did this extraterrestrial demon come from? Or is it that the local old man has been reincarnated?

The world view of Harry Potter is too small. There are only a few protagonists and villains. The author tortures the author back and forth, and the audience is bored to watch🥱 Especially the protagonist's strength value in the early stage of this book is too high. What's the point of writing it later? Either change the map and travel to the next world, or finish it as soon as possible. Don't be like an old lady's foot wrap.

Everything else is fine, as long as you look like a human being in the end, wizards also need aesthetics, and I won't resist transformation. After all, you can change back after you change the past. This is also my experience after watching so many cyberpunks. Technology has reached the point where you can survive even if you put your head in a machine. It doesn't hurt to clone your body and change you back. Don't be like the crazy wizard next door who tore the back of his head open and stretched out a hand with an eye. Forget it if it's your first time. Later, it looks like a hand floating in the air like Onmyoji's Onmyoji, and then summoned from another space, slowly emerging. Isn't that cool, but the author just wants to tear it open every time. I really can't imagine tearing the back of the head before and after casting a spell, and a hand comes out. The san value is really decreasing by one every time.

If you like this book and think it is a fairy grass, there is a high probability that you will like the following book "Journey to Dimension Ascension". But for those who only watch the story of love, hate and hatred, there is a high probability that they will not be able to watch it and think, "Damn, I came to see the story, not to see you write the settings"...

You don't want to learn this, you don't want to learn that, that's all, just drop out. After you drop out of school, if you cause trouble, just don't say that you are a teacher 😃

I have a sense of déjà vu like Dr. Chen's. The pig's feet feel too strong. It's like Einstein plus Tesla plus Stark. I've only been exposed to magic for a few days, and all kinds of achievements have exploded. The wizards who have been co-authored for thousands of years are all scum. You are the best, right?

At least for now, the thinking angle is much higher than that of many HP fans. It is fundamentally different from most magic launchers. I hope to continue to be unconventional.

The essence of this book is all in the first three chapters of the book. As for the following content, it cannot be said to be overwhelming, but it can also be said to be nutritious. It can be said that it is very different from the original story-telling method. The author is not writing an interesting novel or story. There are no thrills, no ups and downs, or even ups and downs. The entire page is filled with boring settings, clichés, and self-conceptions. What I said above is not criticism or insult, it just represents my personal disappointment and superficial evaluation.

Forget it, everything else is good, but Sorting Peace is really disgusting to me. It uses a lot of things to foreshadow the character and intentions of the protagonist, and then the Sorting is given to a Gryffindor who is the least suitable but best fits the plot.

I see a lot of disagreement in the comment section, but overall this is a good fanfic. What's so good about it? That is the unswerving character of the protagonist. He has made clear the path he wants to take and is not swayed by external things. This is a very attractive point. Some aspects of the plot are indeed not good enough, but the research that combines science and magic makes up for it. I think it is still worth watching. The protagonist's personality is quite charming.