I Will Give You a Little More Strength as a Teacher.

Just like the early version of the Warden book, the characters at the beginning are a bit stereotyped, and some are easy to persuade (the author really needs to handle this well) But the subsequent characterization and character growth gradually make up for this part, and the plot is further enhanced. Overall, it is a good slow-burning novel. The early plot makes you frown, but it relaxes and finds beauty in the middle.

An encounter with the ghost protagonist Master, who was reincarnated and still being tortured.

I can't stand it anymore after I accept it. Is a cultivator carrying a pistol? Even if she carries a pistol, the demon empress who conquers the human race? How did these two species get together? Is the human race a demon race?

Has the author offended anyone? There are all bad comments above. In my impression, although this author was weak in his later period, his writing style was too mediocre. But when setting it up in the early stage, most of the writing was very interesting. And there is also trouble with the gun used to cultivate immortals... No, where did it come from. The Arcane God's Throne, isn't this a trend that existed in the era of cultivating immortals?

First, let's talk about how many female apprentices there are? Is the style as plain as that of a warden? Or is it as meaty as the red dragon? Or is it half meat and half vegetarian like the orcs?

Let me tell you something. Because the author ran into something last week, and because he was careless and did not pay attention to the guaranteed update word count, the book was not put into the library when it was tested last week, so it could not get normal exposure (I made a big mistake and was scolded by the editor). In short, the increasing data has become a bit dangerous because of this reason. It depends entirely on the old books to attract readers. I beg you not to buy books during this time, and continue to read. It is very important to read the data. The next two updates will be stable, and I hope it will grow normally after being put into storage. I would like to apologize to everyone first, the world is in urgent need, and I implore readers to help me, thank you all!

I'm tired of reading this kind of subject matter. Author, you might as well do the opposite. The master, the direct villain and protagonist, has all decent disciples, refer to the winery

Humanoid Teddy, you don't have a heroine, are you going to poison me to death?

It is said that the protagonist has accepted three villain disciples, but it is better to say that the three protagonists have worshiped an enemy as their master. For a long time, the protagonist of the master has little or no sense of existence. Is this the behind-the-scenes story of the group portrait? I always can't understand it.

After reading the comics, I came over to meet the author of the novel. It turns out, emmm, the author obviously has interesting introductions to various settings, but the result is that the book is always so boring. I originally wanted to criticize the comics for not being adapted into books, but now I can only say that it's no wonder they changed the books, otherwise the results would definitely be ruined. Be sure to remember the characteristics of your book writing. I haven't read this book, so I refer to that prison. The characteristics are witch + beast-eared girl + prisoner + jailer. It must be written around features. It's like writing about guns in your fantasy novel, but it has lost all its own characteristics. Also, your book has lost the main character?

After reading dozens of chapters, the main character has no sense of existence.

Is the protagonist a time traveler? How could he resist the disunity and suppress the various clans like Senju Hashirama when there were such conflicts among different clans?

It's very well written, and it's really rare to be able to write about people's inner states so thoroughly. Why is this, what is wrong, why is it wrong, what is the relative view, why is it right, how does the mentality change in the contradiction, and where does the inner state go after the change. Being able to write out this inheritance and transformation completely without any mistakes is enough to show the author's experience and thinking in life. I stayed up late for two days to read it. I hope you can work harder to write. I have given you two monthly passes 👍👍👍

The best book written by this author is probably the one about The Warden. It originally had good results and had a certain fan base, but in the end, he had to go to other websites, and then came back in despair, and then the writing got worse and worse.

The protagonist increases the strength of the three apprentices, and the three apprentices increase the strength of the world of immortality 🤭

A grassroots team, nothing

I think it looks pretty good, but why are there so many bad reviews? Are my tastes so unsociable? There are many comments that I want to refute, but I still forget it. However, I still like the setting of the protagonist's gun. My first impression is of the ebony and white ivory in Devil May Cry.

He is the best male protagonist I have ever seen in an Invincible novel. He is strong, wise, and responsible. It's this label of multiple heroines that gives me some support. Ah Jiu's emotional line only started in the later stages, which is basically equivalent to none. I hope that latecomers will pay attention to it.

Teacher author, would you consider writing a book similar to the Witch Warden next? I will subscribe hard🙂🙂

It's boring. We are so tired of protecting our own world. Half of it is extinct every five hundred years, and half of it is extinct every five hundred years. No happiness comes from it. Finally, hold a martial arts conference and choose representatives. Whoever loses will exterminate the representative. If there is no representative, half of them will start to be exterminated. Kill the men and kill the women Anyway, in my world, don't play if you are unhappy.

Will Li Daosheng be resurrected by the elixir in the end?

The logic of the story is very clear and the main line is clear. The disadvantage is that it is very flat as you write. As a group portrait, everything is under control, and the story is not very telling.

Playing with me, I recently ordered two books, all of which are free.

The writing style is indeed at a level that can be read, and the creativity is also very good. Unfortunately, the first few chapters are always a bit unclear and I can't figure out the topic, which is a bit discouraging.

Who is the male protagonist of this book, Xing Tian?

Please write more, it's a bit hasty.

If the person named He traveled from the future, would the person named He in the original timeline not be born in the future? If it could be born, it would be two hes, two sums? If he won't be born, doesn't that cut off the future? So he became a monkey? Why can't we change other people's timelines and cause and effect? ​​The original world still follows the established procedures. Turning on the lights doesn't mean that night will never come? It's really annoying to have this kind of time and space confusion. Rebirth is to cut off the life of the previous life, but start this life again but inherit the knowledge of the previous life. If this kind of future travels to the past, aren't there two you? This you will always stay in the present, and you will be born in the future. It is really annoying to do this.