Abyssal Invasion: I Have the Legendary Taoist Class

I don't understand your description. One hundred million people are chosen each year, and the protagonist's identity is exposed and he's kidnapped? So the protagonist lives in a world with a population of trillions????

This is so verbose! They've wasted over ten chapters on just one thing: summoning a skeleton. (I've seen it, but not all the others I haven't). It's a skeleton that can't die, and it gains experience when killed, so summoning it isn't very costly, yet the protagonist says he can't bear to see it die. Hahahaha!

Generally speaking, it's okay for killing time, but interacting with the skeleton always gives the feeling that the author is underage and not thinking clearly, or that the author is underage and thinks the readers are brainless... Why don't you just stick to a simple game skin? So if you really miss your student days, just start with the college system, then I'll just leave. Never mind, I'm not going to argue anymore, it's pointless, I'm leaving.

To be honest, the initial concept was quite appealing, but the constant monologues and rambling made it unbearable to read.

It's incredibly verbose and full of plain language; it repeats the same thing three times or more... The protagonist's personality is like a weaker version of Tang Xiaosan.

The author seems to be constantly imagining and talking to themselves; this is probably their first time writing a novel.

If someone else kills you, it's a heinous crime; if you accidentally kill someone, it's just that person's bad luck. This author's values ​​are so twisted.

I don't understand. It's one thing to ramble on about the skeleton, but why go through so many chapters of hesitation about a woman? Whether you like her or not, it's just a matter of a single sentence. You're an Abyss Walker, you've said you can marry several, and you're not planning to become a eunuch, so what are you doing here?

Write less about reality. If you're going to do something, do it. If you're not going to do it, be decisive and refuse. Who wants to read a story that tries to have it both ways?

Such a good subject matter, written like this.