Death: I Am Not a Pervert, but a Talented Person!

Stop writing about toilet paper where the protagonist's ability is to copy other people's abilities, okay?

I don't quite understand why we need to create an original female

I've read Chapter 54 and it's pretty good so far. The protagonist's Zanpakutō ability: Copy the ability of other people's Zanpakutō; Conditions: Your own Zanpakutō blade comes into contact with someone else's Zanpakutō blade and obtains the blood of its owner. I'm curious about what the subsequent swastika will be like. According to the description, the protagonist's Zanpakuto is similar to a 'chrysalis', so breaking out of a cocoon and turning into a butterfly is a good development direction. Personal advice: It's best not to copy other people's swastika interpretations. After all, in Shinigami, swastika can be said to be the complete manifestation of one's own characteristics and inner desires. It feels weird to copy someone else's.

Well! That annoying intro again.

If you start this book with a level of 7-8 reiatsu, it will be a surefire success! 17-18 Wait, what the hell is reiatsu? 😥 If the captain takes one look at you, you will die.

According to the background setting of the God of Death, if the protagonist has this copying ability, the Zanpakutō will be targeted and killed by the Tsunayashiro family immediately.

The character change of the protagonist is a bit abrupt. He suddenly changed from a normal person to a crazy person who talks about "tools" all day long. At the beginning, he obviously thought that the "butt twisting" and "**" were in a humorous style, but halfway through the end, the style of painting immediately became heavy. This change is inexplicable, and it feels like it was written by a different person. Since the writing is so heavy, does the character design of the color batch that was established before have any meaning?

There's nothing wrong with the protagonist, but it feels weird that he can't control his body.

It looked fine from the front, but why was he suddenly so cold-blooded and treating people as tools? There was no foreshadowing for this turning point. It's a pity. I quite like the lecherous and funny character in the front. The combination of these two characters is too strange and blunt.

The combat power is so high that it doesn't even have the spiritual power of a low-ranking official. Such pressure on combat power affects the reading experience. Death is more powerful than spiritual pressure.

Upgrade your protagonist quickly, don't keep writing about noobs

If you are writing about the God of Death, you must help with the scene.

Personally, I like a lot of girls, and it's good if the male protagonist is a bit perverted.

The original plot is too long and too delayed, and the combat power is too low and stressful.

I want to see if the childhood sweethearts who captured Rangiku and Toushiro are of course using unfair means, such as threatening Rangiku with Gin's safety, and using Toshiro to threaten Hinamori Momo to make them submit.

It's too slow and can't be raised

Forget it, the plot is dragging, the updates are slow and I owe you a few chapters, so your monthly votes are in vain.

It's quite good-looking, and the characters are vivid and consistent with the original character. The original plot of the story is also very good, and it is relatively enjoyable to read. I hope the plot of the original work can be maintained. In addition, I am worried that the Zanpakuto's ability may be a little too buggy. Although it may be limited by the male protagonist's spiritual power, if it is not handled well, some readers may be dissatisfied.

This book has passed internal investment and will be picked up on Monday. The main line is complete and the manuscripts are sufficient. Please feel free to collect and invest in reading!

Among the three series of Dead Fire Sea, Bleach is the one who has the most untimely character. After reading a lot of Bleach fans, it is rare to see that one can survive being a Seuse. The core of Bleach is the Zanpakutō. Whether it is good or not depends on whether your imagined Zanpakutō ability is attractive. The supporting role of the second Bleach can almost be said to be the most outstanding in the Dead Fire Sea. If the fan collaboration is not good, the supporting characters will basically not be well written.

No. Is he really a eunuch? All booked