I Have Come Today to See White Jade Capital

Those with a history of eunuch-like behavior should definitely avoid this.

If this book ended around 500 or 600 chapters, it would definitely be a masterpiece. Here's a small suggestion for the author. 1. Don't suppress your strength. Maintain the current level of advancement. The protagonist's character is already very clear: he hates evil and wants to change the world. But if he stays at a low to mid-level for too long, all his words will just be empty talk.

The writing style is actually quite good, and the action details are fine. However, the overall logic, plot twists, and narrative are really dragging. The characters are all incredibly capable, but so far, all I see are Yingying's scheming, her dirty tricks, and sordid things. Personally, I found this too tiring for the early stages of the story.

This is the first novel by this author that I've read, and it's the type I like. The writing style is on par with those of established authors. Many of their works suffer from a weak ending, so I hope this novel can maintain its current quality and even improve with each passing year. This is my first time writing a review. Keep up the good work, author!

I've almost caught up to the latest chapter, so let me talk about the current issues. The first problem is the increasing number of typos, which makes the reading experience very poor. There are almost four or five typos in every chapter, and sometimes they even cause misunderstandings. Secondly, the author seems to have forgotten the original settings.

Listen to me, Chen Zhi'an was implicated by a powerful family and severely injured, falling into a coma. The main character has officially changed to Chen Shuijun!!! Didn't you want to write a wish-fulfillment story? But Chen Zhian was just a weakling when he was at the first level of the Innate Realm!

To put it bluntly, if the protagonist's father hadn't possessed high cultivation and had remained in decline for over a decade, then this family would have actually made the right choice. Their rival in love would be thriving, possessing both high cultivation and a powerful position, while the protagonist himself would have been wasting his life for over ten years and unable to even raise a child properly. What family would want their daughter to marry such a person?

Before I knew it, I couldn't keep reading. The writing style is very mature, but the way the characters try to show off is also very old-fashioned. There aren't enough hooks, and the recent plot has been too dull. The main storyline feels unclear, and the attempts to show off are meaningless.

I just don't understand. They write really well, and their grades aren't bad either, so why do they always have to abandon their work?

The pacing is completely messed up, and so is the combat. Players are forced to participate in high-level battles from the lowest level, and since this isn't a political game and there's no background to speak of, they often have to fight directly against opponents several levels higher.