Starting Out as a Traveling Peddler on the Path to Immortality

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. . . There is no merit in having karma, right? You can only be killed but not kill, right? There is no reward for doing good things in love, and you will be wanted just because you killed a few evil people!

Time traveler, in the year of famine, I picked up a beautiful girl from a poor family on the roadside with better skin than a rich family. After being together for a month, it became a sadomasochistic love affair. This...

2 Little poisonous people, 1 a servant with dirty hands and feet trained to be a housekeeper (not to mention driven away, it can be marginalized) 2 and the eldest son conspired with the other one, it is completely unnecessary. This conflict point is a bit tricky to write.

To put it bluntly, I understand that killing people has karma, but it's hard for me to understand how to eliminate evil without blessing. An honest person deserves to be bullied, so why can't he resist?

After eating, I commented that the dumplings were hard and not to my liking.

I don't know if the author has ever thought about why the protagonists of current novels are mainly time-travelling. I think the main reason is that readers have a strong sense of substitution and can easily substitute themselves into the story and become immersed in the story. But in the first chapter of your book, there is no foreshadowing. You just talk about how infatuated the protagonist is with his wife in one sentence. Forget it if he is an indigenous protagonist, but he is still a time traveler...

Most of Qingjie is good, but that girl is extremely poisonous. You can watch it for free at the moment. It depends on the situation later. If it doesn't work, just give it up and don't subscribe.

In recent chapters, the protagonist has been in two lives, so he doesn't need to participate in this kind of battle of spirits. The author has changed people to write it, but it's just to improve the word count. Writing like this is a waste of martial arts, and it doesn't look good.

The author arranges a fox demon grand prize for the protagonist who licks the dog. Sooner or later, everything will be lost if he wins the prize.