I, Who Tortured the Readers, Were Knocked to the Ground by Them!

Rt, it was interesting at the beginning, but by chapter 10, the plot of the story has not been advanced, and the comic techniques and the like can be skipped. There are two major shortcomings: 1. The protagonist's image is very ordinary, not as good as the sensitive and paranoid boy, who uses his outward cheerfulness to hide his inner self; the blond girl becomes lively inexplicably, and is also inexplicably funny, which is very disconnected. 2. There are too many dialogues and narrations. It is impossible for paying readers to tolerate such water as you.

The new books during this period are all pretty good. After picking and choosing, you will decide which one is yours. This is my last monthly pass. Take it, JOJO!

It seems to have dropped in the end. Although the writing is terrible, it is difficult to reconcile. Although the outline is weird, it is difficult to reconcile.

I think the author's subjective thoughts on Fujimoto's work should not be put into each character. Everyone's feelings about the work are different, and the word "disgusting" makes people disgusted.

It's fast to do questions with formulas. I can take a template and put it on. I can't stand the scene that can be seen at a glance. I have seen too many of this type. If I had met you a few years ago, I would probably have been very happy watching it.

Who was almost asked to quit at the beginning? No matter how you look at it, I feel that the protagonist in the opening is very mentally retarded and mentally retarded. It's okay to make such remarks in public. It's too hasty and too early to force an intersection with the heroine. The title of the book tortures the readers, but I only saw the torture in the opening. I just experienced the joy of torturing the readers and then the heroine discovered that the protagonist is the author. How about you change the title of the book and call it: Just after torturing the readers in the opening, I was discovered by a hot girl in my class.

Well, if you can, please don't keep books! Especially the new book issue! If you think this book is good, please try to read the latest chapter! This is really important to me! Please! Ernie should! As long as everyone keeps reading, I will do anything! 😭😭😭😭

Isn't he still that kind of spiritual eunuch?😰

If the author doesn't want to be burdened, then don't insist on your nonsense that is not funny. A hell joke must first be a joke.

There are three known female protagonist potentials: Sato, Shiyori, and a childhood sweetheart. The problem is, the childhood sweethearts have had a showdown, and one of the heroines has been living with the protagonist for about a year, and the heroine takes care of all the cooking and housework. The other one is the protagonist's colleague, and she has recently exchanged feelings with the protagonist. I can't find any reason right now that can prevent any female protagonist from forcing the male protagonist to have sex and express her feelings, and Sato has a great chance of winning. But if you insist on dragging it out like this, the rhythm of the plot will be ruined. To borrow from the WB you copied, it seems that you have not reached the stage of stomachache, but in fact it has passed. It's just that you, the author, have been dragging the progress, trying to use some distant sister to be a heroine. But it's of no use. You have recently devoted a lot of space to the content of the transcript, which just proves that you need some time to consider how to develop the follow-up rhythm. You have no way to delay the plot with reasonable reasons, because who reads your book to read the transcript? Either cut the knot quickly and choose one character to describe the actions taken by the other people after establishing a relationship, similar to the one next door where you only read the book after getting married, or you can make the protagonist a eunuch Sometimes writing a book based on formulas is not so easy to fool with.

After reading the beginning, I jumped directly to the table of contents and read more than ten chapters. The plot and characters are so classic. I don't know how many W-words I have to speculate in stocks at a glance. I read it to the end at a glance, so read carefully.

Pre-made books are the crystallization of copywriting technology.

A common problem in novels about party strife is a violent death at the end. The writing power required for the ending of this type of novel is too high, and it is basically not something that an online author of this level can grasp. This also means that only the early and middle stages can be read.

I'm having a partisan fight, get out of the bookshelf

Could it be that the archives of old books have been exhausted?😅

In Chapter 80, I feel that 95% of daily interactions + 5% of literary works (Fien Fist White Photo Album, Goodbye Eri) can't continue, but it's too watery.

I don't have any problem with the female protagonists. If it's not original, just copy classic female characters from Japanese comics. It's just better to make the characters more similar. I don't have any objection to the text copy. Even the best is the text copy. If you are really original, I won't read it. But there is a problem with copying comics. It is too slow. For example, Yan Fist, even if the male protagonist is updated weekly, there is only one episode a week. How long does it take to complete a comic. The intensity of weekly updates has become so intense that many professional cartoonists are in a state of ecstasy. The plot time of a novel is usually only a few years, and the male protagonist can't copy much of it, which is not fun enough.

The plot is too cliche, and there are many female characters, but none of them are likable to me.

Stock trading articles can be buried directly.

Are all the comics behind Fujimotoshu? I've only seen the Chainsaw Man and Fire Fist episode, but I've never seen or heard of the others. If you want to disgust people, you have to cast a spell to fight back. At the height of the popularity, it started to disgust the whole world. I doubt that Akuchi has the protagonist's system.

Rt, I haven't dared to read it after reading a hundred chapters, can anyone tell me what it is?

Please make it clear whether you want to order or accept all, your title is obviously for all. If you do an order, then I'm sorry to block you and report it directly. Are you just trying to trick the harem party into pursuing it?

I remember seeing a book similar to this one in the next door 🐱 last year or the year before last. The author took a vacation for a long time and became a lazy dog ​​without writing. Then he came back to write after several months, at least five or six months. However, the next door 🐱 did not provide support for this kind of continued book. The results were not good, and the author felt that the results were not good.

The article sometimes says it's high school, and then it says it's like a college student who failed a class.

The plot is quite similar to a Japanese comic. Under normal circumstances, it is impossible for a normal person to question the author. What kind of crazy plot is this?

I feel that there is a certain market for 🍅, and even pretending to be dead will not have any impact 🙂🙂

It's not my cup of tea. After reading 30 chapters, my enthusiasm for reading has been wiped out. The light novel style is too heavy. I want to read the text but I keep getting stuck on daily life. If you want to write about daily life, just write about daily life. The key point is that you are not good at writing. Your poor writing skills make the daily characters and plots unpalatable. There are a lot of senior geeks in the paragraphs and comments making some inexplicable jokes. If I don't follow it, I feel like I am not on the same channel at all.

Alas, what should I say? I still thought it looked pretty at the time, but I didn't expect it to disappear as soon as I raised it.

I will be a fool if I subscribe to your book again