Douluo: from the Rusty Spear to the Emperor-Killing Battle Spear

I couldn't bear it until I finished reading one chapter, and I just woke up. I'm six years old, and my spear is 2.7 Meters tall. I didn't check the information very well. Ji Juechen's martial spirit is a sword, but later he integrated the martial spirit into the meteorite iron. You want to say that his martial spirit is meteorite iron.

It's a good start, and it's also creative to upgrade the martial soul by beating it yourself. The first soul ring is a poisonous pit. Many people jumped into it. It is obvious that you have fallen into the pit. Find a teacher with whom you have no friendship and get a hundred-year soul ring. . . . If you can make iron, you can save the money and give it to the teacher, or you can describe the relationship with the teacher well, or even create your own protagonist's father to have a relationship with him or something. A rather thin investment.

The orphan has no power to protect him and then directly starts to work on the second soul ring of a thousand years old. Why do you ask me to vote for you🤲

Zhu Zhuqing left Shrek inexplicably, and the protagonist of the fanfic came. Zhu Zhuqing had to have a conflict with Dai Mubai, and then the protagonist came to save the beauty with a wave of heroes 😒

They actually auctioned off the attached soul bones! I feel like the author's IQ has been ignored!

The power of my thinking: Even if what I awaken is garbage, as long as I read enough novels, as long as there is a treasure in it that is slightly similar to the garbage I awakened, then this garbage will become awesome.

Emperor Yu's weapons are in Douluo Universe? Isn't this killing a chicken with a bull's knife? 😐

🤫Another twenty chapters are on the shelves

Born to fight. Till death. Too medium and spicy. I can't accept it. Woohoo. I'm no longer that teenage kid

Isn't it the Douluo Dalu fan fiction, in addition to looking for women, you are also looking for women? And you were an adult before time travel, and you liked children. Loli is so perverted, could it be that you are from the second dimension?

Dugu Yan doesn't want to eat? The rich woman is hungry for food. This is the shortcut in life.

Holy shit, 26 photos were put on the shelves, that's awesome

In the Douluo World fan framework, there is no need to make the name of the martial spirit so cool and shocking. Even if it is a rusty iron spear, there are many development directions. Just increase the life of the spirit ring. This is very interesting. If the martial soul keeps evolving, there will be very few interesting things and it will be difficult to leave an impression on the readers.

Garbage should stay in the trash can. It's disgusting and disgusting. It's a bit like a primary school student's work.

It is better to add Qian Renxue as the heroine. Although it is very cliché, from a utilitarian point of view, she can become a first-level god. Her talent is far better than Shui Bing'er and others. Unless you force Shui Bing'er to inherit the title of Ice God, otherwise, both talent and background are far behind.

The heaven-defying martial soul is broken, five times a day. Have you seen Dou Yi?

I'm sorry to say this, but there are constant minor problems in the first chapter. The author still has a lot of room for improvement.

Can Qian Renxue be added as the heroine? The author is big

Where is the author? Update, update, update.

Wuhun creates his own soul skills

Youhai Treasure Bag stores Horcruxes, Ruyi Treasure Bag stores Horcruxes