
Crayon Shin-Chan: When I Traveled Through Time, I Just Wanted to Get Rewards
蜡笔小新:穿越的我只想要爆奖励
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 677k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The female characters in this book are almost gone
It's no wonder that you are obsessed with it. The name of your book is Crayon Shin-Chan, but you insist on not including Xiaoxin in the content. Although it sounds a bit ugly, but if you don't be obsessed with it, who will be obsessed with it?
It's written too much
Since you don't know how to write about repaying the debt, then don't owe it in the first place. Just write about Xiaoxin. Push the emotional line. What is it about? Have you read it yourself? Damn it, I thought you were reading Tomato.
I once read a book about Crayon Shin-chan, who traveled through time and became his uncle. In the first chapter, he captured Miya's best friend Keiko, and in the third chapter, he captured Miya. It was cut into hundreds of thousands of words 😅
Why is it necessary to start with debt, and what is the difference between starting with a normal start?
I think Crayon Shin-chan fans are originally here for Crayon Shin-chan. You have so little interaction, why not just borrow other people's backgrounds? This is just like Conan fans without Conan. There is also the debt. If you have to create a debt, it is not owed by you. All your efforts are working for Xiaoli.
Surprisingly very good
I originally thought that it would be like the Crayon Shin-chan novels I watched before, but I didn't expect that it would be based on the big plot of the theatrical version. The writing is also very smooth, and the characters are not occ. It's a very good Crayon Shin-chan fic, and the harem praises it 👍
It's not so much a fan of Xiaoxin, it's better to say it's an urban superpower.
The whole process has nothing to do with Xiaoxin. It's basically the city's two-dimensional superpowers importing the names of people in Xiaoxin, and then sleeping with a lot of women?
Weeds, I won't talk about the previous chapters in Chapter 98. Since you have decided to use force, why do you still need to pay back the money? This author really doesn't understand. Is it worth exposing myself for two million?
The protagonist bench presses 50 pounds and laughs to death
After taking a foundation-building medicated bath that is similar to a fantasy novel, I can bench press 90 pounds and feel good about myself.
It's getting watery.
Opening a Treasure Chest has written so many chapters. It can obviously be covered in one chapter. Just let readers have an idea. So much space was used. Subscription quality is not as good as free quality. Worry, if it continues like this, it will end sooner or later, because the results will not be good.
Waste of time
I spent 6 yuan on the roadside. Is Xiaoxin a passerby? ? The main plot has no highlights. After reading one article, I closed my eyes and couldn't remember the characteristics of the protagonist. . . Using Crayon Shin-chan's world to create a harem without any scenes of Crayon Shin-chan, the more you watch it, the less interesting it becomes. .
You are a eunuch in love, all you need is your heart and not your body
I saw Take Matsudamei to travel to Kanagawa. I felt that the book was pretty good before the protagonist picked up a girl. After he picked up a girl, he would either fuck this girl or that girl (and there was no plot description of the drama). It was really good.
Author, would you like to see what your book is called? I was writing about Crayon Shin-Chan, but when I clicked on it, there was no content about Shin-chan at all. You are going in the wrong direction.
A love story with Crayon Shin-chan's name (and signs of a harem) You can run away early if you want.
A 21-year-old reader said it was very interesting and gave the author some suggestions.
Grasp the rhythm well and balance daily life and plot; Don't be too eager to have a very close connection with the original characters - Xiaoxin, Nanako, Matsuzaka Mei, etc., Slowly figure it out, and gradually advance in daily life; The debt of 30 million yen must be resolved in time, otherwise it will cause trouble for readers; Assign extraordinary abilities to the protagonist as early as possible, ranging from sword skills that are already in Crayon Shin-chan to telekinesis. They can be weak and useless at the beginning, but they cannot be eliminated. The benefits are twofold: First, it increases the training dimension. The process of leveling up the protagonist improves the sense of development and excitement. Second, it makes the readers more confident. Not only the threat from the Black Society is always a hidden danger. I personally recommend the kendo class, the flying sword style, the second-rate, handsome, suitable for the background and not a supermodel; The relationship with the female characters is a matter of opinion. I personally am not opposed to the harem, but I do not recommend prematurely establishing a super friendship relationship with a specific female character such as Matsuzaka Mei. It is best to have a good relationship with every female character, enough to get married but not boyfriend and girlfriend, and be a sea king if you are separated; The theater version is added to make up for the regrets of the original work, such as Warring States Period and Robot Dad. The hostess recommends Xiao Chun in the western theater version. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon. If you don't want eunuchs, I will support it all!
Pay back the money?
I didn't have extraordinary abilities before, so I just paid them back. Now that I have extraordinary abilities, how about paying them back? What are you talking about? Don't they owe me money?😏
The best way to use this golden finger is to become a star. As we all know, anti-fans and idiot fans are unreasonable and very abstract. It is best to increase your favorability, whether it is positive or negative.
You can write a little about Kazama's mother and Nini's mother, but don't write about other parents.
I'm convinced. I'm so disappointed. I'm actually a eunuch.
I don't know how to arrange for the protagonist to owe money at the beginning.
A bunch of readers have to pay off their mortgages in real life, and they still have to pay back their mortgages while reading a novel. Is this to enhance the sense of immersion?
I write more about daily content. I am really not interested in the content of the theatrical version of Doraemon and Crayon Shin-chan. Unfortunately, the content written about these two is basically the theatrical version, and the anime theatrical version is basically uninteresting.
After watching it for a while, it was okay. The plot of dealing with the underworld debt in the early stage was a bit boring, but after all, there are few Crayon Shin-chan fans. Judging from the title, the heroine has three teachers from the kindergarten, Yamayoko Higashimatsu, the policewoman from Black Pearl, Tsubaki from Westworld, Nanako Ohara, and it seems there is also Ai? (I'm very curious about how the author handles her plot. Most of the troubles in the theater version can be easily solved by Xiao Ai) I don't know if there will be any golden spy in the future🍋
There are just a few women, and they are the innate self-green soul penetrating plate✌⭕️Holy body of eternal life, alas😮💨It is said to be their own body, but it is not the case at all after reading the first chapter
Accidentally found Xiaoxin's fellow fans. . . Sometimes I myself also daydream about what would happen if I went to Little New World.
After being put on the shelves, the quality has become lower, and it has become like a Tomato fanfic, with no logic or incomprehensible logic.
It actually came back to life. I'll wait and see for two days.