After Rebirth, You Should Fall in Love

This kind of local dialect title is not recommended to be used frequently. It doesn't look very good, especially when listening to books.

I feel that his relationship with Aunt Luo is too close. Write less about it and make him a transparent person. Especially in one chapter, the male protagonist asked the second uncle if he liked Aunt Luo, and the second uncle said he was not interested. To be honest, this section is a little depressing. It is written as if his second uncle can win it as long as he is interested. Also, what is the care mentioned above? Is it simply asking if there are any problems in life? Did you enter the dormitory? This is a harem story, so don't spend time describing an insignificant male supporting character, and he is just a relative of the male protagonist. I hope the author will think carefully and add some clarification to the plot. The second uncle usually only asks about his life situation. Aunt Luo is just grateful to the second uncle and so on. She has never been attracted to a man and has never had physical contact with any man. Now I am only subscribing to your book. The automatic subscription is turned on, and the monthly recommendation votes will only be voted for you. The reason is that I think the last book did a good job in lightning protection. I hope that your book will continue the advantages of the previous book. In fact, I almost never invest in new books, because I am afraid of sudden thunderstorms and the investment will be wasted. Now I trust you based on the last book. I hope the author sees it.

I've read a few chapters and it seems good, I hope it doesn't write too many heroines. There are three or four that are almost enough. Too much is actually not good

Will Aunt Luo take it? If not, she will leave. . .

The male protagonist talks too densely, it's so tiring to watch

There is also the description that the fat man is a beautiful woman. It is useless and will only increase the sense of separation. It is extremely rare for fat people to be good-looking. Most people have never seen it in their lives and there is no specific reference. So you don't care about the description. It's useless to write about how beautiful her facial features are and how appropriate it is. The biggest impression is that she is fat. The first impression that comes to mind is definitely those ugly fat people I have seen in reality. This is too seriously separated from your description and has a great impact on the senses of this book.

The author dares to write it, maybe it will be banned someday hahaha.

This is one of my favorite urban novels recently, and I think it's really good.

Author, you have arranged too many female characters. The male protagonist is too busy. High school female classmate Ye Zi, counselor, Xiao Lu, Han, landlady, Jiang Xin, Yu Qian, Lu Wei, and his wife. I could have written daily for a long time. A hammer in the east, a mallet in the west. The character creation is okay. I have seen more than 100 pictures so far. I don't know how you arrange the Shura field in the later period.

Update soon! !

I originally wanted to read the author's old book, but I got a lot of criticism, so I stopped reading it and will wait for this update 😁

This book has a bad start. I don't like it. It's not as good as before. I'll see if there's any reversal. If not, I'll abandon it. It's like licking a dog.

I hope that the harem will not include any low-looking female partners, as was the case in the last book. But come on, author, you will definitely support it if you order for the first time!

I borrowed Guibao to promote a book, "Happiness God", also known as "I feel happy and I can make money continuously". You can get a reward of 5,000 for making a short video and laughing, 8,000 for winning a game, and 10,000 for admiring a beautiful woman... On the left, he hugs his cute and cute little apprentice, and on his right, he hugs a female Chinese medicine doctor who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. From then on, Li Qi's wonderful life has quietly arrived! [Sorry for disturbing you, please contact me to delete]

The previous one was too studly, but this one is really not so much.

I haven't read the two hundred chapters yet. Where is my aunt's progress?

You can write more about Aunt Yun, there are too many female characters, it's boring

The author is from Beijing? Is it from somewhere in the north? Isn't this protagonist from Sichuan? Why does he always belong to men? I can't stand it.

Have 759 and 762 been deleted?