I Have Come Today to See White Jade Capital

As expected, those who have a history of being eunuchs still need to avoid lightning.

If this book ends with about five or six hundred chapters, it will be a masterpiece. A few suggestions for the author 1. Don't stress your strength and maintain the current upgrade speed. The character of the protagonist of this book is already very obvious. He hates evil and wants to change the world. But if you stay at the middle and low levels for a long time, all the protagonist's speeches are just empty words, and you will easily suffer from literary youth syndrome. Most book friends will also think that the content is very watery. After a period of time, it is easy to become a eunuch. 2. I think we can focus on the protagonist after he reaches a higher level. Whether it is national war, reforming the system, or cultivating forces, we can write a lot about it. But this depends on the author's subsequent plot settings. The reason why I started talking about masterpieces, not masterpieces, is the key. Personally, I feel that this is also the gap between many ordinary authors and great gods. Many cool articles say that the author cannot control the story later and can only constantly use mechanical deities to cause trouble for the protagonist. The protagonist is always a weak and challenger. If the follow-up writing is good, it will undoubtedly be a masterpiece 3. It is recommended not to change the map, it is time to end. There are no immortals in the world of this book. The genre is more refreshing, and the theme is also about changing the world. It is really not suitable for a long book

This book is actually well written, and there are no issues with the details of the action. But the overall logic and plot twists, including the narrative, are really sloppy, and the characters are each better written than the last, but at the moment, I see all the plot surrounding it as these scheming, dirty things. In fact, I personally feel that this is too tiring for the beginning of the story. Yes, the feeling of reading this book is very strange. It feels like I am struggling in the mud from the beginning. It seems that there are many worlds described in the book, but the protagonist seems to be trapped all the time. I hope you can see something different if you continue reading.

This is the first novel I have read by the author. It is my favorite type, and the writing style is not inferior to those of famous writers. A common problem with many works is that they start at the beginning and end at the end. I hope this novel can maintain its current level or even get better and better as it gets written. This is my first time writing a review, please come on!

I have almost caught up with the latest chapter, so let's talk about the current problem The first point is that there are more and more typos, which makes the reading experience very bad. Almost every chapter has four or five words, and sometimes it causes misunderstandings The second point is that the author has forgotten his own settings. For example, the young tiger number one was said to be the Daqian Prince at first, but later became the Thirteenth Prince. It has not been changed until now. Other book friends can go and read it. I thought the Thirteenth Prince was the Prince, but later it was said that he was the Prince. Two different people The third point is that the plot is long and lengthy, the most obvious one is the part where the protagonist's father takes his mother out of Xuantianjing on the mountain When I watched it, I felt it was so long. Why did it take so long? I started with Xie Wugu and Si Yuan. Then he killed Xie Wujuan, then Xie Maoxing came, then came the Mounted Whale Monument, and then came the other six surnames, and then there was a section in the middle where the protagonist gave the sword, and then another section. More than a hundred chapters, all in Xuantianjing, just competing with the aristocratic family, there are things like Yun Ting in the middle, but the essence is the same The fourth point, the plot is too simple, making people boring. As mentioned above, the plot is lengthy, which makes people feel sad. I felt bored There were too few scenes related to Bai Yujing, I thought they were like those in Secret, but it turned out that there were too few scenes related to Bai Yujing. The other Bai Yujing people only had more scenes when Lin Ting came, but it was too late Then, there was no transition, no emotional line, Ling Princess Long is the most popular, but it was only a little bit more when she first entered, and then she started to advance in the latest chapter. The middle part seemed boring. There was also Shang Qiu, and there was no follow-up. Shen Haohao disappeared, and the previous Xu Xiyue didn't have any follow-up either. Some people may say I'm a stud, but what I want is not necessarily a love line to open a harem. You have to show me something different besides the main plot and the struggle between the aristocratic families. Just tell me your own feelings, and I will give you a last resort. I don't represent other book friends, it's just my personal opinion.

Listen to me, Chen Zhi'an held the seal and was plotted by a noble family to be seriously injured and fell into a coma. The protagonist has officially been replaced by Chen Shuijun! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't you want to write cool articles? But what a noob Chen Zhi'an was when he was born with level 1!

To put it bluntly, if the protagonist's father has not been highly educated and has been decadent for more than ten years, then this family has really done something right. His love rival is soaring, his cultivation is great, and his status is great. As for you, you have been so useless for more than ten years, and you can't raise him well. Who would want a girl to marry such a person?

Unknowingly, I can't stand it anymore. The writing is very sophisticated, but the pretentiousness is also very cliched. There are not enough hooks. The recent plot is too boring. I feel that the main line is unclear and the pretense is pointless.

I just don't understand. Your writing is pretty good, and your grades aren't bad. Why do you keep asking for eunuchs?

The rhythm is completely broken, and so is the force. I started to participate in high-level struggles from the lowest level, but it is not a political novel, and I have no background. Many times I have to go into battle in person. The better the level, the more difficult it is to fight. Buff has now developed into a situation where you shoot a bunch of buffs before starting a battle and then kill them with a single blow (are you playing crpg here!)? There are no changes in supernatural powers or martial arts skills. It is purely against waves, and it is just one wave