Runeterra: Start with Hard Work

If you don't write the heroine so stupid, you wouldn't be able to write it, right? You still don't have the level to write it.

It feels like a kindergarten class student writing a paper. What you are writing is very messy, there is no main line, it is inexplicable, and the characters are also messy. It is recommended to enter the factory

Xiao Qian, the humble new author, would like to send my regards to all the adoptive fathers and mothers. Only comments with spoilers or personal attacks will be deleted from this book. But! I will never delete negative reviews (unless you and others start a fight in the comment area) because I think whether it is good or bad is judged by the readers (that is, all foster parents). I may not be good at writing. But again! I have two advantages, thick skin and shamelessness. Don't worry about my mental endurance. Even if you are in a bad mood today, pretend to have read my book, and come to criticize me, I will be humble for one third of my life... If my father (or mother) never abandons me...' I am very grateful for your collection, chapter review, paragraph review, and review, no matter good or bad, an investment, or a follow-up reading.

When I went to Katarina's place, I started to have fun with myself for no reason.

I started reading it after seeing the author's reply in the comment area. I have only read six chapters, but I can't understand what the protagonist wants to do. Since I have contracted with Lux and teleported, why can't I teleport to Lux and leave directly? I have to get a pardon order. I don't know whether the protagonist is strong or not. It is a superposition 🙂. The result is that I feel that your work does not attract me, and it is not my cup of tea. I slipped away.

What a shame for this author. There is no one in the comment section. Although I haven't read the book yet, I might as well make a post first.

There is no one in the comment section. I feel that you will most likely want eunuch, so please put it on the bookshelf first.

Just write whatever you want, don't listen to any suggestions, just read a few more books first

The logic of what I wrote is messed up, and I also like riddles.

Why is the protagonist's name so nondescript?🤫

The continuity of the plot is a bit stuck, and the emotional scenes are not decisive enough. I suggest the author to read books specifically about relationships for reference. Generally speaking, it is okay.

Read the introduction to harem? I'll know if it's shit as soon as I taste it!