Martial Arts

After reading the introduction, I inexplicably thought of Wuhun, twin Wuhun, Wuhun mutation...

The typical way of writing ancient Internet articles is that I have a mouth, I have hands and feet, and I can't move even if I can't speak. In the beginning, the protagonist comes to the family to recognize his bride, but the family happens to be looking for a son-in-law. The protagonist doesn't have a long mouth, so he is led by the nose to go on a blind date.

The most abstract thing is to come back to recognize relatives and get to know each other through recruiting a son-in-law? If you like to hold back a sentence so much, why don't you just stop saying it and wait until you get married and have a baby. Is his father so unimportant? After traveling thousands of miles away, you will bury your bones and return to your family. When the job is done, you will first compare the names of poems for recruiting a son-in-law. You really don't care. Why would you send someone thousands of miles away if you don't care?😥

Good guy, I can write 10 chapters of a poem and I haven't finished it yet. Are you a Chinese teacher? Why don't you take Chinese classes here?

It's useless. The plot is too lame and watery. The protagonist is so awesome and all kinds of buffs are stacked up. The result is 250 and I'm drunk.

I have to write more than ten chapters to recognize a relative, but I don't dare to think about how boring it will be later.

The power system is like a life cluster, but a bunch of cases listed in the introduction are full of the smell of shit, firewood, rice, oil and salt. The last sentence about life experience directly reminds me of twenty years ago. The most outrageous thing is that it has not been reversed. This introduction is purely a side effect. Looking at the main text, it is still a slow-burning type, starting from the environment. The first chapter is about the portrait of the protagonist, which is extremely separated from this vulgar introduction.

The author is writing a romance novel for a female channel on a male channel. What is the first 20 chapters about?

The pacing is slow, and it takes more than a dozen pages to recognize a relative. .

The author must have switched from a female channel to a male channel, and his writing style is geared towards TV series.

The subject matter is good, but alas, the plot is as slow as 💩. The plot is protracted, tasteless, and a pity to abandon.

The writing is okay, but the content is stinky and long. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. ! ! ! !

The procrastination of finding a relative, just pretending that there is nothing wrong, and only 10 or so pictures, writing like this is doomed.

Reading this book is like archeology, the writing is very good, but the plot is disgusting. I think the male protagonist has the potential to become a bastard like "Tang San"

There are too many fake news in the discussion forum, and the first few chapters are very silly.

It's about time travel, and it's written like the ancient aboriginals. The more I write, the drier it gets.

There are too many useless plots and it's too procrastinating.

If you are looking for relatives, just look for relatives. If you insist on coming to the Poetry Competition

I no longer have the desire to read this pretense. I have written a poem and written more than ten chapters. Should the author adjust the rhythm?

Have you recovered well? Even cows and horses dare not rest like this

I'm very curious if the author wants to learn from me, like I came to see Bai Yujing today, to use his own writing style to write against the odds and get good grades. I feel like this after reading three chapters.

Good guy, I cut it. I came back from the hospital before and you didn't update it. I think it was pretty good.

The writing is wrong

Chapter 20 doesn't even see the development of the fighting realm. The writing is quite delicate, but it's too long.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I still don't know what the plot is. But the writing is good and has the style of an old-school martial arts novel.

The content and themes are quite good, but the more they become, the less they become.

Author, when will it be updated? It's really not good enough 😄😄😄

I feel like it's well written, but I haven't seen it before. Maybe it's written too little before. The setting is relatively novel and the plot is fine, but it's just too little.

The plot felt a bit dragging. At the beginning, it was too long. The plot was good and I had the desire to continue reading, but it was a bit dragging.

Eunuchs are normal. The overall promotion path is contrary to what they do. The protagonist's series of actions are full of a sense of cutting. Others will naturally notice that this is a way to nourish themselves. So in this world view, how many people will remain silent and let them do whatever they want?