Looking for the Road to Immortality in Zhu Xian

There are very few protagonist roles, and the whole writing revolves around Zhang Xiaofan

You can feel the author's sincerity and seriousness from the content, but the writing technique is very poor. An online novel contains interludes, flashbacks, and random switching of the protagonist's vision, making it confusing to read. There is too much emphasis on Zhang Xiaofan. Who is the protagonist in this article?

Are you sure this is still about Zhu Xian? Later

As long as the heroine is not Baguio, she can never figure out what's so good about the demon cult monsters.

I hope this is a fanfic where Fanxue can be together

As the title states, I have seen 28 chapters so far. I haven't calculated them in detail, but at least one-third of the chapters are about unknown characters. Unknown characters and interspersed plots constantly interrupt the coherence of the main plot. For example, the scene where an unknown woman sneaked into Dazhu Peak and took the blood-devouring bead from Zhang Xiaofan appeared abruptly, without beginning or end, and then the reader was asked to guess whether the bead was taken away. The overall writing style is actually good, but the handling of the plot makes me feel that it is a big burden to understand this story. Personally, what I hate the most is the plot of "there are several inexplicable people in an inexplicable place, discussing inexplicable matters with each other", so I gave up.

The writing is too messy, with a hammer here and there and a stick here and there.

Is it okay to update once a day?