Three Kingdoms: People Are in Xuzhou, Rations Start

This book has a semi-white and semi-godlike feel. The out-of-the-box dialogue and some small details are not handled well. Also, the main character can be out of character when pretending, and the exaggerated expressions are like a model drama (the main character told Xu Kang, first cried, and then he was directly called sir, and then stopped being miserable, and the main character After making a battle plan, Liu Bei felt that he needed to do his best to protect the people. The protagonist just bowed to him, his eyes were red, his expression was too strong, and it was too embarrassing to watch.) However, some historical research is quite reliable, so it looks strange to me. If it is polished, it may have better performance.

There's something a little guilty about it, just like starting your own company, feeling like you can't be the boss, and then there's so much foreshadowing, so much consideration, it's really uncomfortable to watch.

Okay, but I read Romance of the Three Kingdoms as a history book for SB.

After capturing Cao Cao's family members, as the protagonist's victim from Xuzhou, all the male members of Cao Cao's family can be executed to create a Jingguan. Put all the women into the camp and bring them back to Xuzhou to let the people of Xuzhou line up and play. If not killed, all the men will be castrated. You can also cut off both hamstrings and throw them all to Cao Cao. Next time you face Cao Cao, you can also say to Cao Cao: Your wives are so rich, Cao Cao will be so angry that he will vomit blood.

It was a good job to defeat Cao Cao with an empty city at the beginning; Dian Wei single-handedly killed hundreds of sword and shield soldiers, so fierce; this book has already been conferred as a god, that's all. I am Shennong, and I am the spokesperson for this book

Cao Cao massacred Xuzhou and then ambushed Cao Song.

This book has returned to the old route of the game books from twenty years ago. When writing about the Three Kingdoms, the tasks should not be written as containers for soldiers, operating tools, and puppets of the protagonists. Under the situation, you can use human capabilities to do things. What the protagonist can and cannot do can only be done if the protagonist gives you a golden finger. Otherwise, there will be a situation where Beibei is caring to you and you are playing tricks with Beibei. Do you really think the ancients and readers are stupid?

A bunch of docile dialogue looks so tiring. It's not what it used to be. It would be nice to have more modern words. Everyone just knows what it means. I always ask you to write a serious Chronicle of the Three Kingdoms. See if he can finish it.

Cao Cao basically can't stay any longer. Cao Cao, the young man in the city, is relying on cannibalism. As time goes by, his subordinates will eat human flesh every day and they will become chaotic. He probably has to go to Luoyang.

Yes, up to this point, it is very good. I will continue to pay attention and collect it.

After Lu Bu successfully welcomed Emperor Xian, the authorities gave Cao Cao the title of rebel, and Cao Cao was unable to overturn the situation.

Xuzhou is still okay now. If you run it well, at least you won't have Lu Bu steal your home, or even eat Lu Bu, and then destroy Yuan Shu and take Jiangdong.

As the saying goes, a true warrior is not afraid of a bleak life...! It's just that choosing Cao Cao is not a wise man's choice. Choosing Cao means a narrow escape from death and a ten thousand death penalty. Moreover, for those who traveled through time, the chance of usurping Cao Cao was too slim... You must live long enough to survive three generations of Cao Cao. You must master the skill of forbearance. You should be extremely good at pretending to be the third grandson. The Sima family couldn't be more right to usurp the throne. Three generations after Cao Cao, there were others who usurped the throne without Sima. After all, the Cao family is really worthy and established. How can the founder have no descendants?

Xu Chu came over if you need it. This Dianwei threat is too big

I think the author can write the assistant Liu Bei into the introduction of the novel, so as to avoid people always saying this and that.

No, historically Liu Bei had a son named Liu Feng in Xuzhou. He was lost during the Lu Bu Rebellion.

First order, I will be your most loyal fan

In fact, the suggestions I made before may not be clear. The first is the sense of relaxation. For example, when Lu Bu stirs up trouble later, Guan Yu's eyes turn red, and the protagonist jumps up and covers his mouth. Have you really read this sentence yourself, the author? Do you think your book about the Three Kingdoms is in line with serious history? How can a famous person jump up and cover his teammates' mouths during a conversation? This emotional intelligence is really low-level. No matter how good the relationship is, it means not treating people as people at the negotiating table. I don't think college students can do it, because my sister can't do it in elementary school. It's too exaggerated, and it directly cleans up the atmosphere of serious history and makes a show. The second thing is that the protagonist is very powerful at what he does, but the protagonist thinks that he is an ordinary person. Do you really think he is ordinary when 30,000 yuan is compared with 100,000 yuan? At this time, Lu Zhi, Huangfu Chong had a higher record than the protagonist, and the remaining one fought with the regular army? Aren't they all suppressing bandits? The protagonist was a military prodigy in the world, an unparalleled figure in that era, but the excitement was not revealed, and the protagonist's mentality did not change (it is better to feel that he has strength). Later, the protagonist felt that he had no strength and went to destroy Cao Cao. The wise general was written as a wise general, and the strategist was written as a strategist. The hodgepodge protagonist also felt that he was ordinary and the worst failure. The third is that the quote is from the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, but the writing has a sense of romance. For example, the protagonist pretends to cry and actually cries. The novelization is there, but the sense of satisfaction is not there. It is unpalatable to both sides (the sense of satisfaction in studying history is farming, and the sense of satisfaction in ordinary history is victory in battles. The protagonists have but It's not very satisfying.) In fact, I personally think that if it is the author's first book, it's really nothing. It's just my suggestion. You can delete it, because the research is indeed good, and the beginning of the Three Kingdoms is also well arranged, but the writing and detail processing are terrible, otherwise I would not write a long story.

If we don't develop technology and just rely on foresight, can Liu Bei unify the world?