I Have No Choice but to Become the Pirate King.

If you meet a random gangster, he will be domineering, or will he be a swordsman?

The protagonist dares to go out and wander around even though he is so picky?

Too many typos? So many typos? Was it written by a real person?

The beginning is dull. If you write it like this, it will be written that the navy has already known about the protagonist's family, and then sent the navy to arrest them. The parents had known that this day would come, and left a backup plan to escape, but the village was destroyed, so the protagonist's mentality began to change, and he began to work hard to become stronger and then take revenge on the world. There are many contradictions.

It's very well written. I'll borrow a treasure from Pirates' Ascension to the Top.

Very good subject matter, keep it up!

If you are afraid of being chased by Garp, you won't dare to fly. If you are so cowardly, you shouldn't have a domineering look, right?

It gives me a headache when I look at it. Didn't you read it yourself after the author wrote it? There are a lot of typos and sentence fragmentation problems. I saw the problems mentioned in last year's comments and they haven't been corrected yet 😒